FF - THE MISUNDERSTANDING! That ruins jasfa leading to jaspy marriage

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Story on upcoming

Tq to all again for taking ur time to read. Deepest appreciation.U can share ur comments.It's only fiction but hope it happens . Would be a treat


THE MISUNDERSTANDING!

That ruined jasfa leading to jaspy marriage


11am sunday at virks residence

He struggled to open his eyes as his head was spinning

The effect of liquor!

Seconds later he was in a total shock

Not a single piece of cloth on his body!

What happened!

Did i get wet!

Then remembered that she was drunk as well

The party to celebrate the launching of the academy with friends

Oh god !

Dont tell me we did it already !

Oh no!

It cant be !

Buzo !

His shivering fingers dialing his friends number.

Buzo ! Vo hogeya !.

His exclamation full of anxiety

Buzo puzzled

Arey kya hua !

Fateh annoyed

Meney kapdey nehin pehney!

Buzo laughed

Fateh continued nervously

Raat ko pehney they lekin subah ghaib hogeye!

Buzo laughed

Vo mr india ney tere kapdey churaliye!

Fateh shocked

Kya ! Mr india !

Buzo giggling

Anil kapoor ki picture mr india ! The invisible man!

Fateh irritated

Mera mezak ka mood nehin hain! Serious bol raha hun!

Buzi impatient

Aisa hai tuney aur bhabhi ney dhan dhana dhan kerliya. Vo bhi toh drunk thi na! Aur tumhari shadi ho geyi!

Simple fanda ! Whats the big deal! Sorry rushing ! Talk later! Aur sun !

Fateh confused

Kya !

Buzo excited

Bahut bahut bedhai . Puto bhalo dudo nehao!

Apney jaisa pelwan peda karna !

Khandan ka naam kubh roshan kar!

Tu lega rey!

Line disconnected with buzo giving his blessings


At the gurdwara

She was kneeling in front of the altar and feeling restless since she woke up in the morning

What happened last nite! Taking into account the situation they were in the morning. None of them wore!

Oh god! I

Pls babaji fateh should not be shattered!


12pm dining table

Dressed in blue jeans and black t shirt his eyes wandering at the dining table searching for her for his answers to the night mystery.. gurpreet served him his favourite breakfast enquiring details about the party as he and tejo were home late

He explained all went fine with eyes desperately searching for her

Where is she!


She sat at the children's playground watching the little ones playing and laughing

How am i going to face him!

Ring!

Fateh ! It was him

After a while she picked up thinking

Have to face him anyways!

He sounded nervous with the shaky voice requesting her to come home immediately


1pm bedroom

Both seated at their side of thd bed frowning and annoyed thinking hard the night events

The party was suggested by friends . Celebration for the academy . They had couple of drinks. In the enjoyment

Didnt realise the height of limits. There was no looking back . They did it. Marriage completed . They sighed

Disappointedly


Ring!

Sati on the line reminding her about the marriage preparations . She need tejo's assistance upon jasmin' s request to which tejo nodded in agreement .

Jasmin excited as she was hearing the conversation

Plan working!

Fateh frowned as tejo disconnected the line

Not again !

We just went there three days ago to meet gippy's family

How much do i need to bear her drama !

Tejo explained it was necessary to do so

U need to show her that it doesnt make any difference to u anymore! That u moved on and are happy for her as well. Avoiding will only make things worse. U are the SIL of the family. Gippy's family will have thousands of questions to ask for ur absence! Pls understand!

He nodded with a heavy heart and walked away giving excuses not to wait up for dinner as he will be late. Hanging out with friends

A blow for him ! She sighed

First my sister and now last nite!


Days passed with jasmin's marriage preparation. They spoke little and avoided eye contact still embarassed with that unfortunate incident . She was irritating as usual with her sweet smiles and tantrums. He was patient wishing when it would be over.

Designing the marriage cards

Organising the venue

Decorations and caterings

Shopping

Gosh ! A lot to be done

And he was financially supporting as well

Kushbeer advised to help out as sandhus are now related to them and this step would help mend relationships as well. He would do anything to get rid of jasmin.


Sandhus residence marriage preparations

He was not paying attention to her and it annoyed her. She tried nunerous times to come closer when her sister was not watching but he gave excuses moving away. Sandhus treated him well and he enjoyed everyone's company ignoring her

Gippy came down for visits and he was affected a little with her sweet talks but tejo was his pillar of strenght who took him away at that moment and kept him busy which made him realised that he loved the wrong one .

Days passing!

marriage coming closer!

I need time!

Fateh is mine!

She was seated on her bed deep in thoughts of looking ways to postpone the marriage

An idea came finally and she decided to perform the stunt there and then


Jasmin!

Dolly screamed as the former was falling on the staircase one step after the other finally

Unconscious !

Head bleading!

Body bruised!

