ShiVi TS: Kuch toh tha tere mere....Darmiyaan||Last prt pg 11 [27/09] - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Another great story from you! Looks like Krish will now play cupid for shivi ❤️

Can't wait to read more!

Awww thanks Aaliya! 😍🤗❤

Apna Krishu is praying for the idiots to gain thodi si buddhi 😆

Next one will be up in a few😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Great Start, hope Krish does something to help them

Continue soon please

Awww thanks!🤗😍❤

Poor Krishu is trying 😅

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2: Tu haathon mein toh hai mere, hai kyun nahi lakeeron mein, yeh kaisa tera ishq hai, sajnaa...



Raavi could hear birds starting to twitter and peep outside her window, and watched the first light appearing. She had not slept at all. His face kept haunting her all night; his words dripping with bile, and Raavi felt suddenly sick when all the memories flooded back in her mind. With despair etched into every crevice of her beautiful features, she broke down in a fresh flood of tears.



"Kyun, Shiva? Kyun kiya tu ne aisa?!? Tod ke rakh diya hai mujhe tu ne. Kya bann gayi hu! Khud ko pehchan nahi paa rahi main itni badal gayi hu!" Raavi whispered, pained at the feelings she still felt for him. "Kitna sab keh diya mujhe. Itni chot di hai mujhe. Mere character tak ko nahi choda tu ne, Shiva! Aisa kya kar dia tha maine jo mere character par sawaal utha diya tu ne?? Kaha choonk gayi thi main? Kaha galti ho gayi tujhe samajhne mein? Maine kabhi nahi socha tha tu mujhe aise hurt karega. Bachpan se ladte aye hai hum. Pann kabhi aisa toh nahi hua tha ki hum mein itni doori jaaye."



Raavi pulled his t-shirt out from under her pillow, and hugged it close to her, his spicy oak moss scent calming her down, "Phir bhi kyun ek ummeed si hai ki sab thik ho jayega.? Kyun tera ehsaas khud se duur nahi kar paa rahi? Kyun dil kar raha hai ki tu bas ek baar bulaye toh main sab kuch bhula doon? Nahi Raavi! Kyun dhokhe mein jee rahi hai?? Nahi aane wala woh wapas! Aur kya hua tere self-respect ko?? Ab kaha gayi teri izzat? Naa usne tujhe samjha, aur naa tu ne use samjha. Toh kya faida aise rishte ka agar dono mein understanding hi naa ho? Samajh le yeh baat. Bas kar ab! Bohot kar liya rona dhona. Ab bas!"



Raavi furiously wiped her tears, and throwing off the covers, she tumbled to the bathroom. The hot refreshing water of the shower surrounded her, and Raavi felt her body relax. Contemplating her life, she got out of the shower, and got dressed before making her way downstairs. Enough hiding away. She's not gonna let a certain Bhootnath ruin her life.



*****



Krish paced his room, ruminating Shiva's words in his head. Clearly his brother was in love, and in classic Shiva style, did something incredibly stupid. He let his insecurities get the better of him and pushed away the woman he loves so ardently. Krish wanted to pull his hair out in frustration. Why!? Why him? Why had he been cursed with a hoard of idiot brothers? None of them had two brain cells to rub together, and because of them Krish had to lose precious sleep.



He thought about ways to resolve this issue. Forcing them together wouldn't work; he had seen how Dhara Bhabhi's plan failed in such an epic manner. Subterfuge wouldn't work either in the long run. What they really needed was a good, long, heartfelt conversation. They both needed to clear the air between them; maybe understand what the other was feeling about the entire situation. But he couldn't make the same mistake Dhara Bhabhi made. Nope! Krish Pandya was smarter than that. He pulled out his cellphone, and dialed a number. Krish heard it ring. Once. Twice. Finally someone picked it up.



"Hello?"



