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Posted: 3 years ago
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I dont knw how this mature content came...and now i cant even remeove it😁😁😁😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is a masterpiece❤️❤️


Itne dino se kahan chippa ke rakha tha...😆😆


This is what I badly wanted to watch in the show...smiley9smiley13

This version of Sakshi and also Vir too...Who is strong enough to tell his feelings...And she is strong enough to accept it and let go of him...Instead of turning into a vamp...



This is just so amazing....🤗👏😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow Mannu. This is beautiful.. youxpenned down what all of us always wanted.. in show we always got questins, why Vir loved this lady so much.. it also made sakshi's 5yrs suffering worthless..

I was excited for Sakshi's entry stbfirstctime because I knew the outcome. I knew this will strengthen PurVir bond. And it did, but it also tainted Sakshi's image. It always got me wondering how can a feamle put her love through so much pain.. cannt she see how much is he hurting. I wish this was the closure we would have got in show.

Nonethe less this was good to read..

If you have any more stories please please share.. 🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone for liking this story!

I had started writing this after the karwachauth scene bcoz I didn't like the way it was shown. But I didn't complete it. And then I stopped seeing the show...but my frustration hadn't lessened with the way Sakshi was portrayed.

I was a Sakshi fan from the beginning till the time the actress was announced😆 and then the handling for her character was so bad that my frustration kept mounting...till I converted it to this story, which was consistent with the Sakshi Vir used to paint (literally & figuratively) for us!

I refused to believe that Vir could have so much of devotion & love for a lady who was this shallow and brainless enough to trust her captors more than her husband.

And in my mind, Sakshi was always Vir's equal in every sense, his partner in his life, his work, in everything. While he ruled the village with a iron hold, she would be the one who nurtured the villagers with attention and care...that she would balance his sternness, with her love. And this was not possible if they were only lovers...they also had to be the best of friends- who were perfectly in sync with each other.

Only if Vir & Sakshi had this sort of a deep relationship, was Vir's devotion & junoon justifiable.

I'm glad I posted this one😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suppss

I love you dii for writing this 🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧


Yaar aise characters kyo nhi likhte ye Tv wale? Kyo negativity aur mahanta dikhani hai har track me?

This Sakshi seemed more real. The woman vir could have fallen for is this. Show me to lag rha tha ki vir ki sakshi accident me hi marr gyi.


Sakshi ka PurVir ko accept karna, isse uski izzat aur badh gyi... Sirf vir ki nazro me nhi balki meri bhi!

She sounded practical "hm waqt ko piche nhi chod sakte, behtar hai khud aage badh jaye..." I loved this dialg of her !

The way she departed, I made me sad. Kyoki ye wali sakshi positive hai aur uske jaane se bura laga.. par ye achha kia usne. The best she could have done !!


Here I can understand her pain better, sympathize with her. She understood vir and not pointed out his character.


A majestic piece of work diii

Applaudable 👏


Keep writing and posting 😚😚


Thanks Suppa 🤗🤗

Our telly has only 2 types of characters - ya toh mahaan ya negative! And both get on my nerves😆

@bold - that was the whole point of this story - I am so happy I could bring that out!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fazzzz

I love this! This is how I expected Sakshi to be. She was put on a pedestal by Vir that this is what I expected, not the one we got. The one we got was very selfish. That's why in the end, Vir said his Sakshi died in the car accident.

Thank you for writing this. It was great to read.


The show depicted 2 versions of Sakshi who were wholly unconnected to each other, in fact who were in contrast to each other!

Like you said, the way Vir had put her on a pedestal, we at least deserved a more realistic portrayal of her, otherwise it just ended up making Vir looking stupid

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Manu yaar tune kya likh diya....I literally cried yaar....yehi sakshi chahiye thi humesha....jisse viru ne toot ke pyaar kiya tha....Kaash wahi rahe ab wo.....❤️🤧🤧🤧


Love you yaar for writing this.....🤗


Sriiiii 🤗

Mujhe bhi Sakshi se utna hi pyaar tha, jitna Vir ko tha😆...it broke my heart to see her portrayal in the show. This story was a balm to sooth my broken heart😳


If Sakshi is being re-introduced in the show, they have one more opportunity to correct their mistake. At least now they should show that she learnt her mistake and has come to support Vir, not try & snatch him from Purvi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nezuko

Manu pehle hi post kardena chaiye tha


What can I say

From the beginning I always considered sakshi's character as a blueprint for purvi (don't know why)

So when the news broke that sakshi will make her entry in the show I was little bit of excited

I want to see what I imagine is it true or not

And we even got a little bit of jalak in holi confession track

But we all know what happened after that


Loved your version so much

You capture the essence oh her character so well

I must say you made me emotional ❤️

Thnx manu 🤗🤗

I wish with upcoming track we can get some sort of closure.


Nezu 🤗🤗

Main to pehle se hi Sakshi fan thi...but between Saba n Toral mera dil aur armaan sab chaknachoor ho gaye🥺


I hope they show a better Sakshi this time around...but I thought I better post this story before her character is spoilt even further🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: PSP07

Masterpiece hai ye 🥺🙌🏻❤️..Viru ne jis Sakshi se pyaar kiya tha woh same aisi hogi..suljhi huyi..jo sirf uska pyaar nahi best friend bhi thi..uss gadhe ka chodo yaar inhone mera dil jeet liya🤍...main chahti hu KC drame ke baad isko yaad rakhu show waala bhool jau☺️


Aur ITV writers mann kar raha tum sab par kodhe barsau..drama se upr mat badh jaana kabhi😤..nahi hota toh iss forum ke writers se tuition le lo😌


Thank you so much🤗 Sorry, I don't know you name...haven't' been on the forum for many months now😳


@bold- wohi toh yaar....Viru jaisa aadmi agar kisise itne jee-jaan se pyaar karta tha, at least show her worthy of that love. Inhone itna bakwas dikhaya Sakshi ko, that it looked as of she had Vir fooled for 20 years😵


@red - Thank you so much...so happy that you liked my version❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: RamonaG

Loved it Manasi 👍🏼👌

This is how Sakshi's character should have been written n her exit was so graceful in your story 💖not the ridiculous way it was shown in the show 🥴


Thanks Romy!! Dunno when our writers will learn that every character need not either be black or white! Just realistic & sensible is also very much acceptable😆

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