ShiVi FanFiction // Arcane // Chapter 10 P.G 53 / 16.03.2022 - Page 12

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Chapter 6

// Zephyr //

[ (n.) A gentle, mild breeze. It does not disrupt, nor cause chaos, it merely brings a pleasant sensation on a warm summer day.]

The family had finally gotten off the plane and were waiting to collect their bags from the luggage carousel, Rishita and Krish had gone off to get some food from the cafe nearby, Raavi and Shiva had gone off to pick up a few trolleys for the luggage, these two seemed inseparable thought Rishita. By the time Krish and Rishita came back everybody had collected the luggage, quickly they left the airport.

At the exit, 3 swanky cars were waiting for them to pick them and drop them to the AirBNB that they had rented out, initially they thought it would be easier for them to book a couple of suite room at a hotel, but then Shiva suggested renting out an AirBNB would be better because their stay was for 3 weeks or slightly more and 3 weeks at a hotel just seemed annoying to everybody, who was accustomed to their own schedule, so after a lot of fighting and an intense match of rock-paper-scissors later they had finally decided to rent out a mansion located in Jubilee Hills.

They split up, with Rishita and Krish in one car, Gautam, Dhara and Dev in another, followed by Shiva and Raavi. Although Rishita wanted to spend some time with Dev, she was more excited about the story she would be getting to hear from Krish. Krish was going to be driving so she settled down in the passenger seat, the mansion they were going to stay at was a good 40 minutes away from the airport so she figured that they had plenty of time to get cracking on the Bhoothnath-Chipkali puraan. Rishita looked at Krish eagerly expecting him to launch into the story.

“Arrey Rishita Bhabhi, aap mujhe ekk baat batao, mana ki Shiva aur Raavi ka story bohot interesting hai, aapko kyun jaanne mein inti excitement?”

Pleasantly surprised at being called bhabhi, Rishita smiled widely.

“Tujhe pata hai Krish, mujhe na bachpan se love stories main bohot zyada pasand the, I loved reading them, watching them and sometimes writing my own silly little love stories, pata hai duniya ke hisaab se mere paas toh sab kuch kai, maa-papa aisho-aaram ki zindagi, bada sa ghar aur pata nahi kya kya, I grew up with my family around me, but Kriti ke alawa mere paas time spend karne ke liye koi tha bhi nahi, Maa toh hamesha koi na koi kitty party ya outing mein busy hoti thi, Papa aur Bua business aur elections ke kaam mein hamesha uljhe hue hote the, mujhe pata hai ki sab bonito pyaar karthe hai par mere ghar main koi jatata hi nahi, in fact Bua ke liye toh pyaar bhi saude jaise, I’ve been pampered, well to put it this way I’ve been spoiled Krish, but I don’t feel like I’ve experienced any form of love at all. Aur na tum sab ko Dekh ke bohot khushi milti hai, tum sab itne pyaar se rehte ho, and the bond Raavi shares with all of you guys is so lovely. She’s also such a sweetheart. Mujhe na aise family mein shaadi karne main bohot khushi ho rahi hai. I’m excited for my marriage and my life ahead with Dev, but apart from that I am also very excited to get married into this family, tum sab na bohot easy going aur happy happy lagte ho mujhe Krish, mere ghar mein kabhi bhi dining table pe baat nahi hoti thi, in fact even if we were family, I always felt like it was just in a superficial sense? You know just for the sake of it. I haven’t experienced so many things that are common for most families, no bed time stories, barely any family outings, yahan tak ki mom and dad never even came any of my Parent teacher meetings Krish!”

“Bhabhi, don’t worry, it’ll never be like that in our family, no matter what we’re always there, haan we fight we have our differences but at the end of it we hug it out, for us its always till the end of the line, aapko pata hai, mere paas papa ki barely thode yaadein hai, jabse main chota tha tabse, mere liye it was Gaumbi who was my father figure, aur thode saal baad it was Dhara Bhabhi who became a mother figure, Maa toh puri tarha se paralysed thi, she couldn’t take care of us, and Gaumbi had to shoulder our responsibility, upar se uss time toh things were not that great, mujhe aaj tak samajh nahi aata, ki how Gaumbi and Bhabhi handled everything. I’ll always be grateful to them Bhabhi. Both of them are some of the best humans I know. Then there’s Raavi bhabhi.”

