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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

WOW...This is such an Awesome update !!!😳

You are such an Awesome Writer that apart from this FF...You should even try to write short OS or drabbles too...

Pehle fazzz ko complete karne do ye FF 😆

The way you incorporate the side characters and actually progress the parallel tracks like Sudha and Veer's track is commendable and it actually makes the story more intriguing...

Loved how Dhwani finally confessed of how she gets affected by Virendra's closeness and touch...And how she was smitten by him❤️

And Poor Vir he wanted to enjoy all the moments...The happiness he felt...But he drank his wife's spiked drink...😒😈 Kya kare bechara...

Why he is such a namoona

Itna kya shauk tha pine ka ab bhugto 😈


Annddddd the last part...Damn I can't wait to know what Daksh will see...😉😲😈😎

Esa cliffhanger pe kaun chorta hai

Fir bhi kuch nai kar payega chomu bhaiya

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Posted: 3 years ago

This is such an awesome update Fazz !!!👌🏼

I can’t wait to find out what will Bhaiya see ☺️

And what will be his reaction after seeing that 👀😽

Do update 🔜😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nezuko

WOW...This is such an Awesome update !!!smiley42smiley9

You are such an Awesome Writer that apart from this FF...You should even try to write short OS or drabbles too...

Pehle fazzz ko complete karne do ye FF smiley36

The way you incorporate the side characters and actually progress the parallel tracks like Sudha and Veer's track is commendable and it actually makes the story more intriguing...

Loved how Dhwani finally confessed of how she gets affected by Virendra's closeness and touch...And how she was smitten by himsmiley42smiley27

And Poor Vir he wanted to enjoy all the moments...The happiness he felt...But he drank his wife's spiked drink...smiley13smiley15 Kya kare bechara...

Why he is such a namoona

Itna kya shauk tha pine ka ab bhugto smiley15

Annddddd the last part...Damn I can't wait to know what Daksh will see...smiley2smiley3smiley15



Esa cliffhanger pe kaun chorta hai

Fir bhi kuch nai kar payega chomu bhaiya


@bold Areee...FF toh side by side chalta rahega...😈🤪 OS daily PurVir dose ke liye...😆😎


Full on Namoona hai...But cutiepie bhi hai...Apni wife ka jhoota peena ke chakkar mein...Lene ke dene ho gaye...🤪🥺 😳


Chomu bhaiya se kuch na hoga...But kuch dekha toh hoga...😉☺️ Kuch aisa waisa dekhle...Mazz as jaayega...🥳😉🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Whoa..what an ending of this part....kya latka diya yaar tumne....but dhwani and viru in that's situation...bechara bhayya...😆


Amazing update...

It was the only way I could end the chapter. To find out more...


...Keep reading.😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

WOW...This is such an Awesome update !!!😳

You are such an Awesome Writer that apart from this FF...You should even try to write short OS or drabbles too...


The way you incorporate the side characters and actually progress the parallel tracks like Sudha and Veer's track is commendable and it actually makes the story more intriguing...


Loved how Dhwani finally confessed of how she gets affected by Virendra's closeness and touch...And how she was smitten by him❤️

And Poor Vir he wanted to enjoy all the moments...The happiness he felt...But he drank his wife's spiked drink...😒😈 Kya kare bechara...



Annddddd the last part...Damn I can't wait to know what Daksh will see...😉😲😈😎

I told you, that you'll like this chapter.😂

Thank you for complimenting my writing skills. Originally I was just going to write with PurVir only but I realised my chapters were too short, so added the extras.😂

I wish I could write a OS but as I said to Sofia. I feel if I started one, I wouldn't be able to stop so it would no longer be a OS. Plus I can't come up with original idea's. This story came about due to the leap.😂

Sharing a drink will increase their love, even if it is spiked.😂

Coming up next...Drama.

Edited by Fazzzz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: darkchocolates


@bold Areee...FF toh side by side chalta rahega...😈🤪 OS daily PurVir dose ke liye...😆😎


Full on Namoona hai...But cutiepie bhi hai...Apni wife ka jhoota peena ke chakkar mein...Lene ke dene ho gaye...🤪🥺 😳


Chomu bhaiya se kuch na hoga...But kuch dekha toh hoga...😉☺️ Kuch aisa waisa dekhle...Mazz as jaayega...🥳😉🤣

Chomu bhaiya ke expression dekhne wale honge he will do more melodrama then KK ever did 🤣🤪

Uske bad bomb phootega that she is viru's wife and not your so called fiancee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Vaise I already read the part 7 but I was waiting for part 8 to comment 😳

And fazzzzz what a chapter and what a party 😉

I must say your viru is so smooth


Loved their dance and how the close proximity was affecting her 😆😳


So that guy was chomu bhaiya's friend okay.. didn't see that coming 😈


My man viru is so protective about her ☺️

And tf my namoone were doing in room inke nashe wali harkate 😆🤣

And bhaiya saw them in that position

Bhaiya pls back off ab kuch nai ho sakta sab Khatam tata bye bye 🤣

Thank you for liking the chapters. I was waiting for your comment but you wanted to comment on both together. Hmm. Makes sense.

Viru is smooth, openly flirting with her but she's in denial.

Yes that guy was Daksh' friend. I just needed a way for more conflict.😂

Daksh is actually a nice guy in this FF not just in the show. Continue reading to find out more.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: RamonaG

This is such an awesome update Fazz !!!👌🏼

I can’t wait to find out what will Bhaiya see ☺️

And what will be his reaction after seeing that 👀😽

Do update 🔜😆

Thank you for reading and liking.

A shock in store for Daksh.

Coming up...Drama.

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Posted: 3 years ago

The slow burn romance is exactly what I wanted in the show rather than trying to get her memories back. Hence why I've written it like this.

Daksh is also Dhwani's bhaiya, just that she hasn't realised it yet.😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Chomu bhaiya ke expression dekhne wale honge he will do more melodrama then KK ever did 🤣🤪

Uske bad bomb phootega that she is viru's wife and not your so called fiancee

True...KK == Chomu Bhaiya...Melodrama and Chipka Chipki same type ki Karte hai...😈😆


Bomb phutne ke baad aayegi sabse shaatir khiladi Nani😈😎

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