*****



Raavi took the thaal handed back to her, and she walked out of the temple sanctum. The courtyard was filled with the bustling of people, and Raavi searched for the one she wanted to see before locating him sitting on the entrance stairs.



She patted his shoulders, and Krish turned, giving her a beatific smile. He pulled her into a hug, shaking slightly and she rubbed his back, trying to console him.



"Bh-bhabhi...." Krish choked out.



"Shhhhh - Krish tu thik hai??"



"Bhabhi maine aapko kitna yaad kiya! Aap nahi thi toh koi meri baat sunta hi nahi. Ghar mein sab mujhe underestimate karte hai. Kaash aap hoti." Krish said, part happy, part sad.



"Maine bhi tujhe bohot yaad kiya, Krishu," Raavi said ruffling his hair affectionately as he swatted her hand away.



"Jhoot! Koi miss nahi kara aapne. Agar miss kara hota toh mujhe phone karti. Shiva se bair ho gayi toh aapne mujhe bhula diya," Krish exhaled dramatically.



Raavi chuckled at his antics; her devar was such a drama queen! "Accha chal sorry. Galti ho gayi. Ab se nahi hogi, promise!"



Krish pouted once before they both burst into fits of giggles. They sat on the stairs, chuckling together before finally sobering up. Krish took that chance to bring up the topic.



"Bhabhi kya aap Shiva ko maaf nahi karogi kabhi?" Krish asked hesitantly.



Raavi turned to him surprised, "Yeh tu keh raha hai Krish? Sab kuch jaante hue bhi? Dekha tha na usne kaise behave kiya mere saath? Jab use meri maafi chahye hi nahi toh main kyu use maaf karu??"



"Bhabhi, I agree usne bohot galat kiya hai aapke saath. Aur main aap ki jagaah hota toh main bhi use maaf nahi karta," Krish conceeded. "Aaj main yaha aapse yeh kehne nahi aaya hu ki aap Shiva ko maaf kar dein. Aaj maine aapko yaha bulaya hai kyun ki main aap ke feelings jaan na chahta huu. Aapka gussa, aapka dard, aapki bechaini, sab kuch."



"Krish main thik hu. Mujhe koi fark nahi parta usse Bhootnath se," Raavi bit out, looking away.



"Bhabhi, bhagwan ke ghar pe baithe hai. Kam se kam yaha toh jhoot naa bolein!" Krish said sternly, and Raavi whipped around in surprise. "Aapko kya lagta hai maine aapko mandir kyu bulaya hai? Aaj naa main jhoot bolunga aur naa hi sununga. Aaj jo bolunga sach bolunga aur aapse bhi main sach hi sunna chahta hu. Toh ab mujhe sach boliye. Kyaa apne inn dino mein Shiva ko zaraa bhi yaad nahi kiya?"



Feeling suddenly sick, when everything flooded back, Raavi could not take the weight of it alone any more. The tears, she only allowed to escape in the privacy of her bedroom, came down in torrents as Raavi finally gave in.



"K-Krish...!" Raavi cried, and she managed to relate her entire story between sobs; her fears, her desperation, her anger, her restlessness, her missing him, everything. Concerned, Krish put an arm around her shoulders, and rubbed her arms as he let her cry her despair out. What are these two doing?? They both miss each other so much, and yet they are so stubborn that they refuse to see they are only hurting each other in their desire to give the other their happiness.



"Bhabhi, main kuch kahunga toh aap manogi?" Krish asked, as her sobs finally died down and Raavi turned to look at him with her still damp eyes. "Please ek baar Shiva se baat kar lo? Aap dono ek dusre ko itna miss kar rahe ho, ek baar milke baat kar lo. Shayad isse aapke beech ki misunderstandings bhi clear ho jaye?"



Raavi pushed away from him, "Krish Shiva mujhe miss nahi karta. Use toh meri shakal se bhi nafrat hai. Balki woh toh khush hoga ki main uski zindagi se chali gayi. Usko mukti mil gayi mujhse, mere wajood se."



