ShiVi SS- Uska hi bana Part 3 on page 24 UPDATED - Page 16

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Off courseee

I will stalk this thread like roohi 😂😂

😜😜

Dont scare the residents away😆

Originally posted by: Madheart

I'm here😆

Welcome here Tej😎😛😛🍓🍓🍟🍩🍩🥪🥪🍕🍕🍿🍿

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Welcome here Tej😎😛😛🍓🍓🍟🍩🍩🥪🥪🍕🍕🍿🍿

Khaaanaa 🤣

I'm bunking my class to read ur story 😝😝

Originally posted by: Madheart

Khaaanaa 🤣

I'm bunking my class to read ur story 😝😝

Oyeee

Go back to ua class Tej

No bunking😐🤨

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Oyeee

Go back to ua class Tej

No bunking😐🤨

Just kidding 😆

Class canceled, free time 😆

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Thank u soo much Priuuuu🌸

U will get all ua answers soon.

Keep reading🍿

Phast phast update please!!

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Phast phast update please!!

Will try my best🌼🌼

Woah Maahi this was unexpected!! We got two in one.. ShiRu and ShiVi 😂😂

So roohi is a 300 year old ghost who fell in.love with Shiva and has possessed Raavi to get close to him 😉

I wonder how Shiva will feel about two versions of Raavis, and which version he will prefer 😆

Waiting for the next! ❤️

Oh my Heart!!!

The first part with Kaka and Raavi realizing that Shiva can see a ghost was very worrying. The blanks in his memory, but remembering her, makes me wonder what exactly she is..A spirit maybe? And obviously in the days that he could see her, he liked her maybe? was that why there was blushing and stuttering?

The concern of Suman and Dhara is endearing. Getting a dhaga to protect him and demands of coming home early!

Also the smell of Jasmine around him and that bothering Raavi was so good! I love how you've portrayed Raavi's emotions for Shiva; she doesn't know what he is to her, but she cant have him being the way he is with her, with anyone else and boy does jealousy suit Raavi.

The camping trip is where things get interesting. She wants to spend time with Dev, but the instantaneous realization that she doesn't love Dev but loves Shiva just righted the story. And of course she had to get lost in the forest and meet Roohi...

Which brings me to part 2

The conversation that Raavi and Roohi had is bone chilling...I'll say it again, not a fan of horror/ ghost stories, but this has pulled me in. Roohi giving us an insight on the Shiva she has seen was written beautifully.

Raavi recognising her and agreeing to a competition for her love is very brave, even though you have described her fear perfectly. I could feel the chill running down my back. I'm assuming there is a body possession, which reminds me of a Korean Program I watched a while back.... I am rooting for Raavi.

Dev got scolded by Dhara and Suman 😆..He was too busy looking at Rishita to realise that Raavi is missing and then looks for her afterwards! I love how protective Dhara is over Raavi!

Shiva notices that Raavi is changed! YES!! I want Shivi and you have that in the title so I'm keeping positive because he does remember Roohi too so...never knwo where your devilish mind might take this!!!

Update soon my mahi!!!❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Woah Maahi this was unexpected!! We got two in one.. ShiRu and ShiVi 😂😂

So roohi is a 300 year old ghost who fell in.love with Shiva and has possessed Raavi to get close to him 😉

I wonder how Shiva will feel about two versions of Raavis, and which version he will prefer 😆

Waiting for the next! ❤️

The frustration of not getting the ShiVi I want led to this craze😂

Now I am not at all frustrated😝

Roohi is not a ghost😂

Will try to update soon Aalu