“Kya baat hai Krish, abhi se Bhabhi and all haa”

“Arrey Rishita bhabhi, Raavi became Raavi bhabhi mere college ke first year mein, and that to in one of the most peculiar ways, main aapko Raavi bhabhi ki history sunatha hoon, gaur se suniye bhabhi, bohot acchi hai story.”

“Bolo bolo”

“Toh bhabhi, Bachpan ka mujhe zyaada nahi pata tha, bas khelene kudne ki memories hai mere paas, main toh Raavi bhabhi aur Shiva se 3 saal chota tha, aur Dev se 5 saal. Bachpan mein na bohot hi zyaada masti karthe the hum sab, khas karke main, Shiva aur Raavi, aur jab bhi pakde jaathe the, Raavi bann jaati hi humari dhaal, badi badi aanke dikhake innocent si shakal bana kar punishment se bacha leti thi, khaas karke Gaumbi aur Dhara Bhabhi se, Gaumbi toh Raavi ko mana hi nahi karpatha tha, especially when she used to use her puppy dog eyes, bachpan mein na ekk time that jab hum 3 Raavi se jealous bhi hogaye, simply because she always had Gaumbi’s attention, aur toh it was almost as if Raavi agar room mein hai toh baaki koi maine hi nahi rehti Gaumbi ke liye, he was a father/Brother figure not just to the 3 of us but also for Raavi, jab Maami ka kaand hua na, aur Raavi was still trying to get through Shiva and failed, she distanced herself, ghar aana bandh kardiya, sab se baat karna bandh kardiya, Hala ki mujhe aur Dev ko uthna zyaada farak nahi pada, maine ekk baat tho notice ki, Shiva toh pura angry young boy bann gaya tha, but Gaumbi also had his moments, he loved Raavi like his little sister, aur na Raavi ki absence started affecting Gaumbi also, kabhi kabhi moody hojathe the, and sometimes he would just not talk for a very long time, pata hai apart from Dhara Bhabhi, Raavi is the one person that can completely flip Gaumbi’s mood. In fact aaj tak shayad hum sab pe he might have gotten angry, but Raavi pe kabhi bhi nahi, she is his little packet of sunshine, they still are very close, she is like his bacchi as well, toh aap hi socho, Gaumbi ko bohot bura laga tha, Phir ekk dinn Gaumbi aur main Pandya stores pe the, uss time pe Dev aur Shiva koi camp mein the, and I only had half a day of School, toh Dhara Bhabhi had dropped me off at the store, thode time baad, Raavi rote rote aayi store pe and Gaumbi ko gale lagakar zor zor se rone lagi. Main toh bohot chota tha, mujhe toh Yaad bhi nahi ki kya hua tha? Pann na ekk baat toh clear hogaya, Raavi bhabhi toh tabse humari family ki ginti main aati thi. Bohot special hai woh humare liye.”

“Raavi, kya hua aise kyun ro rahi hai, kya haal banaliya tune apna”

Raavi did not respond to Gautam she was still crying hysterically, clutching him in a death grip, she looked terrified, she held onto him like he was her safety blanket. To Raavi all her life to her Gaumbi was like big strong person who always smiled at her, made her laugh and bought her chocolates, he was her favourite person, Gaumbi never scolded her, unlike MaasiMaa sometimes. She clutched on tighter, her little palms hurting due to the tight grip on his shirt.

Gautam knew that trying to get her to open up would be impossible, he just let her cry it out, patting her head and wiping away the tears, she slowly calmed down in his hold and he got a look at her face, eyes swollen and cheeks red due to crying too much. The eyes of the girl who had invoked such strong fatherly feelings in him were now blank, her big doe eyes looked at him, defeated, they didn’t sparkle with the usual mischief that they used to, Gautam felt his heart drop at the despair on the little girls face. Gently patting her face, he reached for the water bottle near him, slowly he made her drink the water, making sure she didn’t choke on the water, he cleaned off the excess that dribbled down her chin and sat down on the floor making her sit on one of his folded legs, he decided to find out what made his little girl cry like this.

“Raavi baccha, ab toh bolde kya hua, kyun mera happy baccha itna maayus hai? Bolo?” He questioned her in a soft voice.

“Gaumbi main bad girl hoon?” Raavi asked earnestly, her lips quivering and her eyes filling up with tears immediately.

Shocked about why Raavi was asking him this, Gautam barely managed to reply to her.

“Nahi baccha, tu toh sabse best girl hai, sabki laadli hai tu, meri choti pari hai, kisne bola tujhe ki tu bad girl hai?”