"Nahi Bhabhi, maine dekha hai Shiva ko. Woh bohot yaad karta hai aapko. Jab se aap gayi hai Shiva aapna kamra chodke aangan mein sota hai kyunki uss kamre mein aapki yaadein basi hai." Krish said sadly, and Raavi looked at him wide-eyed. "Mujhe yakeen hai woh jo bhi kar raha hai uske peeche uski koi stupid but kahi na kahi valid reason hai. Koi reason jo shayad hamare samajh naa aye pann uske liye zaroori hai. Bhabhi, woh jo kar raha hai aapke khushi ke liye kar raha hai."



Raavi laughed mirthlessly, "Meri khushi?! Shiva ko kya fark padta hai meri khushi. Agar meri khushi chahta toh mujhe itna dard nahi deta woh. Main hi bewakoof thi jo uss heartless Chattan Pandya se expectations rakhti gayi. Bhul gayi thi ki woh mujhse kitni nafrat karta hai. Aur usne jo kiya hai, Krish uske liye main use kabhi maaf nahi karungi."



"Aisa nahi hai Bhabhi itna toh main bhi samajh gaya hu. Main nahi keh raha aap usko maaf kar dein. Pann kya apne ana ke liye aap apna mustaqbil zaya hone doge? Main jaanta hu aap Shiva ko bohot miss kar rahi hai. Kya aap use aise hi apne se duur jaane doge? Ek baar baat karne ki koshish bhi nahi karoge?" Krish asked surprised.



Raavi shook her head, swiping at her tears, "I know tumhe fikr hai Krish. But mujh mein aur himmat nahi hai uski nafrat sehne hi. Agar mujhse duur rehke woh khush hai toh yahi sahi. Waise bhi, humare beech ka faasla main akele tayy nahi kar sakti, aur Shiva apne faisle se nahi mukarne wala. Toh iss baat ko yahi khatam karte hai. Y-yeh ri-rishta bhi yahi kh-khatam ....." Raavi barely managed to get the words out.



"Lekin Bhabhi - " Krish started to say but Raavi shook her head, getting up.



"Mujhe chalna hoga Krish. Maasi pareshan ho jayegi. Bye Krish. Apna khayal rakhna. A-aur baki s-sab ka bhi," Raavi said not looking into his eyes as she gave him a quick hug and hurried off.



Krish sighed deeply. Raavi Bhabhi wasn't even ready to listen to him, and everyday the situation was getting worse. Was it really the end and he is simply in denial?



............to be continued


Apologies for the errors. Didn't proof read.

Also while I was writing this one, emotions were all over the place so if I bum you out, I'm sorry.😆

Edited by barbieflora - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh can’t wait….I must say all the stories everyone is updating is really helping me get over this show. I have stopped watching the episodes weeks ago, but still need my shivi fix, to get over my lost for not watching the show. I just can’t handle the craziness of the show, it just not watchable now.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Oh can’t wait….I must say all the stories everyone is updating is really helping me get over this show. I have stopped watching the episodes weeks ago, but still need my shivi fix, to get over my lost for not watching the show. I just can’t handle the craziness of the show, it just not watchable now.

Oh dear!! Then I must warn you this one's an angst alert!!😲

I haven't watched the episodes these days too. It's too much emotional overload right now.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Fabulous 🥰, love how Krish talk with Raavi, and him trying to help both of them.👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: barbieflora

Oh dear!! Then I must warn you this one's an angst alert!!😲

I haven't watched the episodes these days too. It's too much emotional overload right now.

😊 No worries, this angst is way better then what’s showing on the actual show. Yours makes sense 🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm here, I'm here 🥺❤️

imma read now

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

😊 No worries, this angst is way better then what’s showing on the actual show. Yours makes sense 🤗


Awwww thank you!!! That's reassuring 😅😅🤗😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm here, I'm here 🥺❤️

imma read now

Go right on sweetie😅😍😘

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