Originally posted by: Wandering_mind
Hi there!
What a wow! This was so damn relatable. AsYa is truly a couple I adore, but Asad's lack of respect and trust always irked me. His bitter, hurtful words said without a second thought was very unacceptable and not once did Zoya deserve to bear the brunt of his bad temper.
I absolutely loved the last part! My heart went out to Zoya, Asad really needs to stop doing this! He can't keep hurting her like that and then say he loves her. It makes him look like a hypocrite who keeps taking her for granted. At times I would be mad at Zoya too for being so forgiving! He needed to learn the hard way. That 'get out' at the end felt good you know! Asad so deserved it! He better make up for it and make Zoya actually feel that she's where his world begins and ends, otherwise he doesn't deserve her!
It's high time he learns that he can't keeping masking his real emotions at the expense of hurting someone he claims to love.
I want Asad to voice every word of love just as sincerely as he hurts her.
Your writing beautifully captures all the raw emotions in every moment. It's almost like you voice the reader's thoughts and so I find it very relatable! Looking forward to the last part! Update soon and thanks for writing this one!
Keep the Asya stories coming! I'll be so glad to read them!
Love,
Shreya
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