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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow đŸ€©

Loved it , wish they explore VD’s POV after Mandaar’s downfall . It’s very much needed. Probably won’t be as good as this Os though but still I wish they give us such kinda scene .


This OS was amazing . Keep writing đŸ„ł

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: PSharada

Wow what an amazing piece. Loved reading this and I would be happy if the creative's give at least 1/10th of what you have written for Vijay here. I really want Vijay to ponder on his deeds and what all he said to Raghav earlier after the truth of his son is out.


Wow! I'm really happy you enjoyed this... I tried my best to bring out Vijay's perspective while being in character.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

I really wish that 
if makers show Deshmukh witness even 1 percent of the passion you have written between the couple, it will be highly satisfying for me..


Thanks for reading. I've tried to bring out the in character reactions suitable for the couple as well as VD.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rexana19

I love the way you write... There's this rawness In your words that send feels deep in my heart. Keep up the great work, dear author! Looking forward to binge reading everything that you've written...❀❀


I'm humbled by your words really. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing my work. I'de love to read your thoughts about my other works as well.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for reading! 😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Wow đŸ€©

Loved it , wish they explore VD’s POV after Mandaar’s downfall . It’s very much needed. Probably won’t be as good as this Os though but still I wish they give us such kinda scene .


This OS was amazing . Keep writing đŸ„ł


Oh dear! Thanks a lot! I don't know whether what I've written deserves to be called that good but I'll definitely try to keep it up.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I had kept this to read at the last after I had watched the Episode as soon as you had tagged me...for I was sure I would need it cos VD ain't getting redeemed by the CVs. This guy is an absolute nutcaseđŸ€Ą


I feel so sorry for us viewers & you all writers who have been hoping for some sense from his character cos he was a Father afterall. He had a complete Family & Gosh! Pallavi was so bent on getting his approval for anything & would be so trusting of him only to be dealt with blows after blows😔


But anyways keeping my absolute disgust for this utterly useless character created, your writing was an absolute Treat! đŸ€— Loved the details on Raghav's shooting skills & Pallavi's trauma of seeing her love in that position. How Raghav takes care of his Love, his Wife ....kaash aisa real mein hota😳


That Shot for Mandaar was a good shot😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for reading! đŸ€—

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