pandya niwaas ki anokhi kahaaniyan || notice - page fifteen - Page 6

Mindblowing, I got goosebumps by reading it...

Please give this one a second part...

Read the last two os

Khushian

It was beautiful ❤️

Loved the sensible Shivi, their conversation was beautiful ❤️😍

Shivi were not shy about their feelings❤️

Noise

It was so deep and intense os👏

Raavi's suicide tendencies and Shiva's turnmoil was beautifully described👏

I loved khusian n noise both...

I request you kindly provide the list of all FF u have written... I would love to read all...

Both stories were amazing atleast here we are both pov otherwise no expectations from show.....

I understand her frustration and that she feels dying would be better than living due to the events of her life....

but she is mentally torturing not just herself but others as well

the kangan she finds stupid are not stupid it holds a lot of value and emotions to the concerned people.....

keeping all these aside this was an intense story....u feel for not just her but people around her as well....coz when something like this happens the person doing it leaves the world or not but the family is scarred for life

Woman! I love you!🥺🤧

You make me forget the outside world for a second.

Guess I could say the chapter noise made me forget the chaotic noises around me👏

That was just🥺

Loved it♥️

I love love how much you address Raavi's trauma. The show has it all buried. Thank you. You write beautifully :')

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

Edit:

this was sooooooooo well written 🥺

it was almost as if I could see everything happening 😭💔

Thank you so much. 💗🤗

Pichle OS ke liye bas I'm here hi likhna tha kya? 😆

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This was deep. And though a bit scary, this was in tandem with both their emotions..I liked it

Would it have a continuation?😆

Thank you! 🤗

As for a continuation, I'm not really sure. All the pieces that are posted here are meant to be one shots only. :)

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Thank you so much. 💗🤗

Pichle OS ke liye bas I'm here hi likhna tha kya? 😆

sorry sorry sorry, I just edited it 🤣

I did it before too but idk where it disappeared 🤡

Originally posted by: Foxii

Mindblowing, I got goosebumps by reading it...

Please give this one a second part...

Thank you.
Sorry, there won't be a second part to it.