Short story on current track - MIYA GEYA ROLLER COASTER RIDE!

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Hi all

After a while i am writing a fiction

A thought came during this divorce track


Miya geya roller coaster ride!


Lights ,camera ,action!

She swayed her slim and curvy body with the waves of the music and postures designated for her shoot in the pink pastal saree

Tejo singh virk was now pronounced as a model who left her teaching career a fortnight ago. It all started from the retro nite party which she attended where the director of a modelling company noticed her charm and elegancy.

She was offered a lucrative salary of rs2 lakhs per assignment and was encouraged by her SIL Mahi virk to consider it rite away.

The virks had no objection as long as the assignments were meant for traditional attires.


Madam ur cheque is ready!

She smiled at the human resource assistant handing over to her the little piece of fortune. As she took slow steady steps on the pavement of the busy noisy street towards the bank , her thoughts were drawn to him , her husband fateh singh virk for the ridiculous behaviour that he had portrayed lately demanding for a divorce .

She had torn three copies of the divorce agreement in a row rite on his face refusing to give in as her sibling played cheap tactics of planting a dead rat in her room to get her removed from the family she adored deeply.

Yet he was adamant in obtaining the divorce. Fully manipulated by her shrewd sister who played along as his mistress under the same roof for three weeks now.

She frowned when she saw the fourth copy of the agreement lying on her dressing table. He was determined to get rid of her. Deep inside she was in pain. He was her first love

I want a divorce!

Just sign the papers and release me ok!

I dont love u!

His loud clear rude voice heard from behind.

She didnt turn to look at him. Pretended to ignore his sarcasm. It was not easy. She was shattered

He walked away quietly.

Ringgg!!

It was a call from the agency that hired her

Ms tejo the photoshoot was fabulous. Our editing team will release them tmrow !

She replied cheerfully

Thank u for giving me the opportunity!


Tune tejo ko bola sign karney key liye!

Jasmin lashed at him angrily

Jasu i am tired i am going to bed. Goodnite!

He walked away towards the living room

Virks celebrated tejo's first modelling accomplishment with joy at a dine in during lunch hours the very next afternoon..Fateh and jasmin didnt join them and planned their own outing at a different venue.

Two days later tejo singh virk became the talk of the town. Her pictures were everywhere. The first photoshoot was widely accepted by the public. It was all over the local press

An exotic indian beauty!

She looked gorgeous in those traditional outfits

Virks were showered with compliments.

He was glad to see her moving on with new adventures of life ahead. His dark eyes still set on her postures and outfits as he surfed on his laptop . Her snaps were downloaded by few admirers on the internet

That million dollar smile. His thoughts crawled towards the past. She was his best friend . He sighed to the fate that they had to go through. She was not the person he loved.

Little did he realise that the whispers of destiny were already knocking on his door

The roller coaster ride!

The next morning at 9 am

Ringgh!

He picked up at the first ring as he munched his favourite aloo parotha prepared by darling mother.

Hello! Fateh singh virk there on the phone??

A husky male voice . The caller was a stranger with grammatical errors

Yes! Speaking

He replied calmly

stranger excitedly : Sir! When ur divorce will complete! Have u submitted papers??

Fateh confused: how do u know i am getting a divorce

Stranger excited and laughing: come on sir whole pind knows ur sali living with u. U think we dont know how ur marriage took place

Fateh angry: why u want to know about my divorce??

Stranger: excited : i want to marry ur wife after u divorce her. That's why.

Fateh furious: how dare u!

Stranger excited: sir , abhitak dare nehin kiya. Aap chaho toh ghar aa sakta hun. Apki biwi ka kamra kon sa hain. Raat ko aunga kisi ko bhi peta nehin chelega!

Fateh furious: teri toh!

Stranger excited: teri toh kya sir. Khud sali key sath aish kar rehey ho . Apki biwi akeli pedgeyi upersey ..

Fateh furious : uper sey kya!

Stranger: bedhi soni teh hot hain !

Sir ap fatafat divorce dedo taki hum unsey shadi karley!

Line disconnected

He could barely swallow his meal as he discovered a male out there eagerly waiting for his divorce to take place to get tied up with his wife.


2pm at the academy after lunch

He could not concentrate . There was so much of work pending. Thanks to jasmin for her tantrums.