Sandhus rushed forward to take her to the hospital accompanied by tejo who was crying badly seeing her sister"s condition. Little did she know that her own sibling was fooling her to own her husband

Fateh was at the academy when he received the call from viraj and pretended to be sorry but deep inside he knew she was fooling everyone to postpone the marriage

Damn!


Virks were happy to hear the wonderful news

Serves her right!

Marriage was postponed for a month with gippy rescheduling his return trip to canada. He was upset as he has started liking her and wanted to get married asap

The pandit gave a new muhurat of a month and stated after that marriage only to take place after 4 months with the next muhurat

She was happy and thought that things were going her way. She will get her fateh . Little did she realise that the fateh was not in her destiny no matter how much she tried. The one sitting up there jo sab ka baap hain had his own plans as well to defeat her and save the two innocent souls

Fateh and tejo!

Jako rakhey saiyaan mar sekey na koye!

The great saying was coming into action soon with just a phone call to virks residence from tejo's workplace three weeks after jasmin's fall .


Tejo fainted in the classroom and fateh took her to the hospital. Declared

Pregnant!

Virks were in extreme shock puzzled confused but finally glad that junior was coming soon. Fateh did not know what to say. A strange feeling. An excitement! Babuji explained to him every father feels that way !

3 hours later

He held her arm to walk her to the room . Followed by virks. Gurpreet decided to make a healthy dish. She was too excited for her grandchild but still puzzled as to how it happened.

Promotion to dadi!

Who cares ! Cant wait to carry the little one in my arms and sunao lohriyaan! remix version not the old boring types !


Babuji and grandmother started planning toys and clothes for their great grandchild . Still puzzled

Who cares! Promotion happened that matters more!

Amrik was away with friends for a week outing

He was not informed as virks knew he would be upset

So let it be !

Nimmo was confused but dadi warned her to stay away as its good news for them. Otherwise pack and leave!

She was muted!

Fateh was the most puzzled

No one asked how it happened knowing well the details of it but excited for the junior

What a crazy family!

The strange feeling

He frowned looking at the sleeping tejo beside

Bina mezey liye huye baap bengeya !

Shared the news with buzo who advised

After one go for the second!

The more the merrier!


10am gynae clinic

The gynae was a family close friend

Ur blood test is positive and u will require an ultra sound on the 7th week to check the heartbeat of the fetus which is next month! Dr neha smiled as she spoke

Both were seated in the car silent thinking how life has been unfair to them. First the marriage! Now this!

She started crying and he consoled her that we will get through this together and further joked that it will be a sweet baby girl just like her mother . He will do everything except diaper changing. They laughed and took off to their new journey.


Kushbeer! They just left! All is fine! Plan working

Dr Neha stated happily after the pair left her clinic.

Kushbeer

Thank u neha!


Twist in the tale

Nothing happened between fateh and tejo that nite!

Fake pregnancy!


Masterminds revealed

Mahi kushbeer buzo!


It all started on the nite of the academy party where mahi tagged along tejo and fateh. A party with friends only. Advised by babuji to fateh and tejo after all their efforts

Go and enjoy with friends! Give urself a treat!

Everything went on fine but the moment jasmin appeared fateh was disturbed seeing her making the close dance moves with gippy. She was invited by tejo who had no choice after gippy found out from sandhus about the event and taunted tejo on the phone for not inviting him with jasmin instigating as the actual reason behind his deed


Mahi was upset watching her shattered brother drinking one glass of beer afer the other and tejo was consoling him. That was the time she realised how awful jasmin was and she needed to rescue the duo

She ran to the washroom sitting at a corner crying helplessly thinking how to save my brother and SIL marriage when suddenly a piece of paper flew towards her brushing against her left foot

A torn piece of a page from a magazine with

a baby picture on it!

Yes ! Idea !

She stood up excitedly and looked upwards at the ceiling saying thank u babaji.

The lord selected her as the saviour!

Kehtey hain bhagwan kisiko bhi apna zeriya bena leta hain!

She needed support

Buzo and papa!

Kushbeer disliked jasmin the most and will do anything to keep her away as well as he also had contacts

Buzo agreed there and then and advised mahi to execute the plan that nite itself. Mahi started forcing tejo to drink and keeping her company and Buzo did the same to fateh. Jasmin and gippy left as the latter had an urgent meeting with a friend. A last minute call! Jasmin was disappointed but had to obey his stern instructions to leave immediately.Little did she know that her bad time had started .The one up in the heaven had decided to punish her with his

Lathi!


All virks were asleep as soon as they reached the front gate. Mahi unlocked the door and supported tejo with buzo following behind doing the same for fateh. Both heavily drunk and the moment they were rested on the bed both dozed off. Mahi quickly removed tejo's clothes and covered her with the blanket! Then buzo walked into the room and did the same for fateh!


