PriRa OS ~ Towards Her - Page 5

This was really good..the os had a smooth flow and truly I was expecting Ram to go to Vedika and you surprised us writer with Priya--and she would look so pretty in that saree--I already have an image forming in my head

Vrida is the cupid between these two

such a lovely and beautiful OS and the punch lines by everyone was quite good

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Well well... Look who started writing again..!! 😃

My sweet talented Sarcy Darcy!!

Firstly, thank you so much for writing this.. For me it feel like a nice introduction.. This could easily be a first scene..

I do not watch the show (yet) but you made me curious to get to know Ram and Priya and all there loving shipping friends.. even the exes and their partners have my interest. I have a feeling, it wont be long before I start to watch and get addicted..

The angle to write from the friends group perspective is a nice refreshing approach.. but now.. as much I appreciate this, that much I am also getting greedy to read more..

No pressure at all, but I hope you will continue, either on this OS or a new write up. Take your time, but surely write and share it on the forum.

Hey Rishu! Thank you! 🤗 You know you guys are my personal cheerleaders, especially you and Twerps! Glad you liked this piece. I don't intend to continue it as it is intended to be a one shot. Ram's friends, especially Vrinda, is their biggest shipper.

As to the exes, like I said, if I find an appropriate idea, I amy even explore writing about them. 😉

Originally posted by: Red_eyes

Will read tonight ❤️

Hope you enjoy!

Originally posted by: unicorn1

This OS has everything I want in the show - Ram ignoring Vedu, Vrinda shipping PriRa and most importantly Ram's attention for Priya ❤️

BTW you are an amazing writer 👏

Well, Vedu's magnetic effect on Ram had started to bother me so I had to write this shot. 😆 Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you. 💛

Originally posted by: SundariP

It's very sweet.

Ram's exchange with "vedu" is unexpected, but it's already been established in the show that Vedika somehow becomes invisible when priya is in the frame (which I again find unbelievable) but we have to give her due to the heroine.

Keep writing.

Lots of love 💗

Thank you. I hope that Ram’s journey towards Priya and away from Vedu will be filled with such unexpected exchanges and moments. 💛

Originally posted by: jojo_mojo

wow so well written

Thank you for the beautiful OS. Please keep writing more😃

Thank you! 💛 I hope PriRa keep walking into my mind like this and I keep telling their story.

Originally posted by: Popppins

Dont know what to say about your write up, closest to what we are hooked to! Wonderful talent 👏

Felt as if I am literally watching the scene, every bit of it❤️

Loved it! ❤️

That's a beautiful compliment, thank you! 💛

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Sarcy 🤗 girl

This OS has my heart ❤️

Aww the transformation of Ram, adorable

Thank you, Jenn! 🤗 I can't wait for the day Vedu realises that she has truly and completely lost Ram. 🤣

Lovely OS❤️

Will love to watch something like this in the show

You have penned downed Ram Priya and Vrinda's characteristics amazingly...

Keep writing👍🏼

Beautiful os❤️

Wishing to see a similar scene in the show soon... Ram having his eyes only for his wifey.... Ram treating vedika like any other guests, PriRa showing Neeraj his place👏.... Overall its a wonderful story.