Gautam looked like he was ready to murder someone, Raavi was such an angel and someone still had the gall to make her cry so inconsolably, he doubted his good for nothing Maami first, she may have said something really bad to Raavi, she was one venomous woman, although looking at Raavi once again he realised she had come directly from school, had any of the teachers punished her? He thought with dread, immediately he examined her palms, upon not finding anything suspicious he urged Raavi to speak.

“Raavi please bolo kya hua beta?”

“Gaumbi, mere class mein na doh boys mujhe chida rahe the, unhone bola ki main bad girl hoon, issiliye mere mummy-papa mujhe chod ke chalegaye, aur unhone yeh bhi bola ki main na ek loser hoon, kyunki mere parents nahi hai” Raavi spoke and started sobbing once again. She spoke in between her sobs questioning him.

“Mere mummy-papa saach mein mujhe chod ke chalegaye kyunki main bad girl hoon Gaumbi? Unko bolo na ki main good girl banungi, sab ki baath manungi, Gaumbi mujhe Mummy-papa chahiye, please Gaumbi unko bolo na, main koi shararat nahi karoongi, pinky promise Gaumbi”

Each sentence spoke by Raavi made Gautam’s heart pain, her earnest and innocent questions to which he held no answers to hurt him, he wished he could help her. For once Gautam Pandya didn’t have a solution to Raavi’s problems, the first and last time, he promised to himself. Wiping her tears away, Gautam spoke in a gentle but loving voice.

“Raavi tumhare mummy-papa ne jaan bhooj ke tumhe chod ke nahi chale gaye, tum toh unki bacchi ho na, tumhe kaise chod dete voh tumhe haan? Aur toh aur tum to sabse acchi bacchi ho, sab ki baat manti ho, kisiko nahi satati, meri pari hai tu, sabse best, bilkul loser nahi hai tu, tere paas toh hum sab hai na, rona nahi baccha”

“Par mummy-papa kyun nahi hai?”

“Tumhe tumhare mummy-papa bohot pasand hai na Raavi?”

“Haan”

“Toh jaise tumhe voh pasand hai, vaise hi Bhagwan ji ko bhi tumhare mummy papa pasand the, toh unhone na unko apne paas bulaliya, humesha ke liye”

“Gaumbi, toh Bhagwan ji mujhe pasand kyun nahi karte? Mujhe kyun nahi bulaya, main bhi chali jaati mummy-papa ke saath”

“Raavi ekk baat bata, jab tu phool todthi hai, tu na sabse bada waala aur khila hua phool chun chun ke leti hai na apne liye?”

“Haan, kyun woh sabse best hote hai”

“Toh socho, tumhare mummy-papa sabse best aur khile hue phool the, toh Bhagwan ne unko le liya?”

“Pann, mujhe kyun nahi? Main acchi nahi hoon Gaumbi?”

“Tu toh abhi khili bhi nahi hai meri pari, tu toh ekk nanhi si jaan hai, ekk choti si kalee hai tu, tumhe khilna hai, Sabko khush karna hai, jaise tu hamesha karti hai, tumhe toh bohot saare kaam karne hai, meri choti si angel, tu toh sab ke life main Khushi laati hai, agar tu hi nahi rahi toh kya hoga hum sab ka? Mujhe nazar se toh tu hi bacha ti hai na? Tu nahi hai toh mujhe Kaun protect karega? Dev, Shiva aur Krish ke saath kaun khelega? Dhara Ki kaun help karega, Suman Kaki se kaun rooz baat karega?”

“Pann Gaumbi, Anita Didi bol rahi thi ki aap logo ko bhi main nahi chahiye, issiliye aap mujhse baat nahi karte aur mujhse gussa hai, Maasi ne bhi bola ki aap sab mujhse gussa ho? Maine kya kiya? Sorry na Gaumbi, maine aapko jaan bhooj ke hurt nahi kiya. Shiva ko bolo na, woh toh mujhse baat bhi nahi karta”

Gautam’s heart hurt at the poor child’s apologies, his little angel was apologising for no fault of hers, at the same time his heart burnt with anger at Anita and his Maami, how could they hurt this little girl like this? Spewing such venom at her? Didn’t they think of her tender age even once? Raavi was at age where anyone and anything could influence her easily and as much a Gautam loved her he wasn’t immune to how gullible and trusting she was, Raavi was someone who could love anyone, she barely saw faults in people, always saw the good in them, which was probably why she was able to live amongst people like his Maami and Ex-Fiancé.

