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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesomeeee!!!! Now please make him apologize to her! Apologize in a way that it shows she means so much to him!😭😭😭 This was awesome! The way dilshaad supported Zoya and how Zoya took a stand for herself! Plus Asad accepting his love and crying😭😭😭😭 Loved it!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sj_qh_kabhi

Awesomeeee!!!! Now please make him apologize to her! Apologize in a way that it shows she means so much to him!😭😭😭 This was awesome! The way dilshaad supported Zoya and how Zoya took a stand for herself! Plus Asad accepting his love and crying😭😭😭😭 Loved it!❤️

Thank you so much!! Your comments always make me smile ☺️. So glad you loved it!!!

I'll post the next (and last) part soon!

Till then, loads of love 💗💗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haha ikr, thanks for reading!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Damn God someone get me a mother like Dilshad . I legit love how understanding she is and how she treats Zoya like her own daughter ... Dilshad hands down broke the convention of typical toxic saasumas back during QH days ... ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I love the way you wrote Zoya I swear the picture I had in mind is completely justified here ...independent young woman . Way to go for ... As for Asad isn’t it like role reversal in majority of the cases Zoya is running behind asad but this time he will . God I do want to read it eagerly

update soon you :) loved it


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MilkBiscuits

Damn God someone get me a mother like Dilshad . I legit love how understanding she is and how she treats Zoya like her own daughter ... Dilshad hands down broke the convention of typical toxic saasumas back during QH days ... ❤️

And the best part is, she loves both of them! I loved how Zoya teased her that she wasn't 'saasu-maa'-ish enough in the show! 😃❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MilkBiscuits

I love the way you wrote Zoya I swear the picture I had in mind is completely justified here ...independent young woman . Way to go for ... As for Asad isn’t it like role reversal in majority of the cases Zoya is running behind asad but this time he will . God I do want to read it eagerly

update soon you :) loved it


Thank you! Weirdly I'm a sucker for 'Asad-running-behind-Zoya-after-realizing-how-special-she-is' stories hehe. AND, now that I'm satisfied that it's MilkBiscuits approved😉, next part will come soooooon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi there!


What a wow! This was so damn relatable. AsYa is truly a couple I adore, but Asad's lack of respect and trust always irked me. His bitter, hurtful words said without a second thought was very unacceptable and not once did Zoya deserve to bear the brunt of his bad temper.


I absolutely loved the last part! My heart went out to Zoya, Asad really needs to stop doing this! He can't keep hurting her like that and then say he loves her. It makes him look like a hypocrite who keeps taking her for granted. At times I would be mad at Zoya too for being so forgiving! He needed to learn the hard way. That 'get out' at the end felt good you know! Asad so deserved it! He better make up for it and make Zoya actually feel that she's where his world begins and ends, otherwise he doesn't deserve her!

It's high time he learns that he can't keeping masking his real emotions at the expense of hurting someone he claims to love.


I want Asad to voice every word of love just as sincerely as he hurts her.


Your writing beautifully captures all the raw emotions in every moment. It's almost like you voice the reader's thoughts and so I find it very relatable! Looking forward to the last part! Update soon and thanks for writing this one!


Keep the Asya stories coming! I'll be so glad to read them!


Love,

Shreya

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yep I’m camping at the forum untill you update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wandering_mind

Hi there!


What a wow! This was so damn relatable. AsYa is truly a couple I adore, but Asad's lack of respect and trust always irked me. His bitter, hurtful words said without a second thought was very unacceptable and not once did Zoya deserve to bear the brunt of his bad temper.


I absolutely loved the last part! My heart went out to Zoya, Asad really needs to stop doing this! He can't keep hurting her like that and then say he loves her. It makes him look like a hypocrite who keeps taking her for granted. At times I would be mad at Zoya too for being so forgiving! He needed to learn the hard way. That 'get out' at the end felt good you know! Asad so deserved it! He better make up for it and make Zoya actually feel that she's where his world begins and ends, otherwise he doesn't deserve her!

It's high time he learns that he can't keeping masking his real emotions at the expense of hurting someone he claims to love.


I want Asad to voice every word of love just as sincerely as he hurts her.


Your writing beautifully captures all the raw emotions in every moment. It's almost like you voice the reader's thoughts and so I find it very relatable! Looking forward to the last part! Update soon and thanks for writing this one!


Keep the Asya stories coming! I'll be so glad to read them!


Love,

Shreya

I seriously do not know how to respond to your wonderful comment! 😊 The only thing I can do is thank you immensely for reading my story, and liking it! I'll update soon...

Loads of love! 💝💝

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