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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Hails🤗

How are you ??🤗


I'm doing well! It was a relaxing, fun day as I did some cleaning around the house with AU excitement. And now, time for bed.


How have you been? All recovered from Covid?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Scarysea

I am good Asfi🤗🤗 What about you?

I'm good as well ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes


I'm doing well! It was a relaxing, fun day as I did some cleaning around the house with AU excitement. And now, time for bed.


How have you been? All recovered from Covid?

That's good!! Fun bhi hogaya aur safai bhi😆

Even I've to clean my room today!!😬

I'm good!! Yeah Recovered from covid but weakness abhi bhi picha nahi chod rahi

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Perhaps the only piece of advice I can offer is that everyone has their own unique style of writing. Write what you love, not what you are forced into writing and it usually works out in the end ❤️


In terms of what I do when I write:


1. First I envision the scene in my head and note down all the details I want to be highlighted (usually these details explain the character or come up later in the story)


2. I try to understand my characters as best as I can (Fanfiction is a little easier since you know the character personalities and you are just trying to fit them into your own little universe, but when you write without a backbone, understanding your character is key... even for Fanfiction, I try to understand which version of the character I want to be highlighted:

For example, mature, older ShiVi might have fewer nok-jhoks and insults for each other. They would most likely respect and love each other. So including loving dialogues, tender physical contact (squeezing of the shoulder, holding hands, brushing the hair away) would be more appropriate. For younger ShiVi, it's more likely they hate each other but somehow they are attracted to each other... so here you would want to include scenes where you are describing their nervousness and racing heartbeat, where they realize something new about each other.


3. I say all the dialogues I write aloud to make sure they sound alright


4. Always, always have some sort of progression or growth. My favorite thing to do as a reader is feel the emotions the main character is feeling and grow alongside them.

Progression can be as simple as the character feeling more comfortable about body contact or can be as major as a character changing their personality (Shiva becoming regretful of all the times he teased and taunted Raavi)


In my 10th grade English class, our teacher had us write an essay about our writing styles. I wrote my essay about how I did not like my earlier work, and how I liked my work at the time. My teacher called me back after class and told me that I should never be disappointed in what I write. I didn't understand then... but now as I stare at my old writing pieces, I know what he means. Even if I wasn't grammatically correct, or I had no plot/progression, I loved some of my older work due to the passion in the writing. I had fun and it was definitely reflected on paper!


So if there's any advice I can give you, it's to have as much fun as you possible can!

This is great advice Mommie.. I am keeping this bookmarked ❤️❤️❤️

Following your footsteps 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Good Morning!!🤗❤️

Good Morning Potato🥔❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

That's good!! Fun bhi hogaya aur safai bhi😆

Even I've to clean my room today!!😬

I'm good!! Yeah Recovered from covid but weakness abhi bhi picha nahi chod rahi


Hope your health gets back to its A game soon!🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Swastika34

Good Morning Potato🥔❤

GM meri tomato🤗🍅

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Perhaps the only piece of advice I can offer is that everyone has their own unique style of writing. Write what you love, not what you are forced into writing and it usually works out in the end ❤️


In terms of what I do when I write:


1. First I envision the scene in my head and note down all the details I want to be highlighted (usually these details explain the character or come up later in the story)


2. I try to understand my characters as best as I can (Fanfiction is a little easier since you know the character personalities and you are just trying to fit them into your own little universe, but when you write without a backbone, understanding your character is key... even for Fanfiction, I try to understand which version of the character I want to be highlighted:

For example, mature, older ShiVi might have fewer nok-jhoks and insults for each other. They would most likely respect and love each other. So including loving dialogues, tender physical contact (squeezing of the shoulder, holding hands, brushing the hair away) would be more appropriate. For younger ShiVi, it's more likely they hate each other but somehow they are attracted to each other... so here you would want to include scenes where you are describing their nervousness and racing heartbeat, where they realize something new about each other.


3. I say all the dialogues I write aloud to make sure they sound alright


4. Always, always have some sort of progression or growth. My favorite thing to do as a reader is feel the emotions the main character is feeling and grow alongside them.

Progression can be as simple as the character feeling more comfortable about body contact or can be as major as a character changing their personality (Shiva becoming regretful of all the times he teased and taunted Raavi)


In my 10th grade English class, our teacher had us write an essay about our writing styles. I wrote my essay about how I did not like my earlier work, and how I liked my work at the time. My teacher called me back after class and told me that I should never be disappointed in what I write. I didn't understand then... but now as I stare at my old writing pieces, I know what he means. Even if I wasn't grammatically correct, or I had no plot/progression, I loved some of my older work due to the passion in the writing. I had fun and it was definitely reflected on paper!


So if there's any advice I can give you, it's to have as much fun as you possible can!

Such a beautiful piece of advice milkwa!❤️

So true & useful! 💜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Perhaps the only piece of advice I can offer is that everyone has their own unique style of writing. Write what you love, not what you are forced into writing and it usually works out in the end ❤️


In terms of what I do when I write:


1. First I envision the scene in my head and note down all the details I want to be highlighted (usually these details explain the character or come up later in the story)


2. I try to understand my characters as best as I can (Fanfiction is a little easier since you know the character personalities and you are just trying to fit them into your own little universe, but when you write without a backbone, understanding your character is key... even for Fanfiction, I try to understand which version of the character I want to be highlighted:

For example, mature, older ShiVi might have fewer nok-jhoks and insults for each other. They would most likely respect and love each other. So including loving dialogues, tender physical contact (squeezing of the shoulder, holding hands, brushing the hair away) would be more appropriate. For younger ShiVi, it's more likely they hate each other but somehow they are attracted to each other... so here you would want to include scenes where you are describing their nervousness and racing heartbeat, where they realize something new about each other.


3. I say all the dialogues I write aloud to make sure they sound alright


4. Always, always have some sort of progression or growth. My favorite thing to do as a reader is feel the emotions the main character is feeling and grow alongside them.

Progression can be as simple as the character feeling more comfortable about body contact or can be as major as a character changing their personality (Shiva becoming regretful of all the times he teased and taunted Raavi)


In my 10th grade English class, our teacher had us write an essay about our writing styles. I wrote my essay about how I did not like my earlier work, and how I liked my work at the time. My teacher called me back after class and told me that I should never be disappointed in what I write. I didn't understand then... but now as I stare at my old writing pieces, I know what he means. Even if I wasn't grammatically correct, or I had no plot/progression, I loved some of my older work due to the passion in the writing. I had fun and it was definitely reflected on paper!


So if there's any advice I can give you, it's to have as much fun as you possible can!


love you for this ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

milkwaaaaaaaaaa

*in mitwa tune*


you aren't giving me the love I'm literally asking you for 🥺

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