Ringg!!

He picked up at the third ring. An unknown caller. Could it be that same guy!

Heloo !! A deep voice on the line. It wasnt him. Fateh felt a relief

Yes how can i help u ! Iam fateh speaking!

Stranger proudly: and i am ur future sautan!

Fateh shocked: kya!

Stranger calmly: i am going to marry ur wife na after u divorce her.!

Fateh furious : nonsense!

Stranger calmly : I am talking sense sir. U concentrate with ur senses than u understand i am talking sense and also i am sensible. U are out of ur senses that u leave ur beautiful hot wife for ur sali. U act very senseless and u are a man filled with nonsense. I have more sense than u have all senses in ur body

He frowned as the stranger went on describing the route of sense

Furiously he stated: enough!

Stranger calmly: enough is enough sir! U enough with ur divorce and i enough with a marriage with ur wife.

He couldnt take it any longer and disconnected the line.

Ringg!

He took the call angrily.

I said enough is enough!

Tusi kon boldey phone wich!

A decent voice of a sardar on the line.

He felt relieved . It was someone else.

Heloo mey fateh bol raha hun ! Tusi kaun!

Sardar : tohadi voti kithey hain ji. Sunia tohada divorce ho geya ji.

Oh no ! He frowned

Not again!

Stranger continued impatiently: tohadi voti bedi soni tey pyari hain ji. Modeling shodeling sona kar lendi hain. Very charming personality hain ji.

Fateh angry: toh mey kya karun!

Sardar excitedly : oo ke karna hain ji bas apna address dedo teh asi tohadi voti nu uthakar lejavangey. Dilwale dulhania lehjaingey! Asi tusi razi teh ki karlega kazi!

Fateh disconnected immediately.

It was unbearable. Three men demanding to get hitched with his wife. Desperately waiting for his divorce. He sighed as there were no more calls throughout the day.

The next morning at 10 am as he was in a meeting with an investor at the academy, he received a frantic call from his sister Mahi stating that a crowd of twenty gentlemen standing outside virks entrance ready with their proposals

To marry his wife!

He rushed home instantly and ushered them away. It was all over the press. Fateh singh virk and tejo virk getting a divorce. Reporters started assembling at the front gate seeking for answers.

Three days in a row he received anonymous phone calls from strangers demanding to marry his wife and virks as well as sandhus were showered with knocks on their doors with awesome proposals from even upper class societies residing in city areas for tejo singh virk

The modelling career made her famous that men were eagerly waiting at her doorstep to ask for her hand .

Sandhus were delighted that their beloved daughter was in demand. Never thought for once that she will garner fame . She took up the new career to try new ventures in life and definitely for the lucrative amount offered as she would be able to help her family financially. Sandhus were going through tough tides of finance after gaining loses on family business.

She ran the cold shower on her face and felt its freshness. It was her third assignment today. Dressed in a blue flowerly designed salwar kameez she hurried towards the hallway leaving the fourth copy of divorce agreement made by demanding husband few days back on the dining table with her signature on them ready to release him finally.

His dark eyes set on her signature as his sister handed over the sheets of paper to him after tejo left.

Bhabhi already signed. She said get them submitted today. She cant wait to divorce u and move on with her life. She had enough of urs and jasmin's nonsense !

Mahi calmly passed over tejo's message.

She was glad that finally she placed the signature that will release her from all sorrows as she swayed with wonderful postures and received compliments after completing the task for the day.

Exhausted she laid on her bed as she reached home. Suddenly her eyes caught tiny pieces of papers on the dressing table. She moved forward for a closer look and gasped

The divorce agreement was torn by her very own husband fateh singh virk





Ps

Due to restrictions i could tag few only

An apology

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Oyy seeti maar kahani hain, maaza aa gaaya. 😀😀😀🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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🤣🤣🤣🤣


Jaise ko taisa.

You wrote after so long....accha laga re❤️

And Fateh ki jo phati re🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

🤣🤣🤣🤣


Jaise ko taisa.