“Nahi Raavi, koi gussa nahi hai tumse, hum sab tumse bohot pyaar karthe hai, Shiva bhi woh toh thoda gussa hai, pann na, aajaye ga Shiva vapas, tujhse zyaada door nahi rahega, tera best friend hai na woh?”

“Haan”

“Toh zyaada soch math meri pari, padhai kar, khelo kudho aur masti karo, teri choti choti shararton ke bina dinn acha nahi kat tha”

Raavi nodded happily at Gautam, her fears put to rest, she jumped up and hugged him, talking a mile a minute, hours later Gautam dropped Raavi home, sneaking in an extra chocolate into her bag pack, he spoke to his Mama about Raavi’s ordeal at school, hoping that he would make sure such a thing would not happen again.

Although talking to Mama did put a few of Gautam’s fears to rest, he was still troubled thinking about Raavi, she was always such a happy child, he never once thought that she could have such severe abandonment issues, and this was just the start of it. That night Gautam went and sat by his mother resting his head on her lap, wishing she could pat his head like before, missing the way she could comfort him.

Nevertheless he poured out all his fears regarding Raavi to her, Gautam was just 11 when Raavi was introduced to them, Raavi’s parents had come from Rajkot to Somnath to meet Maami and introduce her to her sister. Meeting Raavi was wonderful memory still etched in Gautam’s mind clear as day. They let Gautam hold baby Raavi in his lap, he cradled her to his chest much like he did with his youngest brother Shiva. As Gautam stared down at Raavi’s face, she opened her eyes, wide honey brown eyes glancing around in wonder before settling on his face, he smiled looking at her look at him with so much curiosity. Big golden eyes and chubby rosy cheeks and a head full of hair, Gautam couldn’t help but get entranced with her hair, he had never seen any babies with a head full of hair, his Shiva only had a few strands, but Raavi, she had dark and soft hair and as he stroked her hair gently, she let out a happy coo, falling back asleep in due time, thanks to Gautam’s gently way of patting her back to sleep. He was extremely disheartened on knowing that Raavi would be going back home the very same day, he wanted to spend some more time with the little baby, she was such a delight! And she didn’t even cry all the time like his Shiva and Dev. As Raavi’s mother took her from Gautam’s arms he wished he could hold the little angel longer, nonetheless he smiled politely at her parents and watched with a sad smile as they got into a car and left. Gautam spent the rest the day at Maami’s place, his father and Mama discussing something, while his mother was being her usual snarky self with Prafulla Maami. It was later in the evening when Prafulla Maami had rushed out in a panic, screaming at his mama, while his mother and father looked equally tensed. Gautam wondered what had gone wrong. A couple of hours later his Mama and Maami were back, but they had Raavi with them, and his Maami was crying inconsolably. That night when a curious Gautam went to his father to ask about what happened, he was simply told that Raavi’s parents were not with them any longer and that Raavi would now be staying with Mama and Maami. Although he felt sad for the little baby, Gautam’s mind looked to the brighter side of having Raavi here as well, maybe he could play with her once she grows up, he promised to his father that he would be a good brother to Raavi as well, and thee look of pride and love he saw on his fathers face was one that Gautam Pandya would remember forever.

Snapping out of thoughts he wondered if Raavi would be back tomorrow. He slept with a heavy heart and disturbed mind. The day after was a pleasant surprise for Gautam as he saw Raavi come running at him, giggling happily. He was rest assured, Raavi was family. Forever.

“Krish, Raavi toh bohot close lagti hai tum sab ke, in fact she seems like she is special to you all in her own way, baat kya hai?”

“Rishita Bhabhi, aap mujhe ekk question ka answer dijiye, when you first saw Raavi what came to your mind, and as you spent some time being around her presence what did you think of her?”

