Originally posted by: sangy
I like the dilemma you have created for Raavi, she is scared to love and trying to compromise.
We know, both won't work in her case, cause she is bound to Shiva, in a much deeper sense she realises. He is there in every part of her life. But considering she is so young and so delusional half of that time, I would say Dobi Raavi is going to have to understand Shiva more than compromising. She will have to totally submit to her physical attraction before she can emotionally understand her feelings or vise versa. She can't keep this pushing and pulling either buttons.
I like that you are clear where both these characters head space is clearly written and understood. Unlike the show Jahan kabhi bhi kucho bhi ho sakta hai.
I like this confused and cute Shiva, beautifully written.
And lastly I love that you give super phaast updates in all your FFs. Thank you so much for that❤️❤️❤️
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