You wrote after so long....accha laga re❤️

And Fateh ki jo phati re🤣🤣


Story line was crappy

Didnt have the bug to write

This divorce track brought some thoughts

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Posted: 3 years ago
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More tagging on the way

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Love love love it!!!! Hahah.. i do fee like she should not give him a divorce nor be with him! Like sadmey do!! The calls😂😂😂

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Honestly it's more realistic than what the showmakers are making...

But honestly it's so hilarious. And independent tejo😍❤

#independenttejosupremacy

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Entertainment entertainment total entertainment😆

Good one yaar.

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Awesome 👌👌😂😂😂wish aisa ho Pata

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Originally posted by: Aniash

Hi all

After a while i am writing a fiction

A thought came during this divorce track


Miya geya roller coaster ride!


Lights ,camera ,action!

She swayed her slim and curvy body with the waves of the music and postures designated for her shoot in the pink pastal saree

Tejo singh virk was now pronounced as a model who left her teaching career a fortnight ago. It all started from the retro nite party which she attended where the director of a modelling company noticed her charm and elegancy.

She was offered a lucrative salary of rs2 lakhs per assignment and was encouraged by her SIL Mahi virk to consider it rite away.

The virks had no objection as long as the assignments were meant for traditional attires.


Madam ur cheque is ready!

She smiled at the human resource assistant handing over to her the little piece of fortune. As she took slow steady steps on the pavement of the busy noisy street towards the bank , her thoughts were drawn to him , her husband fateh singh virk for the ridiculous behaviour that he had portrayed lately demanding for a divorce .

She had torn three copies of the divorce agreement in a row rite on his face refusing to give in as her sibling played cheap tactics of planting a dead rat in her room to get her removed from the family she adored deeply.

Yet he was adamant in obtaining the divorce. Fully manipulated by her shrewd sister who played along as his mistress under the same roof for three weeks now.

She frowned when she saw the fourth copy of the agreement lying on her dressing table. He was determined to get rid of her. Deep inside she was in pain. He was her first love

I want a divorce!

Just sign the papers and release me ok!

I dont love u!

His loud clear rude voice heard from behind.

She didnt turn to look at him. Pretended to ignore his sarcasm. It was not easy. She was shattered

He walked away quietly.

Ringgg!!

It was a call from the agency that hired her

Ms tejo the photoshoot was fabulous. Our editing team will release them tmrow !

She replied cheerfully

Thank u for giving me the opportunity!


Tune tejo ko bola sign karney key liye!

Jasmin lashed at him angrily

Jasu i am tired i am going to bed. Goodnite!

He walked away towards the living room

Virks celebrated tejo's first modelling accomplishment with joy at a dine in during lunch hours the very next afternoon..Fateh and jasmin didnt join them and planned their own outing at a different venue.

Two days later tejo singh virk became the talk of the town. Her pictures were everywhere. The first photoshoot was widely accepted by the public. It was all over the local press

An exotic indian beauty!

She looked gorgeous in those traditional outfits

Virks were showered with compliments.

He was glad to see her moving on with new adventures of life ahead. His dark eyes still set on her postures and outfits as he surfed on his laptop . Her snaps were downloaded by few admirers on the internet

That million dollar smile. His thoughts crawled towards the past. She was his best friend . He sighed to the fate that they had to go through. She was not the person he loved.

Little did he realise that the whispers of destiny were already knocking on his door

The roller coaster ride!

The next morning at 9 am

Ringgh!

He picked up at the first ring as he munched his favourite aloo parotha prepared by darling mother.

Hello! Fateh singh virk there on the phone??

A husky male voice . The caller was a stranger with grammatical errors

Yes! Speaking

He replied calmly

stranger excitedly : Sir! When ur divorce will complete! Have u submitted papers??

Fateh confused: how do u know i am getting a divorce

Stranger excited and laughing: come on sir whole pind knows ur sali living with u. U think we dont know how ur marriage took place

Fateh angry: why u want to know about my divorce??

Stranger: excited : i want to marry ur wife after u divorce her. That's why.

Fateh furious: how dare u!

Stranger excited: sir , abhitak dare nehin kiya. Aap chaho toh ghar aa sakta hun. Apki biwi ka kamra kon sa hain. Raat ko aunga kisi ko bhi peta nehin chelega!

Fateh furious: teri toh!

Stranger excited: teri toh kya sir. Khud sali key sath aish kar rehey ho . Apki biwi akeli pedgeyi upersey ..

