Why maan doing this and making geet cry and upset.hope maan realise his mistake soon.
Update soon
Why maan doing this and making geet cry and upset.hope maan realise his mistake soon.
Update soon
Part 96
Shocking update !!
Maan ‘s behaviour is becoming worse & he is falling deeper into his pit , shutting out everyone including geet ...., it seems like he is in self destruction mode
& geet is trying her best to help to no avail
Maan is actually being quite hurtful to geet b:c he believes she will leave him like everyone else
Ending was shocking where geet confronted maan , it was needed but not sure how he will respond .
Thank you for updating di 🤗
Part 97
Such a tense 😬 update !!
Geet is all riled up & spitting fire 🔥
But nothing seems to effect maan now
It seems like he has barricaded all his emotions b/c he has lost everyone that he has loved
& now he is afraid that he will lose geet too
So he is trying to boot her out of his life b/c he cannot tolerate anymore heartache
Hoping that geet does not leave
B/c she is his only hope
& worried about the gun
Maan is not in the right frame of mind
Di thank you so much for updating 🤗
Maan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.
Ok this is now getting more painful than ever... Everything is going down hill for Geet... Is Maan really acting up on what he said to her the other day...? When she was not ready to except him... He was all persuasive on her and now he's pushing her away when she wants to be with him... 🥺
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Oh my!
Why this tension!
Hope things will improve for Maan and Geet.
Can't say much now..
Just being a reader for a while!
Thanks for the PM..
Do update soon!
Will be waiting!
Part 98
G- Just know you ended this
Geet finally has enough
She hurries to leave
Wo aur kya keh yaa kar degi she is afraid now
Kaafi kuch ant-shant keh diya hai usne
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Geet goes back to Lisa’s place
Lisa ke paas jaake she breaks her tear dam
She cries and tells Lisa ki - ye hua, ye kaha, wo kaha, Maan aisa hai, waisa hai
G- He never cared
G-She is the stupid one from starting to believe in him at all
G- So stupid
Tabhi hospital se call aata hai for some emergency case and she leaves
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She had been in the hospital for 2 days
17 hours of surgery
Geet is emotionally, physically, and mentally exhausted
Raat ke 2 baj gaye hain
She is in zombie mode
She books a cab to home without realizing ki home mein toh Maan ke ghar ka address diya hai
Cab wala bhi pohoncha deta hai
She in her auto bot mode goes, puts the entry code, and gets in
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Maan ghar pe aaya around 3 baje toh dekha ki Geet bed pe so rahi hai comfortably
He frowns wondering whether he is hallucinating
Geet toh mast so rahi hai, unbothered
Maan Geet ko blanket uda deta hai
AC chala deta hai
Light off karke, door band karka chala jaata hai living room mein
He doesn’t know what to think
He just thinks that Geet apni marzi se gayi thi, apni marzi se aayi hai
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Next day Geet uthi aaram se
Yawning
Achi neend aayi
Aas-paas dekha
Emm…apne bed hai…thoda aur so sakti hai
Goes back to sleep
Then dheere dheere uske brain ko register hua
Kahan hai?
Kiske ghar pe hain?
Oh my God! Yeh to Maan ka ghar hai
She gets up with a start
She wonders, main yahan pohonchi kaise , mujhe toh Lisa ke ghar jaana tha
Uff! Jhali Geet!
She curses herself
She needs to change her habits
Lagta hai Maan ghar pe nahi hai…acha hai…usko pata chalta ki main yahan raat ko aayi thi toh pata nahi kya hota
Geet tu toh aaj bach gayi. Phir yeh galti mat karna
She looks at the watch and realizes ki super late ho raha hai, ab Lisa ke ghar jaake phir change karke hospital gai toh bohot late ho jayega
She thinks ki yahin freshen up hoke, yahan kuch kapde pade hain…yahin se hi hospital chali jaayegi
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Geet barges into the bathroom
Maan was taking a shower
Geet realizes ki Maan ghar pe hi hai…and slowly all the realizations and all the shades of emotions crept in
Geet ka toh pura system hang hoke phir se reboot ho gaya
Maan was also stuck in the same position seeing Geet barge in like that
Shower curtain bhi transparent tha
Shower curtain pehle opaque tha….fir as Geet had moved in Maan changed it to transparent
Aaj Geet ne fayda utha liya
Maan noticed Geet’s slight smirk/laugh/smug smile also
He raises his eyebrow to hide his embracement
She comes in the bathroom
Walks to the washbasin, shamelessly looking at Maan
Picks up a spare toothbrush
Starts brushing her teeth
Geet wonders maybe it's a dream, maybe not
But surely last time she will get to look at this fine specimen...Toh dekh lo
Looking at Maan in shower dripping water. Is the only positive thing to happen to her in a long time
Nobody can take that positive thing away from her
Originally posted by: coderladyMaan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.
Exactly, just turning it around like she is dumping him.
Originally posted by: CreampuffPart 97
Such a tense 😬 update !!
Geet is all riled up & spitting fire 🔥
But nothing seems to effect maan now
It seems like he has barricaded all his emotions b/c he has lost everyone that he has loved
& now he is afraid that he will lose geet too
So he is trying to boot her out of his life b/c he cannot tolerate anymore heartache
Hoping that geet does not leave
B/c she is his only hope
& worried about the gun
Maan is not in the right frame of mind
Di thank you so much for updating 🤗
Every word was so apt...yes yes & yes to everything❤️
Originally posted by: khwaishfanthanks for the update
Part 97
Dramatic update.... wonderfully written
Geet's outburst was justified....
oh no Maan is unaffected!
I am upset with Maan....
how can he just let her leave?
Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression
hope he realises before its too late
update when you can, thanks
Exactly: Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression
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