Ice Cream…U Scream(TS Series) - Redemption_Chapter 2(C) Pg15_31st Oct

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow mind blowing 🤗

Sai ne sab bol diya woh kay feel karti hai 😭

Loved it ❤️ thanks for tagged me❤️

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The way Sai has spoken in this FF makes me want to go give her a tight hug. This is exactly what virat has done- made her a 3rd person in her own marriage, made her feel unwanted/unloved/unworthy. Made her feel like shes come in between some eternal love story. I really wish someone would tell Virat how much he has hurt Sai by his pp jaap, by allowing pp to spew such rubbish about his wife in front of him as he watches mutely.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for the tag😊

Wow, nice start. Interesting that this version of Sai let everything out to a trustworthy soul. Shivani still seems to be not getting her perspective and pain as deeply as Sai feels it because as Sai put it she's the person living her own reality & other people can only understand all this to a certain extent.

As for the story being in Hindi, your words flow as effectively in Hindi as in English. Didn't mind the change at all👍🏼


Looking forward to see who the partner in crime is, I'm guessing it'll be Sunny😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapdance

Thanks for the tag😊

Wow, nice start. Interesting that this version of Sai let everything out to a trustworthy soul. Shivani still seems to be not getting her perspective and pain as deeply as Sai feels it because as Sai put it she's the person living her own reality & other people can only understand all this to a certain extent.

As for the story being in Hindi, your words flow as effectively in Hindi as in English. Didn't mind the change at all👍🏼


Looking forward to see who the partner in crime is, I'm guessing it'll be Sunny😁

I agree with u

Even I feel Shivani mausi wants vir to be happy since she loves him very much

Then first pp needs to be exposed ..

Vir hypocrite behaviour needs to be called out and acknowledged and then they have a shot ..not just confession due to some reason. Vir needs to respect sai

I prefer English tbh🙈

Is it someone from outside ? The partner in crime?

But waiting for u r pov which is usually intresting

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sai opening to Shivani bua is a nice start.

What bua does to help sairat is another story.

Sai considering herself as a third wheel is a major thing that need to be addressed as it is impacting her mentally and emotionally.

Virat has to introspect what he did to his baiko during the past 1 year.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I agree with u

Even I feel Shivani mausi wants vir to be happy since she loves him very much

Then first pp needs to be exposed ..

Vir hypocrite behaviour needs to be called out and acknowledged and then they have a shot ..not just confession due to some reason. Vir needs to respect sai

I prefer English tbh🙈

Is it someone from outside ? The partner in crime?

But waiting for u r pov which is usually intresting

@Italic: Thank you for your compliment🙈


I like that Sherry here did not make that change from the actual story to here in terms of Shivani Bua's characterization. She loves both Sai and Veeru for sure but has an extra soft corner for Veeru in the circumstances because somewhere she realises that he has been grossly misunderstood by every single person important to him in his life & does not have bad intentions towards Sai or Samrat.

She doesn't hang around their bedroom to realise the level of Virat's hypocrisies in the past few weeks. But she called him out clearly when he locked Sai and somehow the show toned down her dialogues referring irrelevant explanations to impactful ones. She called out abuse for abuse.

I thought of Sunny because honestly he seems to be the only one who can get into Virat's head at times when he's absolutely adamant about things. Plus, which outsider apart from Pulkit would not cringe at the words and actions of CN vasis; involving any of her friends at this point feels a little out of the box unless we have totally new characters and plotlines here.


For me the redemption arc somehow goes like: Virat understanding where he's going wrong with Pakhi, drawing boundaries, making those boundaries visible to Sai/Samrat, telling Sam about Pakhi's approaches & letting him decide his way ahead in his marriage, coming clean to Sai about his 2 day Yoga love without getting into too many details and then finally learning to respect his wife the way she is; and if they survive all this then a flow towards realisation and confession.


I'm laughing at the last para, it can come true only in FF's😆 Sherry is paving the way❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting.... please update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So glad Sai had Shivani bua who, she could let her feelings and dilemma known to. I am sure Shivani bua is calling Sunny. their partnership is one of a kind. too bad Sunny is way younger than Shivani bua in the show or else I would have totally shipped them. 😆 Excited for the next chapter.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Those are some straight facts that Sai spoke. I'm glad at least someone spoke to her. You go Shivani, plan the hell out of it.

I love the way you've made Sai speka out without munching words.

Amazing work and absolutely loved it. Can't wait.❤

Godspeed

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