Fateh furious : uper sey kya!

Stranger: bedhi soni teh hot hain !

Sir ap fatafat divorce dedo taki hum unsey shadi karley!

Line disconnected

He could barely swallow his meal as he discovered a male out there eagerly waiting for his divorce to take place to get tied up with his wife.


2pm at the academy after lunch

He could not concentrate . There was so much of work pending. Thanks to jasmin for her tantrums.

Ringg!!

He picked up at the third ring. An unknown caller. Could it be that same guy!

Heloo !! A deep voice on the line. It wasnt him. Fateh felt a relief

Yes how can i help u ! Iam fateh speaking!

Stranger proudly: and i am ur future sautan!

Fateh shocked: kya!

Stranger calmly: i am going to marry ur wife na after u divorce her.!

Fateh furious : nonsense!

Stranger calmly : I am talking sense sir. U concentrate with ur senses than u understand i am talking sense and also i am sensible. U are out of ur senses that u leave ur beautiful hot wife for ur sali. U act very senseless and u are a man filled with nonsense. I have more sense than u have all senses in ur body

He frowned as the stranger went on describing the route of sense

Furiously he stated: enough!

Stranger calmly: enough is enough sir! U enough with ur divorce and i enough with a marriage with ur wife.

He couldnt take it any longer and disconnected the line.

Ringg!

He took the call angrily.

I said enough is enough!

Tusi kon boldey phone wich!

A decent voice of a sardar on the line.

He felt relieved . It was someone else.

Heloo mey fateh bol raha hun ! Tusi kaun!

Sardar : tohadi voti kithey hain ji. Sunia tohada divorce ho geya ji.

Oh no ! He frowned

Not again!

Stranger continued impatiently: tohadi voti bedi soni tey pyari hain ji. Modeling shodeling sona kar lendi hain. Very charming personality hain ji.

Fateh angry: toh mey kya karun!

Sardar excitedly : oo ke karna hain ji bas apna address dedo teh asi tohadi voti nu uthakar lejavangey. Dilwale dulhania lehjaingey! Asi tusi razi teh ki karlega kazi!

Fateh disconnected immediately.

It was unbearable. Three men demanding to get hitched with his wife. Desperately waiting for his divorce. He sighed as there were no more calls throughout the day.

The next morning at 10 am as he was in a meeting with an investor at the academy, he received a frantic call from his sister Mahi stating that a crowd of twenty gentlemen standing outside virks entrance ready with their proposals

To marry his wife!

He rushed home instantly and ushered them away. It was all over the press. Fateh singh virk and tejo virk getting a divorce. Reporters started assembling at the front gate seeking for answers.

Three days in a row he received anonymous phone calls from strangers demanding to marry his wife and virks as well as sandhus were showered with knocks on their doors with awesome proposals from even upper class societies residing in city areas for tejo singh virk

The modelling career made her famous that men were eagerly waiting at her doorstep to ask for her hand .

Sandhus were delighted that their beloved daughter was in demand. Never thought for once that she will garner fame . She took up the new career to try new ventures in life and definitely for the lucrative amount offered as she would be able to help her family financially. Sandhus were going through tough tides of finance after gaining loses on family business.

She ran the cold shower on her face and felt its freshness. It was her third assignment today. Dressed in a blue flowerly designed salwar kameez she hurried towards the hallway leaving the fourth copy of divorce agreement made by demanding husband few days back on the dining table with her signature on them ready to release him finally.

His dark eyes set on her signature as his sister handed over the sheets of paper to him after tejo left.

Bhabhi already signed. She said get them submitted today. She cant wait to divorce u and move on with her life. She had enough of urs and jasmin's nonsense !

Mahi calmly passed over tejo's message.

She was glad that finally she placed the signature that will release her from all sorrows as she swayed with wonderful postures and received compliments after completing the task for the day.

Exhausted she laid on her bed as she reached home. Suddenly her eyes caught tiny pieces of papers on the dressing table. She moved forward for a closer look and gasped

The divorce agreement was torn by her very own husband fateh singh virk





Ps

Due to restrictions i could tag few only

An apology

Others feel free to read

U can leave a comment if u wish to


It's really good Ani...padhke maza agaya😆

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