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Posted: 4 years ago

I thought there was a change wallet as well mixed in.. Probably with cash? Can't see him being a cheapo with bros bff/girlfriend?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I hate a groveling Shiva...


Goodness... The horror!

If they do not show equal redemption and enthusiasm This will become unbearable!

I already see it going that way, one way street. I donโ€™t see the makers wanting to use Raaviโ€™s brain at all like the OG when Mullai got to the bottom of what was bothering Kathir after she cdd as me back. Also there was never a divorce track and Kathir didnโ€™t want to break the marriage at any cost.

Here they took tje insecurity track and gave a completely different treatment๐Ÿ˜•

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Cheeks wakes up from this nightmare and runs to her parents room to see that they r asleep happily.

She sighs and hopes her nightmare never comes true. Afterall her fatherโ€™s jodi looked awesome with her mommy๐Ÿคท๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

No sandy can break them apart.

Meanwhile Sandy on VOM-

Phew! Dodged the bullet๐Ÿ˜›

Okay VOM exists so does the speculation boat.

Chiki takes out her untouched coin and spins it- it keeps spinning so this is another nightmare. Guess she has to protect herself and her mother alone this time. She takes her mother and jumps out of the window. Both of them wake up in the speculation boat. Chiki spins the coin again. This time it stops after sometime. Since they are back in real world, Avi calls ML for help. ML helps them take the boat to the shore. And Chiki runs to her Maasi happily. ML takes both of them home and all live happily ever after(including Sandy in VOM)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Again Cheeks???

New twist in the story๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Adventures with Avi๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

I already see it going that way, one way street. I donโ€™t see the makers wanting to use Raaviโ€™s brain at all like the OG when Mullai got to the bottom of what was bothering Kathir after she cdd as me back. Also there was never a divorce track and Kathir didnโ€™t want to break the marriage at any cost.

Here they took tje insecurity track and gave a completely different treatment๐Ÿ˜•

They canโ€™t manage copy paste too๐Ÿคท๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

I just hope they deal with it sensibly

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Okay VOM exists so does the speculation boat.

Chiki takes out her untouched coin and spins it- it keeps spinning so this is another nightmare. Guess she has to protect herself and her mother alone this time. She takes her mother and jumps out of the window. Both of them wake up in the speculation boat. Chiki spins the coin again. This time it stops after sometime. Since they are back in real world, Avi calls ML for help. ML helps them take the boat to the shore. And Chiki runs to her Maasi happily. ML takes both of them home and all live happily ever after(including Sandy in VOM)

๐Ÿคฃ

This story has to end so I let it end here๐Ÿ˜›

Warna ideas to hain mere paas๐Ÿ˜˜

Whoaa Chiki

Isi baat par kuch likh do๐Ÿ–ค

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Roohani27


Also her tying the rakhi to his brother and bff but not him yet they need a clarification. Matlab hadh hi hogyi.๐Ÿคฃ


It is strange though na? Imagine romancing your rakhi bro on screen...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Love you jaan๐Ÿค—

FIRST AND FOREMOST I JUST READ YOUR TS TESTING HER BOUNDARIES.....LOVED ITโค

SERIOUSLY YOU HAVE GREAT TALENT IN WRITING STUFF I COULD TOTALLY IMAGINE THEM HAPPENING โ˜บ๏ธ HOPE TO BE EVEN 10% AS GOOD AS YOU AREโค๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒนโœŠ

And second

HE DOESN'T LIKE BEING KISSED ON CHEEKS BY HIS PARENTS.....ALICE IS A WHOLE DIFFERENT HUMAN.

THIRD....EVEN BETTER I SAY ALICE MAM IF YOU ARE STALKING US GO FOR THE LIPS....ATTACK THEM.

KANWAR SIR IF YOU ARE STALKING US....YOU LUCKY GUY๐Ÿ˜‰

KARAN SIR IF YOU ARE STALKING US.....PLZ JUST STAY AWWWWAAAYYY


Aww, thank you meri Maya ๐Ÿค— I'm glad you liked the story!


And don't worry, you'll definitely surpass me one day! โค๏ธ


As for being kissed on the cheek, I don't like being kissed on the cheek either... doesn't matter who ๐Ÿ˜† I just found it interesting he emphasized it. I wonder if Raavi will ever kiss Shiva's cheek... I wanna know the BTS behind the scene now that I know this tidbit ๐Ÿคฃ


And, yes, Alice, don't go for the cheeks ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

๐Ÿคฃ

This story has to end so I let it end here๐Ÿ˜›

Warna ideas to hain mere paas๐Ÿ˜˜

Whoaa Chiki

Isi baat par kuch likh do๐Ÿ–ค

Mahi I loved whatever we were doing ๐Ÿคฃ Jee ideas thodi khatam honge.

Mujhe likhna hai meri wali story ka third part par mai thoda ulajh gayi thi gaon mei so late hoga thoda๐Ÿ˜’

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

๐Ÿคฃ

This story has to end so I let it end here๐Ÿ˜›

Warna ideas to hain mere paas๐Ÿ˜˜

Whoaa Chiki

Isi baat par kuch likh do๐Ÿ–ค


This was a good writing exercise Mahi! We should do this again and imagine another scene ๐Ÿ˜‚ I'm so proud of Chikki's creativity! She has surpassed me with her thinking ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค—

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