DEEP IN LOVE: OS

Hi! I'm new to this mhrw forum. I have written 2 of my works in Arjun forum. I am currently learning , so I always welcome constructive critics in all forms. I would love , if you guys show whether my works are liked by you or not and any writing critics are always welcome.

I hope my works and I both will be welcomed here.

Originally posted by: Lekha_Acharya

Hi! I'm new to this mhrw forum. I have written 2 of my works in Arjun forum. I am currently learning , so I always welcome constructive critics in all forms. I would love , if you guys show whether my works are liked by you or not and any writing critics are always welcome.

I hope my works and I both will be welcomed here.

Welcome to the forum dear. 🤗🤗

Do continue ur passion for writing. 👍👍

Mandaar heard what Sulochana kaku and Maansi were talking hidden. His mind raced back to the conversation he had with Sunny. Yet he disliked him, he could see through the clear façade of sunny's love for kirthi. He can see that sunny's love for krithi is all for her brother's money and property, yet the foolish girl that krithi was , she could not see through it and was helping them. Well , anyway he got what he wanted - Pallavi!

Yet again, today he for a second felt like he was again defeated. Was really pallavi is with him? Do pallavi really love him or was all of it was a façade? He again started to question his reality.

Looking at mandaar , pallavi knew mandaar started to question everything ; after all she was not pallavi sawant or pallavi deshmukh to be foolish or to be fooled. She is Pallavi Raghav Rao! A name that was enough to put fear and terror to shame , for gods and devils to kneel down. Yes , she is the wife of Raghav Rao , one who is always feared and yet been respected , one who people know better not to cross by yet was easily approached by needy . A name everyone knew yet no-one whispered.

She is no more the one to be toyed with , since with raghav , she has learnt to recognize people's intentions with a single sight of them. And this idiot of her ex- husband , knew nothing about her, The Pallavi Raghav Rao. Yet both the Rao's has a great heart to bestow upon him the truth and the attitude of them soon.

She knew he will take a test of her soon, as on cue, mandaar called her to his room on an excuse of finding an old sweater.

mandaar: Pallavi, do you want to earn my trust?

pallavi: Yes mandaar. i want to.

mandaar: Then burn this photo.

pallavi: who's is this?

mandaar: raghav.

It felt as if the world has crushed down for pallavi, yet she knew she has to earn his trust somehow. But how can she burn the photo of her husband? She can burn herself alive yet could not stand a single thought of raghav getting a single scratch.so , she did what came first in her mind- to burn her saree.

pallavi gave a look to mandaar and lit up a matchstick and moved her hand towards the photo as if to light it up , yet before it could touch the photo she left the matchstick and it fell in her saree's carefully kept pallu . She showed the whole façade as an accident to mandaar to make him believe it.

Seeing her saree in fire , mandaar panicked . seeing it as a chance , pallavi ran into the courtyard screaming for help. Looking her screaming for help, everyone assembled in the courtyard. Seeing his once upon a time daughter in danger, the father in Vijay deshmukh jumped forgetting all his enmity with her. He asked his useless son to extinguish the fire,but all he could do was running upto her and with his bare hand started blowing off the fire where in turn got his hand burnt completely. Meanwhile, kaka and amrutha brought buckets of fire and spilled it on her to put off the fire. Everyone heaved in sigh when they saw the fire is put off and pallavi is safe, even for once kaku and maansi truly was worried about her.

Looking at the scene behold mandaar was left guilt-tripped and amruta felt something was off and informed farad about the same.

Here, in Rao mansion. raghav was playing with food in his plate and mind in thoughts of pallavi's safety whereas amma saw her son and daughter-in-law's suffering and wished to her venkatashwara to solve this problem quickly. Farad came running shouting for his anna startling everyone in the home.

raghav: why are you shouting farad?

farad: anna, amrutha called and told me that bhabhi's saree had caught fire.

raghav: what ! is pallavi safe? I have to go and check it myself.

amma: stop raghav, first let farad complete.

amma nodded at farad to start and farad told everything from mandaar's asking pallavi to burn his photo to saving pallavi that amrutha told him which actually pallavi has told her.

Hearing to the incident , everyone taught that raghav will be berserk but to everyone's surprise , he was all quite and after a few moments , one by one tears started to fall down. Before everyone could ask anything , farad's phone buzzed indicating everyone of a call.

But raghav was in daze looking at pallavi's love for him. She always kept him as her first priority, loved him like none could. But was it possible to love someone like this? Even for an act , she could not see a scratch on him , even be it his photo, rather she choose to burn herself. On this realization, he fell all for once again and this time only harder and deeper.

Farad saw it was a video call from amrutha . On attending all amrutha did was signaled him was pallavi through her eyes. Without any words said, farad understood her and gave his phone to his anna for his bhabhi to talk.

Both raghav and pallavi saw each other , they said nothing but their eyes showed the love and trust they had for the other and ecstasy on seeing their love. They had a smile plastered on their face.

After a long time , all they could say to each other was " I LOVE YOU".

Beautiful update ❤