“To be completely honest, I had begun wondering about Raavi much before I even saw her, Yaad hai jab mere aur Dev ke rishte ki baatein chal rahe the, and Dhara Bhabhi ne Sabko introduce karwaya, aur she mentioned Raavi as Shiva’s girlfriend, mere na sunn ke dimaag ghoom gaya, like no offence but Shiva na kabhi kabhi thoda scary lagta hai, aur toh pehle pehle mein smile bhi nahi karta tha, like poora kaam mein dooba hua workaholic. Aur frankly speaking thoda khadoos gussail type ka lagta tha, toh imagine such a closed off serious guy, and uski ekk girlfriend. Phir then there were you guys’ tales of Raavi, she seemed like the happy, innocent and like so carefree, Shiva ki complete opposite. That made me so curious, phir main Raavi se mili, and remember the day everyone was discussing renovation plans, and then Shiva and Raavi dropped me home, uss dinn Raavi was like really frustrated at someone, she sounded almost hysterical on the phone and for once I saw an angry young man try and calm down his angry girlfriend. Usse pehle bhi I noticed they are very attuned to each other. Do logon ke beech mein, itna coordination toh baba re maine pehle kabhi nahi dekha”

“Bhabhi abhi na, aapne jo jo points mention kiya na, woh saare points mujhe bhi aaye the, ki Shiva ki girlfriend bani toh kaise, and that too Raavi, but there relationship goes way back bhabhi, they’re not just girlfriend and boyfriend, in fact sometimes when I look at the both of them, the term girlfriend and boyfriend seems too incompetent. What they share is beyond a label. Then again they are the kind of people that you really need to observe to understand, what they share is not something that can be understood at first glance. You know I’ve heard people say that they both are like the yin and yang, but I don’t think it actually applies to them both, I mean I grew up with them and out of the 3 of my brothers I am closest to Shiva, I’ve spent days and nights with the both of them, sometimes refereeing their stupid fights and everything, I can say one thing, they’re both alike yet different, like same same but different.”

“Really, I felt like they were the opposites attract kind of couple you know?”

“Bhabhi I mean it can be so, but to me that is from a very superficial level of understanding, they’re not complete opposites, they’re very similar, their base traits and behaviour and everything. You know what, today when we get to the AirBNB, let’s sit down after dinner and I’ll tell you some of the incidents I’ve been subjected to, and some of the accidents that I think have happened between them both and then you tell me what you think of them.”

Rishta nodded eagerly, wanting to know more, and then the rest of the ride Krish and her spent jamming out to Taylor Swift songs, she was glad that Krish was a swiftie just like her.

Soon enough they reached the mansion, and Rishita was awed at how beautiful it looked, it was a large, graceful house, rectangular and well-proportioned, painted a faded white. The southern wall is almost entirely made of glass, with a view of the lush greenery outside. The inside of the first story was open and bright, with few internal walls, with a wide central staircase to the left and a raised living room area with a grand piano in the centre to the right as well as a dining room and kitchen. Behind the stairs was the home office. The second floor had 4 bedrooms, one being the master bed room, a home theatre and what appeared to be a “man-cave”, while the third floor had 3 more bedrooms and a quaint little home library, the property even boasted of a swimming pool.

They all sat down in the living room, looking exhausted from the early morning travel. The on location staff had by then come in with the luggage and hastened to get some refreshments for the family. Rishita smiled at the girl handing her a bottle of chilled water, chugging the water down she was just about to ask Dhara about the room arrangements when Krish beat her to it.

“Bhabhi main na third floor ka koi bhi room le lunga, I like that floor the best”

“Haan le le, main aur Gaumbi second floor pe rehenge, Shiva tujhe kahan rehna hai”

“Bhabhi main aur Raavi bhi third floor pe”

“Dev tujhe?”

“Second floor bhabhi”

“Rishita tujhe kaha rehna hai?”

“Main bhi second floor bhabhi”

“Accha theek hai, sab ke kamre decide hogaye na, abhi jaake thoda rest karte hain, dinner pe milenge, theek hai?”

Everybody responded in unison and proceeded to get up and take some rest, Rishita couldn’t wait for a hot shower and some relaxed sleep. Dhara and Gautam had already left with their bags, while Dev and Shiva went ahead with the bags, Rishita noticed Raavi asleep on the was asleep on the couch, she was going to wake her up when Krish held her back.

“Arrey ruko bhabhi, usse sone do, Shiva dekh lega”

“Ekk second ye dono ekk hi room mein rahenge?”

“Haan, actually inn dono ko na aadat hai, aur we don’t mind much so yeah, par ab voh sab important nahi hai, aaj raat na dinner ke baad main aapko Raavi ki History sunaonga, aaoge? “

“Haan haan”

Rishita agreed and they both left for their rooms respectively, meanwhile Shiva had come back down and saw Raavi fast asleep, he picked her up bridal style and took her up to their room.

