Weak Dialogue Writing

I really miss the old writers. Se03 seems like everyone has same script printed. Ever since the season has started, I notice dialogues on repeat.

"Ayush mera beta he!", "Ayush tera beta he?", "Ayush uska beta he."

"Tum Ayush ki maa ho kr uske sath aisa kese kr skti ho", "Tum uski maa ho" x100 times

"Tum meri feelings nai samajhte", "Tumhe pta hai mujhe kesa lagta he?" x 100 times

"Me us se nazren kese milau gi?". Sonakshi said this like a million times.

And what is with the stupid comparisons? Ishwari mentioned "(something I don't remember), koi cupboard ya almari nahi".

This show was popular mainly because of good dialogues and dialogue delivery by good artists with good direction.

Very few scenes they had the proper dialogues...and mostly in Sonakshi's confrontation scenes with Ishwari and Dev.

But yes...most of the dialogues are repetitive.

Originally posted by: MasoomaBukhari

I really miss the old writers. Se03 seems like everyone has same script printed. Ever since the season has started, I notice dialogues on repeat.

"Ayush mera beta he!", "Ayush tera beta he?", "Ayush uska beta he."

"Tum Ayush ki maa ho kr uske sath aisa kese kr skti ho", "Tum uski maa ho" x100 times

"Tum meri feelings nai samajhte", "Tumhe pta hai mujhe kesa lagta he?" x 100 times

"Me us se nazren kese milau gi?". Sonakshi said this like a million times.

And what is with the stupid comparisons? Ishwari mentioned "(something I don't remember), koi cupboard ya almari nahi".

This show was popular mainly because of good dialogues and dialogue delivery by good artists with good direction.

Ishwari: Maa to... 9 mahine... main sirf bhalai ke liye...

Sona: tum mujhe samajh hi nahi rahe ho!

Dev:Haan Maa,... (deer in headlight expression😨)

Ayush: Ayushman Rohit Verma hai mera naam!

Soha: Sab Ayush ko hi attention dete hain.

Bijoy: Dev is useless.

Writers: Now, for the first 5 weeks, repeat on loop. Over and over.

Me: Thanks a lot, makes it easier for me to forward and finish the 22min-episode in 10 mins, and move on with better things in my life!👍

Forget about dialogues, the whole track itself bekar n unbeleivable. This season is no where near reality.

I felt cvs never had proper story, since it is season of bringing sequel of hit shows, they brought this one. Instead of giving more memories, they spoiled our beautiful memories we had with this show.

Originally posted by: CottonWorld

Very few scenes they had the proper dialogues...and mostly in Sonakshi's confrontation scenes with Ishwari and Dev.

But yes...most of the dialogues are repetitive.

repetitive dialogues are worse than weak dialogues..

even sona-ishwari conversation dialogues are repeated again and again 🤓

i can almost give a viva now 🤣

Originally posted by: Newbiewriter30

Ishwari: Maa to... 9 mahine... main sirf bhalai ke liye...

Sona: tum mujhe samajh hi nahi rahe ho!

Dev:Haan Maa,... (deer in headlight expression😨)

Ayush: Ayushman Rohit Verma hai mera naam!

Soha: Sab Ayush ko hi attention dete hain.

Bijoy: Dev is useless.

Writers: Now, for the first 5 weeks, repeat on loop. Over and over.

Me: Thanks a lot, makes it easier for me to forward and finish the 22min-episode in 10 mins, and move on with better things in my life!👍

🤣

for the first 2 weeks everyone had that expression all the time

🤣🤣..hilarious..whatever u guys wrote it makes me laugh..thank u 👏..

Now this forthcoming counseling and yoga will give us more fun ..specially maate ..she would be surprise that her puttar in a tree position..she might complain in the same kitchen 🙄,same faltu cooking mode to sona ..Tumne devko perr bana dala!! ..mere bete ko kitna taqleef ho raha hai ..u need to learn biwi ko yieh sab chor ke pati ke saath rehna hai ..😆

Originally posted by: kinu17

🤣🤣..hilarious..whatever u guys wrote it makes me laugh..thank u 👏..

Now this forthcoming counseling and yoga will give us more fun ..specially maate ..she would be surprise that her puttar in a tree position..she might complain in the same kitchen 🙄,same faltu cooking mode to sona ..Tumne devko perr bana dala!! ..mere bete ko kitna taqleef ho raha hai ..u need to learn biwi ko yieh sab chor ke pati ke saath rehna hai ..😆

God forbid he sprains something or pulls a muscle. Then, Sona will never hear the end of it. And Ishwari will come and massage him with Moov.

Originally posted by: kinu17

🤣🤣..hilarious..whatever u guys wrote it makes me laugh..thank u 👏..

Now this forthcoming counseling and yoga will give us more fun ..specially maate ..she would be surprise that her puttar in a tree position..she might complain in the same kitchen 🙄,same faltu cooking mode to sona ..Tumne devko perr bana dala!! ..mere bete ko kitna taqleef ho raha hai ..u need to learn biwi ko yieh sab chor ke pati ke saath rehna hai ..😆

sath rehne k liye hi to efforts kr rhi he sona.. warna maate ka perr beta to jai maa ishu krta rehta he😆