Our last moments - A Shivi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kfof

Amazing😍😍

Loved it❤❤

Do write more❤

Thank you Kshma ❤️

It was just perfect....... I want this to happen in the show also...... ☺😊😇

This was so beautiful Vaishu, I loved how well put together both their feelings were and the natural flow of the OS, keep writing more and tag me next time okay!?

I love you for this one ❤️❤️

Can't wait to read it!

Edit: So beautiful, hope their apologies are as heartfelt in the show too! 💗

Chand ghadiyaan yehi hain jo aazad hain…

This line was enough to break my heart...🥺

Twin....kahan chupa ke rakhi thi apni writing talent...Mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise tune mujhe betray kiya yeh writing talent chupa ke🤨😑

But koi nahi.... I LOVE SURPRISES....AND HOLY HELL THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO SWEEEETTTTTTT......🥺❤

THE SONG...THE WORDS...THE CHAND GHADIYAAN....OOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGGG I LOVED IT!!!!

VAISHU I AM SOOO PROUD OF YOU....THIS WAS AMAZING !!! I LOVE YOU❤

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

This was so beautiful Vaishu, I loved how well put together both their feelings were and the natural flow of the OS, keep writing more and tag me next time okay!?

I love you for this one ❤️❤️

Thank you Inny ❤️

And for putting that together, credit goes to Sathya she helped me out.

Will tag you next time pakka

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Chand ghadiyaan yehi hain jo aazad hain…

This line was enough to break my heart...🥺

Twin....kahan chupa ke rakhi thi apni writing talent...Mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise tune mujhe betray kiya yeh writing talent chupa ke🤨😑

But koi nahi.... I LOVE SURPRISES....AND HOLY HELL THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO SWEEEETTTTTTT......🥺❤

THE SONG...THE WORDS...THE CHAND GHADIYAAN....OOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGGG I LOVED IT!!!!

VAISHU I AM SOOO PROUD OF YOU....THIS WAS AMAZING !!! I LOVE YOU❤

Thank you meri Jaan ❤️

The song was suggested by me and that line by Sathya ❤️

Maine kahi chupa ke nahi rakha pehli baar kuch likha hai 😳Thanks to Sathya nahi toh yeh idea hi reh jata mera.

I'm so happy you wrote this OS.🤗 But the heart wants more🐷❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

I'm so happy you wrote this OS.🤗 But the heart wants more🐷❤️

Thank you Pooh 🤗

Will surely write more ❤️

Congrats on your first OS Vaishh❤️

This was so beautiful and heart touching❤️

You have written it so well!! Waiting to read more from you❤️