Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 2 years ago

Why maan doing this and making geet cry and upset.hope maan realise his mistake soon.


Update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 96 

Shocking update !! 

Maan ‘s behaviour is becoming worse & he is falling deeper into his pit , shutting out everyone including geet ...., it seems like he is in self destruction mode

& geet is trying her best to help to no avail 

Maan is actually being quite hurtful to geet b:c he believes she will leave him like everyone else 

Ending was shocking where geet confronted maan , it was needed but not sure how he will respond . 

Thank you for updating di 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 97 

Such a tense 😬 update !! 

Geet is all riled up & spitting fire 🔥 

But nothing seems to effect maan now 

It seems like he has barricaded all his emotions b/c he has lost everyone that he has loved 

& now he is afraid that he will lose geet too 

So he is trying to boot her out of his life b/c he cannot tolerate anymore heartache 

Hoping that geet does not leave 

B/c she is his only hope 

& worried about the gun 

Maan is not in the right frame of mind 

Di thank you so much for updating 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Maan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ok this is now getting more painful than ever... Everything is going down hill for Geet... Is Maan really acting up on what he said to her the other day...? When she was not ready to except him... He was all persuasive on her and now he's pushing her away when she wants to be with him... 🥺 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh my!

Why this tension!

Hope things will improve for Maan and Geet.

Can't say much now..

Just being a reader for a while!


Thanks for the PM..

Do update soon!

Will be waiting!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 98

 

G- Just know you ended this

 

Geet finally has enough

 

She hurries to leave

 

Wo aur kya keh yaa kar degi she is afraid now

 

Kaafi kuch ant-shant keh diya hai usne

 

++++++++

 

Geet goes back to Lisa’s place

 

Lisa ke paas jaake she breaks her tear dam

 

She cries and tells Lisa ki - ye hua, ye kaha, wo kaha, Maan aisa hai, waisa hai

 

G- He never cared

 

G-She is the stupid one from starting to believe in him at all

 

G- So stupid

 

Tabhi hospital se call aata hai for some emergency case and she leaves

 

++++++++

 

She had been in the hospital for 2 days

 

17 hours of surgery

 

Geet is emotionally, physically, and mentally exhausted

 

Raat ke 2 baj gaye hain

 

She is in zombie mode

 

She books a cab to home without realizing ki home mein toh Maan ke ghar ka address diya hai

 

Cab wala bhi pohoncha deta hai

 

She in her auto bot mode goes, puts the entry code, and gets in

 

+++++++

 

Maan ghar pe aaya around 3 baje toh dekha ki Geet bed pe so rahi hai comfortably

 

He frowns wondering whether he is hallucinating

 

Geet toh mast so rahi hai, unbothered

 

Maan Geet ko blanket uda deta hai

 

AC chala deta hai

 

Light off karke, door band karka chala jaata hai living room mein

 

He doesn’t know what to think

 

He just thinks that Geet apni marzi se gayi thi, apni marzi se aayi hai

 

++++++

 

Next day Geet uthi aaram se

 

Yawning

 

Achi neend aayi

 

Aas-paas dekha

 

Emm…apne bed hai…thoda aur so sakti hai

 

Goes back to sleep

 

Then dheere dheere uske brain ko register hua

 

Kahan hai?

 

Kiske ghar pe hain?

 

Oh my God! Yeh to Maan ka ghar hai

 

She gets up with a start

 

She wonders, main yahan pohonchi kaise , mujhe toh Lisa ke ghar jaana tha

 

Uff! Jhali Geet!

 

She curses herself

 

She needs to change her habits

 

Lagta hai Maan ghar pe nahi hai…acha hai…usko pata chalta ki main yahan raat ko aayi thi toh pata nahi kya hota

 

Geet tu toh aaj bach gayi. Phir yeh galti mat karna

 

She looks at the watch and realizes ki super late ho raha hai, ab Lisa ke ghar jaake phir change karke hospital gai toh bohot late ho jayega

 

She thinks ki yahin freshen up hoke, yahan kuch kapde pade hain…yahin se hi hospital chali jaayegi

 

++++++

 

Geet barges into the bathroom


Maan was taking a shower

 

Geet realizes ki Maan ghar pe hi hai…and slowly all the realizations and all the shades of emotions crept in

 

Geet ka toh pura system hang hoke phir se reboot ho gaya

 

Maan was also stuck in the same position seeing Geet barge in like that

 

Shower curtain bhi transparent tha

 

Shower curtain pehle opaque tha….fir as Geet had moved in Maan changed it to transparent

 

Aaj Geet ne fayda utha liya

 

Maan noticed Geet’s slight smirk/laugh/smug smile also

 

He raises his eyebrow to hide his embracement

 

She comes in the bathroom

 

Walks to the washbasin, shamelessly looking at Maan

 

Picks up a spare toothbrush

 

Starts brushing her teeth

 

Geet wonders maybe it's a dream, maybe not

 

But surely last time she will get to look at this fine specimen...Toh dekh lo

 

Looking at Maan in shower dripping water. Is the only positive thing to happen to her in a long time

 

Nobody can take that positive thing away from her

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Maan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.


Exactly, just turning it around like she is dumping him.

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Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 97 

Such a tense 😬 update !! 

Geet is all riled up & spitting fire 🔥 

But nothing seems to effect maan now 

It seems like he has barricaded all his emotions b/c he has lost everyone that he has loved 

& now he is afraid that he will lose geet too 

So he is trying to boot her out of his life b/c he cannot tolerate anymore heartache 

Hoping that geet does not leave 

B/c she is his only hope 

& worried about the gun 

Maan is not in the right frame of mind 

Di thank you so much for updating 🤗


Every word was so apt...yes yes & yes to everything❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the update


Part 97

Dramatic update.... wonderfully written

Geet's outburst was justified....

oh no Maan is unaffected!

I am upset with Maan....

how can he just let her leave?

Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression

hope he realises before its too late


update when you can, thanks


Exactly: Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression