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Guys sorry but this was the end...😅
Par Pallavi gayi kahan?
Your wish is my command....
Guys just give me some time i'll update the next part
Continuation of Version 2
Raghav's eyes were tearing up as he was panicking to find Pallavi....amma was constantly calling him....and he finally picked up "amma Pallavi abhi tak mila nhi....kya...Pallavi ghar par hai....mai aa raha hai" Raghav disconnects the call and takes a u-turn to drive back home.
Raghav parks the car in haywhy and rushes inside the house, he sees amma "amma Pallavi kaha hai", "uppar...kamre mai" amma answers, Raghav rushes towards their room "Pallavi" he calls out while huffing, Pallavi who was keeping her clothes inside the cupboard turns around in confusion to look at Raghav who was out of breath as though he just came from a marathon run "kya hua? Tum itna haf-" before could Pallavi ask,
Raghav came close to her "tum...kidhar ko gaya tha" Raghav asked angrily while his eyes were red and sweat were over his forehead, "voh....mai terrace pe thi...kapde geele ho gaye the tho...sukha" Pallavi replied cautiously sensing his anger
"tum...itni raat ko....kaha gaye the?" she asks further, Raghav frowns and grits his teeth in anger.....he doesn't reply her and removes his shirt and plopes on to the side of his bed, while Pallavi watches him in confusion "ab kya hua....maine kya kiya" she thinks to herself.
Pallavi wakes up in the morning and turns around to see his side.....it was empty, Raghav had woken up early for some work. Pallavi gets up and sighs in sadness and goes to freshen up.
Meanwhile Raghav and Farhad were stepping out of the car, Raghav was still angry, Farhad sensing his anger tried to change the mood "anna" before Farhad could say anything else, "tera bhabhi ek din merko pagal kar dega Farhad....pura sheher mai uske liye dundha....aur voh...terrace pe kapde sukha raha tha" Raghav complaines while Farhad chuckles, Raghav looks at him in anger "terko hasi aa raha hai?", "nhi anna...bas aise hi.....vaise anna apko bhabhi ko batake aana chahiye tha...voh chinta kar rahi hongi" Farhad tries to divert the topic, Raghav thinks about it and asks Farhad to call her.
Farhad calls Pallavi and keeps it in speaker whereas Pallavi had reached Deshmukh emporium....she picks up the call "haan bolo Farhad" hearing her voice Raghav smiles but he instantly hides it when Farhad looks at him "voh bhabhi aap dukhan pohach gaye kya?" Farhad asks "haan Farhad bas abhi abhi pohachi hu...kuch hua hai kya", "nhi bhabhi...voh toh bas.." before he could finish his sentence Krishna's voice comes in between "didi aapke hathon mai khoon" hearing that Raghav terrifically looks at Farhad, Farhad also gets tensed but before could ask the call gets disconnected, Farhad again tries her number while Raghav rushes into the car and drives off.
"Krishna...shant...yeh khoon nhi hai...gulal hai...voh mai jab aa rahi thi tho lag gaya" Pallavi explains while Krishna sighs in relief "apne toh dara hi diya didi", she wipes her hand with a towel as her phone gets switched off "yeh phone bhi na....Krishna voh charger de na please" Pallavi switches the plug into her phone when a screeching sound comes of car in front of their shop Pallavi turns around to see Raghav coming out of the car and walking hurriedly towards her "Pallavi tu-tum theek ho...tumhe kuch hua..." Raghav was choking "Raghav mai theek hu" hearing that and he hugged her tightly squeezing her into his chest,
Pallavi was confused.....she could hear his heart beat running fast, a smile comes on Pallavi's face and tries to hug him back cautiously as her palm's were red with color as she thinks My husband....is my happy place.
his concern and longing for her
hopefully to see it on the upcoming tv track
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i love this so much, especially since you included the recent bts we received 👏 please tag me if you decide to continue!! :)
Thanks for the second part 🥺 u showed it beautifully how he still managed to long for n keep his ego too. 🤣
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THE FEAR OF LOSING YOU.....KILLS ME.
ACP Laxmi Singh was pacing back and forth in her cabin with anger and desparation on her face talking to her superior on the phone "but sir....sir please" she spoke.
"Look Laxmi singh you've already made a huge blunder by shooting a mere 18 year old boy.....do you even know how I handled the media for this.....and now you are bargaining with me to give you more time.....are you out of your mind" her superior was really angry as he was talking through the phone. "But sir....24hrs bohot kum hai....sir please.." Laxmi singh again tried to plead as it was her second 24hrs deadline that her superior had given her, "*sigh* fine....I'll give you 72 hours (3 days)and thats it.....this is your last chance to prove your worth....".
