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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ok this is now getting more painful than ever... Everything is going down hill for Geet... Is Maan really acting up on what he said to her the other day...? When she was not ready to except him... He was all persuasive on her and now he's pushing her away when she wants to be with him... 🥺

🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my!

Why this tension!

Hope things will improve for Maan and Geet.

Can't say much now..

Just being a reader for a while!


Thanks for the PM..

Do update soon!

Will be waiting!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 98

G- Just know you ended this

Geet finally has enough

She hurries to leave

Wo aur kya keh yaa kar degi she is afraid now

Kaafi kuch ant-shant keh diya hai usne

++++++++

Geet goes back to Lisa’s place

Lisa ke paas jaake she breaks her tear dam

She cries and tells Lisa ki - ye hua, ye kaha, wo kaha, Maan aisa hai, waisa hai

G- He never cared

G-She is the stupid one from starting to believe in him at all

G- So stupid

Tabhi hospital se call aata hai for some emergency case and she leaves

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She had been in the hospital for 2 days

17 hours of surgery

Geet is emotionally, physically, and mentally exhausted

Raat ke 2 baj gaye hain

She is in zombie mode

She books a cab to home without realizing ki home mein toh Maan ke ghar ka address diya hai

Cab wala bhi pohoncha deta hai

She in her auto bot mode goes, puts the entry code, and gets in

+++++++

Maan ghar pe aaya around 3 baje toh dekha ki Geet bed pe so rahi hai comfortably

He frowns wondering whether he is hallucinating

Geet toh mast so rahi hai, unbothered

Maan Geet ko blanket uda deta hai

AC chala deta hai

Light off karke, door band karka chala jaata hai living room mein

He doesn’t know what to think

He just thinks that Geet apni marzi se gayi thi, apni marzi se aayi hai

++++++

Next day Geet uthi aaram se

Yawning

Achi neend aayi

Aas-paas dekha

Emm…apne bed hai…thoda aur so sakti hai

Goes back to sleep

Then dheere dheere uske brain ko register hua

Kahan hai?

Kiske ghar pe hain?

Oh my God! Yeh to Maan ka ghar hai

She gets up with a start

She wonders, main yahan pohonchi kaise , mujhe toh Lisa ke ghar jaana tha

Uff! Jhali Geet!

She curses herself

She needs to change her habits

Lagta hai Maan ghar pe nahi hai…acha hai…usko pata chalta ki main yahan raat ko aayi thi toh pata nahi kya hota

Geet tu toh aaj bach gayi. Phir yeh galti mat karna

She looks at the watch and realizes ki super late ho raha hai, ab Lisa ke ghar jaake phir change karke hospital gai toh bohot late ho jayega

She thinks ki yahin freshen up hoke, yahan kuch kapde pade hain…yahin se hi hospital chali jaayegi

++++++

Geet barges into the bathroom


Maan was taking a shower

Geet realizes ki Maan ghar pe hi hai…and slowly all the realizations and all the shades of emotions crept in

Geet ka toh pura system hang hoke phir se reboot ho gaya

Maan was also stuck in the same position seeing Geet barge in like that

Shower curtain bhi transparent tha

Shower curtain pehle opaque tha….fir as Geet had moved in Maan changed it to transparent

Aaj Geet ne fayda utha liya

Maan noticed Geet’s slight smirk/laugh/smug smile also

He raises his eyebrow to hide his embracement

She comes in the bathroom

Walks to the washbasin, shamelessly looking at Maan

Picks up a spare toothbrush

Starts brushing her teeth

Geet wonders maybe it's a dream, maybe not

But surely last time she will get to look at this fine specimen...Toh dekh lo

Looking at Maan in shower dripping water. Is the only positive thing to happen to her in a long time

Nobody can take that positive thing away from her

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Maan is only seeing his own viewpoint, not hers. He is not listening to one word she says, just turning it around like she is dumping him.


Exactly, just turning it around like she is dumping him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 97

Such a tense 😬 update !!

Geet is all riled up & spitting fire 🔥

But nothing seems to effect maan now

It seems like he has barricaded all his emotions b/c he has lost everyone that he has loved

& now he is afraid that he will lose geet too

So he is trying to boot her out of his life b/c he cannot tolerate anymore heartache

Hoping that geet does not leave

B/c she is his only hope

& worried about the gun

Maan is not in the right frame of mind

Di thank you so much for updating 🤗


Every word was so apt...yes yes & yes to everything❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for the update


Part 97

Dramatic update.... wonderfully written

Geet's outburst was justified....

oh no Maan is unaffected!

I am upset with Maan....

how can he just let her leave?

Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression

hope he realises before its too late


update when you can, thanks


Exactly: Maan is unable to see beyond his sorrow and depression

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ferdouz

Hi Dear, Thanks for the update.

Don't stress yourself like Maan 😄🤭 update whenever possible 😁

Communication has always been an issue between Maan and Geet.

Assumptions has always been their forte.

This way it will be difficult to continue their relationship.

Maan is indeed going into a bad state.

Sensing a bad showdown.

Waiting for next.


Hi Dear, Thanks for the update.

Don't stress yourself like Maan 😄🤭 update whenever possible 😁- aww so sweet of you thank you so much❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ferdouz

Hi Dear, Thanks for the update.

Don't stress yourself like Maan 😄🤭 update whenever possible 😁

Communication has always been an issue between Maan and Geet.

Assumptions has always been their forte.

This way it will be difficult to continue their relationship.

Maan is indeed going into a bad state.

Sensing a bad showdown.

Waiting for next.


Communication has always been an issue between Maan and Geet.

Assumptions has always been their forte. --ekdum sahi pakde hain😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Seriously maan. Geetbis right. He is acting as if he just used her

He does not need her anymore

poor geet



He is acting as if he just used her- I love this perspective

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