Shivi FF: Agar Tum Saath Ho (Part 20- Pg.91) (complete) - Page 32

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please ravi ka self pity n compromise wala dailogue bohot ho gaya.hufff!!!! I wanted her to answer back her friend when she was insulting shiva n talking about adjustments n all but but but..... All she did is again wallow in her pitiful life which thanks to shiva is much more beautiful than she would have with dev.gadhedi kahin ki!!! Pls yaar now change her attitude.How much shiva would be hurt if he hears things like this.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Keep that kirtii faaaar away from Dobi Raaavii

Don’t want shiva to hear all this and get more hurt💔

Aww he didn’t switch off the AC😉

Good going Shiva☺️😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

The only kostin I have is ... PAPPI BHENN ? 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yaha toh aag lag gayi behen! 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Pyaar pyaar na raha, dosti dosti na raha!!! Haye mera dil bechari toots gayi🥺!!!

But, I did love the update. They're both so sad I feel like giving them a hug Big Momma style.

Iss okay... I will simply read a happier piece on Shivi and be back to normal. But, you're going to have to eventually glue the broken pieces of my dil back together.... Tab tak, alvidaa meri jaan.... 🤪


Awww 🤣

Don’t worry. Your dil will be glued back soon 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

He he he. I saw you posted rush to see if you updated!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Ananya, what did you do to Raavi? 😆 She is stuck and stagnated😆 She wants this marriage but not ready to move on from her broken heart. And Shiva, why is he so good and taking care of her❤️

Aakhir kya chahthi hai, Raavi? She thinks only she is compromising and not Shiva😆 Can we have her tubelight moment?😆


I think this entire story is her tubelight moment 🤣

Shiva is my good and caring baby shona 😭❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sangy

I like the dilemma you have created for Raavi, she is scared to love and trying to compromise.

We know, both won't work in her case, cause she is bound to Shiva, in a much deeper sense she realises. He is there in every part of her life. But considering she is so young and so delusional half of that time, I would say Dobi Raavi is going to have to understand Shiva more than compromising. She will have to totally submit to her physical attraction before she can emotionally understand her feelings or vise versa. She can't keep this pushing and pulling either buttons.

I like that you are clear where both these characters head space is clearly written and understood. Unlike the show Jahan kabhi bhi kucho bhi ho sakta hai.

I like this confused and cute Shiva, beautifully written.


And lastly I love that you give super phaast updates in all your FFs. Thank you so much for that❤️❤️❤️


Aww thank you!! Such sweet words ♥️


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Yaha toh aag lag gayi behen! 🤣


Haa sachhi. Sab Raavi jitne confused ho rakhe hai 🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ZaaraBB

He he he. I saw you posted rush to see if you updated!!


Yes I’m updating 😆


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