The next morning mahi consulted her dad who agreed to tag along with their plan. Anything to keep jasmin away. Both father and daughter hugged one another. Kushbeer complimented that he was proud of her to save her brother's marriage.

My little girl has grown up! He blessed her with teary eyes


After receiving news of jasmin's tragic accident they knew it was her plan so mahi came up with the next move

Fake pregnancy!

Kushbeer ex college mate dr neha was consulted and she agreed to do the friendly favour . Anything for u kushbeer! She was glad for the assistance and gave a prescription of a medicine that could make tejo faint as well as contacted the doctor at the hospital for further favour. The doctor was bribed by kushbeer

The medicine which was in liquid form was mixed in tejo's morning tea and two hours later she fainted in her classroom. Taken my fateh upon kushbeer's order to the hospital near the college. The doctor who was bribed made the false announcement!


The newly weds were unaware of the plotting and preparing themselves for their new journey of parenthood . Fateh purchased cute baby photos to be pasted on his bedroom walls seeing tejo was a little disturbed with that thing growing in her .She will feel better!

He bought some magazines on being a mummy so she could prepare herself better. Even supported her when she walks afraid she might slip. Tejo was touched by his kindness

He would be a good father!


4 days before jasmin's marriage

Sandhus dancing with joy . Tejo is pregnant! How it happened! Who cares! Yehhh junior coming soon!

She was sobbing lying on her bed !

He betrayed me! How could he!

Mami came into the room

Jasmin jab uperwaley ki lathi pedthi haina toh zor sey pedhti hain!

Ab peta chela!

Uski marzi sey koi petta bhi nehin hil sakta toh tu kya cheez hai!

Shadi kar aur jaa apney sasural!


Throughout the wedding functions he was taking a good care of her and sandhus did the same as well. Virks did not participate in the marriage at all. Samdhus didnt force them. After all the humiliations jasmin put them through. Tejo was the centre of attraction showered with love and food. Fateh playing along as the chipku husband which irritated her to the core that she finally decided to get married to gippy


Jasmin cried buckets on her vidaai. Plan flop. Fateh made her sister pregnant and cheated on her. Cant digest the massi promotion


All virks happy jasmin marriage completed. Tejo and fateh relieved a huge sigh

Finally!

Now the bomb drops!

The truth revelations by mahi and buzo .


Minutes later

Mahi running with tejo after her with a broom!

Buzo running with fateh after him with a hockey stick!

Thats all?

Wait a minute!

One more!

Kushbeer running with gurpreet dadi and babuji after him with their sandals and shoes!

All running in circles

Security guards laughing

Nimmo amrik expressionless!

A circus!







































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Fantastic 😂🤣🤣😂😅🤣😂😂

Hasi ruk hi nahi rahi h

Iska second part milega kya

Pleaseeeeeeeee

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh god it was so hilarious I still can't stop laughing I really want a continuation of this 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq for ur comments

No part 2

Let me explain the reasom for writing this fiction

Makers can easiky take this route to get jaspy marriage without offending fatejo fans

Jasmin fooling everyone

So why not fool her instead

Best way

Show fatejo consummated their marriage

Fake pregnancy drama

And now the best person is mahi buzo kushbeer and add one more good option viraj

Fatejo wont do anything but others can

Jaspy marriage should take place giving fatejo a break a while at least

She will return definitely after ditching gippy or vice versa

What worries if they take the typical itv way of the villain make it look the ML slept with her!

Fateh will be at sandhus now for the marriage preparations and the crazy woman can go beyond limits to stop the wedding and own him back

Backstabbing her own sister

So

It should be the other way round

Why not fateh and tejo do the deed!

Though it actually didnt happen

But make it look like!

Jasmin will be torn into pieces

She wont bear it

Either suicide stunt or

Marry gippy at that moment


The fake pregnancy route can be taken if jasmin does any other stunt to postpone the marriage

Example

Falling from the staircase!

The junior news will shatter her more

Whatever it is jasmin need to be fooled into marrying gippy!


I am thinking of one more fiction but a liitle different

Also on upcoming track

Edited by Aniash - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

i hope they really do something like this... but looking at the promos, I don't think it will be needed because they are gradually getting too addicted to the presence of each other. this was amazing though 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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i hope they really do something like this... but looking at the promos, I don't think it will be needed because they are gradually getting too addicted to the presence of each other. this was amazing though smiley37

tagged the wrong person earlier...lol 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

i hope they really do something like this... but looking at the promos, I don't think it will be needed because they are gradually getting too addicted to the presence of each other. this was amazing though smiley37

tagged the wrong person earlier...lol 😃


Tq for ur comment

Appreciate!

That's the problem

When leads are addicted to one another thats where they will get separated!

Jasmin is a nutcase

Can go to any extend!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome os.

Last few lines cracked me up.

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