Kalma ss ::" khudgarzi"(chapter 2::- updated 07-10-2021 - Page 4

Wow vanshu

I never expected such convincing backstory will from both the charechters

To be honest mujhe ye ashiyaana se bhi syaada pasand aane laga he

Sorry for commenting late yaar you know na meri kya haalath he

I am just loving this

Isko jaldi jaldi update karna

I know I am being khudagrz here but can't wait to see kalma ka meeting

And how they will find solace in each other

Waiting for your update

Meri kallu love u yaar

🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓

This is an amazing work again vanshu..... Sach m kitna bhi hectic work ho ye stories bilkul relax kr deti hai.....

Malhar misses his mother☹️☹️☹️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kalma ke fathers ..... Dono hi khudgarz hai😒😒😒

Dono apni moms se beintehaa pyar krte hai❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍

I really loved the way you showed their past stories...... Immense love, both truly loves their mother, still had the hopes that their father will turn into a good human but alas!!!!!,

Malhar's neverending love for his sister❤️❤️❤️❤️

Malhar completed his mother's dream😀😀😀😘😘😘...... He is now having his own identity despite belonging to reputated family.....

I felt bad for kalyani too...... Her mother too gone with many complicated things😞😞😞

Finally she forund her but in not a good state...... Bechari ko kya kya krna pd rha hai just to get good treatment for her mother

Loved this vanshu...... Extreme thank you for this one

Jaldi update krna.... sorry gayu ki trah main bhi khudgarz ho rhi hu but can't wait anymore yaar!!!!

Vanshu Maiyya ki jai ho hai ho….🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

This story has touched my heart Vanshu…❤️❤️❤️❤️

The plot is so engaging…👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

The way you penned their emotions is so beautiful….👏👏👏👏

Kalma backstory is so heart wrenching…😢😢

Their love for their mother is so pure and beautiful…

You have written it so wonderfully…👏👏👏

Loved it yaar ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Waiting to see how this story unfolds further…

Jyada wait na karaiyon!!!!!

Pata nahi ye mujh se miss kaise ho gayi thi 😢😢😢

But ab mil gayi n padh bhi li 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

It's beautiful Vanshu...

Emotional..

An insight into the childhood of Kalyani and Malhar..

Both love their mothers... 💕💕💕

He has lost his mother and living in her memories, fulfilled her wish becoming a police officer... 😭

She lost and found her mother only to know that her mother doesn't remember her now...

She wore the ghungroo and started dancing to earn money for her mother's treatment.. 😭

Malhar's dad and Kallu's dad both men are horrible creatures.. 😡

Malhar is a good soul, caring for his step sister Swara... And she too loves him.. ❤️❤️

Malhar's mom lost her will to live...😭painful life she had..

Anupriya tried her best to provide for Kallu after her husband left.. Lekin aisa ho gaya uske saat.. 😭

Both the mom's have suffered..

Keep going Vanshu..

Back story is good.. 👍🏼

Aapko ye pasand aaya to mujhein acha laga ..

Some creatures are like this only they deserve hell only 😡

Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow vanshu update was awesome

Malhar ka pain how he lost her mother and how he can find her mother in kalyani

Kaise Malhar ki mom ko dancing ka shok tha but because of her family she can't complete her dream

And how her mother love his father but unka to kader hi nhi thi ki how much his wife loves him

But in last her mother death with broken him more and how amazing he cares about swara zaruri nhi hota khoon ka rishta hai rishta kehlata hai

Kalyani ki mom ki memory lost even how she was living happily in her childhood but the same situation jo Malhar ki mom ka saath huva wahi Kalyani ka mom ka saath huva uska papa ki boss pregnant hogayi

After that Kalyani thought ki ab uski mom nhi rahe but she got her but the situation was totally different her mother lost her memory or unha thik karna ka liya paise chaye hoga jo Kalyani ka paas nhi tha but she want to save her mom

And she started dancing

The chapter was totally emotional vanshu

Just waiting ki akhir ya bacha hai kiska jldi batao na wait nhi hota

Glad to know you liked this chapter ☺️☺️

They will meet soon Arwa and wait for sometime till now kalyani is not pregnant...it's a major twist of the story pls ...👍🏼

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

The update is very emotional vanshuuu.

Both their childhood are horrible and almost similar. They loved their mother's the most. But the women were treated badly by their men, which is very horrible.

I just hope they find their solace in each other among the chaos in their life

Both faced a lot in their life. They are pure soul who crave for comfort and solace from their hard lives.

Glad to know you loved this 🤗😊

They will definitely make a good couple wait for sometime more 😉😉

Originally posted by: Autumn09

This is too good Vanshu

The backstories they were so emotional😭

I loved how you etched their characters with independent traits. Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Abb teri tabiyat kaisi hai diet sahi sein le rahi hai ya nahi ..

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Wow vanshu

I never expected such convincing backstory will from both the charechters

To be honest mujhe ye ashiyaana se bhi syaada pasand aane laga he

Sorry for commenting late yaar you know na meri kya haalath he

I am just loving this

Isko jaldi jaldi update karna

I know I am being khudagrz here but can't wait to see kalma ka meeting

And how they will find solace in each other

Waiting for your update

Meri kallu love u yaar

🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓

Glad to know you are liking this story aree pehle decide kar lo konsi achi konsi jyaada achi hai tu humesha confuse ho jaati hai ismein😆..

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

This is an amazing work again vanshu..... Sach m kitna bhi hectic work ho ye stories bilkul relax kr deti hai.....

Malhar misses his mother☹️☹️☹️👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kalma ke fathers ..... Dono hi khudgarz hai😒😒😒

Dono apni moms se beintehaa pyar krte hai❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍

I really loved the way you showed their past stories...... Immense love, both truly loves their mother, still had the hopes that their father will turn into a good human but alas!!!!!,

Malhar's neverending love for his sister❤️❤️❤️❤️

Malhar completed his mother's dream😀😀😀😘😘😘...... He is now having his own identity despite belonging to reputated family.....

I felt bad for kalyani too...... Her mother too gone with many complicated things😞😞😞

Finally she forund her but in not a good state...... Bechari ko kya kya krna pd rha hai just to get good treatment for her mother

Loved this vanshu...... Extreme thank you for this one

Jaldi update krna.... sorry gayu ki trah main bhi khudgarz ho rhi hu but can't wait anymore yaar!!!!

Thank god tum sabko ye pasand aaya varna mera iss chapter ko post karnein ka maan hi nahi kar raha tha .. i was skeptical ki tum logo ko pasand aayega bhi ya nahi ..😉

Aur kitne din ho gayien hai humein milein huein jaldi aayo i am waiting to meet you😳

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Vanshu Maiyya ki jai ho hai ho….🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

This story has touched my heart Vanshu…❤️❤️❤️❤️

The plot is so engaging…👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

The way you penned their emotions is so beautiful….👏👏👏👏

Kalma backstory is so heart wrenching…😢😢

Their love for their mother is so pure and beautiful…

You have written it so wonderfully…👏👏👏

Loved it yaar ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Waiting to see how this story unfolds further…

Jyada wait na karaiyon!!!!!

Pata nahi ye mujh se miss kaise ho gayi thi 😢😢😢

But ab mil gayi n padh bhi li 😆😆😆

Chal tune aab read kar li aur itna pyaara sa review bhi de diya aur tujhein pasand bhi aayi iskien thoda shukriya ji shukriya. 🤗