"Yes sir....Thank you sir.....jai hind" Laxmi singh disconnected the call and threw her phone on the floor in desparation "damn it! Saala buddha....72 hours....sirf 72 hours mai uss Raghav rao ko guilty kaise prove karu?" she was talking to herself when her subordinate knocked, she tried to control her anger as she signed him to come in "kuch pata chala?" She asked one of the two men.
"Mam kuch zyada nhi pata chala.....voh ladke ka incident hone ke baad.....Raghav rao ab aur alert ho gaya hai...isliye..." hearing that Laxmi singh was disappointed "par mam" another person spoke "sunne mai aaya hai ki....Mrs Rao bahar jaake kaam karti hai". "What?...Pallavi Raghav Rao bahar jaake kaam karti....for what?" Laxmi singh asked as she looked at her subordinates who were clueless. She knew it was useless to ask them.
She started thinking "that woman....she is interesting" Laxmi singh spoke as she smiled, webbing a plan to catch her prey.
Meanwhile it had become night and in Rao mansion the workers were busy doing their routine work, amma was also working randomly to shift her focus from the recent problems in their life, Sunny and Keerti were in their room while Raghav was checking out his diamonds. Rajan entered with the trolly to give Raghav food on amma's orders "anna khana laga du?" Rajan asked. Raghav looked at the food and then he looked at the time "Pallavi aaya kya?" he asked. "Nhi anna....mam abhi tak nhi aayi" Rajan replied. Raghav nodded "tu jaa....mai kha lega", Rajan went away keeping the trolly aside as Raghav was looking at the clock.
After a while amma came up "Raghav" amma called him, "haan...amma" Raghav replied "Pallavi ka kuch call aaya kya terko...voh itna der se aaya nhi...isliye" she asked, "nhi amma.... yeh hi baat mai aapse puchne aa raha tha" Raghav answered, "nhi koi nhi....Pallavi kahi atak gaya hoga....voh aa jayega...tune khana kaya?" amma asked "nhi amma...badme kha lega" Raghav replied as amma nodded and went downstairs. Raghav was now getting worried as he looked at the clock again.
And time passed by but still there was no sign of Pallavi. Raghav was getting restless, he was constantly looking at his phone while also focusing downstairs whether she had come or not. "She should have come by now....why the hell is she getting late?" all thoughts were going through his mind. His patience was running out as he dialed Farhad's number "Farhad..... Pallavi still has not returned....go check whether she has left her damn shop or not...she doesn't have a problem with you....and after you reach there call me asap" Raghav commanded "ji anna" Farhad replied, Raghav disconnected the call whereas Keerti and Sunny came out of their room.
They were going for a drive "Sunny....mujhe vanilla ice cream chahiye" Keerti demanded clinging to him. Amma came from the kitchen, Keerti seeing amma asked her "amma...apko kuch chahiye....mai aur Sunny bahar jaa rahe hai". Raghav was observing all this while being disgusted as he gritted his teeth, Amma looked at Sunny and went past them. Keerti signed Sunny not to mind and they went away.
Amma came to Raghav "Raghav...Pallavi abhi tak nhi aaya" amma asked worriedly. "Amma aap tension mat lejiye maine..." before Raghav could finish his phone started ringing, Raghav picked up the call "haan Farhad....what?....dukaan bandh hai....tune uss junior college ko.....Pallavi bohat pehle nikal gaya tha" hearing all this amma was getting more worried she started praying. Without wasting any moment Raghav went to his room to take the keys of his car he came back "amma mai Pallavi ko dundh ke aata hai" Raghav spoke as amma nodded in a yes.
Raghav was driving while side by side watching out every nook and corner to see if Pallavi was anywhere but all in vain. Raghav stopped his car to ask some people who were walking but whomever he asked they all nodded in a no. He was devastated, all kinds of thoughts going through his mind. Where the hell is she?.....if she has left for home then....how come she is not home yet?.......did something....no....nothing should happen to her. Raghav again started his car to search for.
Meanwhile somewhere in an old place Pallavi was on the floor unconscious. She slowly regained her conscious as she opened her eyes to see she was in an unfamiliar place. Her blurry vision slowly started clearing when she saw she was in a jail. The last thing she remembers was that she was walking down the road to come home when a person who was disguised threatened her with a gun and before she could react another person grabbed her from behind putting a handkerchief on her face.
Pallavi slowly got up taking a support of the wall, and she slowly went towards the bars as she started shouting "koi hai....mujhe yaha kyu bandh kiya hai....please mujhe bahar.." before she could finish Pallavi stopped as a person walked in with a mask and shawl covering his upper body. It was the same person who had threatened her with a gun "tum kaun ho....aur mujhe yaha bandh kyu kiya hai....."
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