ShiVi OS: Make You Mine - Page 2

It was so beautiful 😍😍😍

Loved it ❤️

Terrific!!

The scene had so much potential. I wish it was a bit longer than what it was in the episode.

Please keep writing more.

Lots of Love. ❤️

I wonder if and how Shivis Misunderstanding is going to end in the show...

This would be a treat to watch...

Aah my heart doesn't exist because you took it❤️

How beautifully you expressed their emotions and their decisions. Everything was just *chef's kiss*

Shyna!!! I loved this OS!! This is the kind of golden opportunity the CVs always keep letting go of... The end right there, with Raavi insisting on Shiva putting a stop to any plans of remarriage? So gods damned cute!!!

PS Will you please, pretty please, make an index so I can read all your works when ever the hell I want to? I love re reading them, but I forget the titles so it's super hard to find them again... A list with just the titles should work too.... Consider it, please?

Hey sweetie, loved the OS🤗

You described Shivi's emotions so well

I feel Shivi talking like this will be so blissful to watch

Let's hope we get something similar like this in the future

Lovely OS in all❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

This is beautiful! Wish this happened in the series as well, but we are not that lucky. If only writers of this show had brains like many beautiful writers of this forum.

Anyway, you have beautifully incorporated the moon gazing scene into this OS and resolved their differences in your own way and I am so glad they finally talked. Shiva and Raavi are meant to be together.

Thank you so much Prema ❤️ I am glad you liked this! The moon gazing scene was a good moment to let out all their emotions/frustrations/feelings/expectations, which we didn't get in the show, but hopefully, it'll happen soon enough in the show. It's long overdue, let's see how long they delay it 😆

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

My heart is at peace cuz now in my imagination they Both agreed to end the divorce and give themselves another chance....Just the way you wrote....loved it🥺♥️

Thank you Maya ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

It's beautiful

Simple and soothing heart to heart talk❤️

That's all Shivi needed

But let's see what Chubey's done

Loved your take on this matter😊

Thank you sm love! Glad you loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: StarLord_Owen

Oh my god it was soooo cute 😭😭❤️❤️
the much needed Shivi conversation..dono ne apne dil ki baat keh di

I LOVED every bit of it..the ending especially 🤗

I know we will never get to watch such great scenes on screen so thank you soch much for writing it ❤️

Rexieee, love, thank you sm ❤️

It was my pleasure to write it 🤗