Raghvi FF: On the Edge (7/?) - Updated Pg 12 - Page 10

Did Pallavi kiss Ragav? 🤩

What?! No! You cannot end it there! You absolutely cannot end it there! No no no no no!

GAAHHHH!!!! Things have really started to pick up and I am swooning over this Raghav! He's so dapper and suave and charismatic - this is exactly how he'd be in the show if it weren't for the 500 external factors that kept spoiling their interactions.

His claustrophobia was an interesting and apt addition. It gives a humanly edge to his larger than life personality. He's such a walking-talking contradiction and you capture it so well! In fact, they both are and it's always so beautifully written in each chapter!

That damned gold chain. So glad it's finally been given it's due!

Love the way he easily slips in and out of business with her without caring for his (lack of) clothing or their surroundings. I'm glad Pallavi was riled up enough or I guess internally frustrated enough to make the first move. I could totally be off mark here, but I think she wants to free herself from the cage she created, but she doesn't know how to walk out. She wants to live life as she would've had she not been a widow, but she also doesn't want to let go of these familial ties. I do think she's wasting away here, but if she moves to Kolhapur then she'll be farther away from Raghav, so I'm curious to see how she finally makes a decision by herself and for herself.

Their kiss was so... youthful! I use that word a lot when I read this story because it truly is the highlight for me. I love how young and carefree they can be after office hours and even during work, there's an air of light-heartedness around them that we hardly see in the show. Despite all their burdens and responsibilities, they just seem at ease and far more relaxed when they're in each other's presence. ❤️

Thank you for the tag! 🤗

wow! it's getting hot in here!!

superb chapter -- i throughly enjoyed reading it ❤️

but raghav had just kissed the girl in the silver dress and five minutes later, kissed pallu. he moves quick 😲

Such a wonderful update loved every bit of it

Read all the chapters in one go🤩

The story is progressing in such an interesting way and I’m eager to read the next chapters.

Update pretty pls 😭

When are you going to update next ??

Waiting eagerly 😁

Hey there - thanks for checking in with regards to the story. I've had some personal things going on so haven't been writing or even watching the show for some time.

I'll do my best to update but can't promise it will be any time soon ❤️

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Read all the chapters in one go🤩

The story is progressing in such an interesting way and I’m eager to read the next chapters.

Thank you 😳

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. It'll likely be some time until the next chapter but thanks so much for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: nooriex

wow! it's getting hot in here!!

superb chapter -- i throughly enjoyed reading it ❤️

but raghav had just kissed the girl in the silver dress and five minutes later, kissed pallu. he moves quick 😲

Haha he didn't actually do anything with the other girl - hence her attitude 😆

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it ❤️