Shivi OS Becoming us again (16+epilogue pg6) - Page 5

This was so amazing❤❤

Write more😍😍

Thank you Kshama❤️... I will whenever I can...

Awwww this was really really good! I loved it a lot ❤️

Raavi getting a tattoo of Shiva's name.. kaash show mein bhi aisa kuch mile 😆

This was sooo beautiful ❤️❤️

Raavi getting a tattoo of Shiva's name 😍

Shivi have always been givers of love, unfortunately they had noone to love them unconditionally.i wish they give each other all the love and khusiyan they deserve ❤️❤️

This was beautifully written ❤️.

OMG IT WAS FCUKING HOT INTENSE INTIMATE !!!!!!!!MY OVARIES JUST EXPLODED!!!!!!!!

AUR TU TENSION LE RAHI THI MATURE LIKHNE KA...BEHEN TU TOH MUJHSE BHI AAGE NIKLI!!!!! TU TOH DEVI NIKLI!!!!🥵💋🔥🔥🔥

OMG I AM DEAD ....I AM SO DEAD....MEIN OOOHHH GOD!!!! MY BRAIN HAS STOPPED FUNCTIONING!!!! AAAHHHHHH!!!!!🤪

LOVE YOU ❤💋🔥🥵🙏🙏

Sathya,

THE FLUFF 🥺🥰🙏🏻

And then comes the Mature part. My dimaag is gone as of now, will take thoda sa time to come back! But you've written pure magic, from the Wedding rituals to the way these two are, you've captured every essence so beautifully 🥺

Also pls more writing🥺👉👈

Amaaazingg!!!!❤️

I always wanted Shivi to relive their marriage moments and promises during Anita's wedding❤️

hopefully we'll get that someday onscreen

You penned the sindoor moment n their feelings so beautifully❤️

Tattoo, sensitive Raavi n Junglee Shiva☺️☺️

And this🔥-- "Par Shiva, teri dhaadi sach main chubti hain!!🔥...I want her to say that🤣

Loved it!❤️❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Awwww this was really really good! I loved it a lot ❤️

Raavi getting a tattoo of Shiva's name.. kaash show mein bhi aisa kuch mile 😆

Aalu di🤗!!! Kaash ki hum logon ki list badti jaa rahi hain😆!! At this point, I'd gladly be satisfied with Raavi saying she's Shiva's, to him.

Thank you!!! Glad you loved it.... ❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This was sooo beautiful ❤️❤️

Raavi getting a tattoo of Shiva's name 😍

Shivi have always been givers of love, unfortunately they had noone to love them unconditionally.i wish they give each other all the love and khusiyan they deserve ❤️❤️

This was beautifully written ❤️.

Thank you Pixie❤️... I feel like the best love stories are when two unconditional givers find each other, because it means they will both get as much as they give.... Hopefully Shivi find their khushiyaan on the show soon!!

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

OMG IT WAS FCUKING HOT INTENSE INTIMATE !!!!!!!!MY OVARIES JUST EXPLODED!!!!!!!!

AUR TU TENSION LE RAHI THI MATURE LIKHNE KA...BEHEN TU TOH MUJHSE BHI AAGE NIKLI!!!!! TU TOH DEVI NIKLI!!!!🥵💋🔥🔥🔥

OMG I AM DEAD ....I AM SO DEAD....MEIN OOOHHH GOD!!!! MY BRAIN HAS STOPPED FUNCTIONING!!!! AAAHHHHHH!!!!!🤪

LOVE YOU ❤💋🔥🥵🙏🙏

Maya babes🤗 ❤️!! Dil khush kar diya tune!!! Quality over quantity is kinda the motto here girl... Thank you for the compliments on the smut, I feel validated hearing it from you😳!!!

Also, hopefully the ovaries and the brain are still functional so that I get some good smut to read as well😆!!!