Since he had already kept the door open when he had come upstairs to put the luggage, entering he quickly shut the door with his foot, laying Raavi on the bed he draped the quilt over her, adjusted the AC temperature so that she didn’t get too cold, kissed her forehead, then locked their room door and proceeded to go take a shower and join Raavi.

By the time he got out, Raavi was already up and was arranging his clothes in the walk in closet space, he walked towards her and stood behind her, one of his arms encircling her waist, and head already buried in the crook of her neck, Raavi reached back and ruffled his hair when she felt him kiss her neck she turned around her hands resting on his bare chest, he had one hand splayed out along her side, the length of it causing his pinky to tease at the waistband of her high waisted jeans and his thumb to graze the bottom of her breast. The other hand was cradling her jaw, his thumb sweeping across her cheek gingerly. His thoughts were clouded with want and need and her it had been far too long, she had been away far too long.

Tipping her face up he leaned down to kiss her, his hand now holding the back of her head, clutching at the hair at the nape of her neck, in no time he has her pinned to the closet door, she breaks the kiss and laughs loudly and then lifts her head and nips at his chin.

“Oh really?” he drawls, “is that how you want to play now?”

He reaches up and with one hand pins her by her wrists to the wall as his face is within inches of hers. Her laughter stops and her eyes widen and for a moment before she looks into his onyx eyes which suddenly looked ten shades darker, like two inky pools she wanted to get absolutely lost in.

“Do you like that?” he whispers and she nods but he needs to hear it, “tell me” he whispers into her ear “I like it” she murmurs as her head nods up to her hands and he inhales because fcuk is she hot.

“Well then” he breathes, “that’s very good to know.” And he leans down and kisses her again, languid and slow, breathless he pulled away from her mouth slowly, she whined at the loss of his lips on hers, and he looked at her intently his eyes never leaving her face. Her eyes were still closed, waiting on more from him, She was perfect. He closed his eyes, needing to control himself. When he opened his eyes, Raavi was staring at him intently, swollen lips pouting down as if he had broken her heart, eyes hooded and narrowed on him with purpose.

He groaned “Stop looking at me like that” He wasn't sure if he could resist her if she kept looking at him in that way, and she needed rest, she just had two weeks of travel and then another early morning, he couldn’t tire her out, as much as he wanted to, she needed to rest a bit. He was trying to be considerate, and she was making it all very difficult.

“How am I looking at you?” she asked all innocent like. But the tone of her voice, she knew exactly what she was doing to him, He licked his lips and caught her eyes following his tongue.

“What do you want Raavi?” he asked, voice deep and thick with desire.

“You. I want you,” she said with no hesitation.

He lifted her up almost immediately, her legs wrapped around his waist as he crushed his mouth to hers, rest could go fcuk itself, he thought, his hand which had pinned her wrists to the door had let go and she immediately reached for his hair, fisting and tugging at it. One of his hands snaked around her waist and the other was rubbing up and down her back, he walked back without breaking the kiss as Raavi’s legs tightened around his waist, the hand that was at her back searched blindly for the handle of the door, a few seconds later he managed to open the door and walk them to the bed, mentally congratulating himself for locking the door earlier.

He lowered her down onto the bed with out breaking the kiss, and went down with her, only allowing a bit of his weight to lay on her, she didn’t seem to like how he held back and wrapped her legs around him once again, pulling him closer, her hands frantically running across his shoulders and chest. She broke the kiss and planted open-mouthed kisses on the crook of his neck up to the spot behind his ear that made groan, somewhere in his pleasure filled haze he felt her push against his shoulder, he flipped them, letting her straddle him as they lost themselves to each other, all thoughts of resting long forgotten.

A.N

It is a slightly emotional chapter! Also do let me know in the comments about how you guys feel about Mature/ Slightly explicit ShiVi bits! I wanted to include them in, but wanted to know how you guys feel about them!

Love this story so much 💜💜

Awesome

I was waiting for ur update

So nice

Well mature scenes should be kept

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OMG OMG, I was waiting for this update so badly. Thank you so much. This story is so different and wonderfully written. I love the pace of the story, past of Shivi, their stories, snippets and Raavi's relationship with the brothers especially Goutam. Loved it, please update soon!!!!

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thanks for the tag 🥺❤️

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Jitna kahu utna kaam h for this story when I started reading this I felt the story will be boring kyunki yahan Rishu is too sweet

But did you surprised me sorry for making opinions beforehand loved every bits and pieces of the update come to love the excitement of rishu especially the way you mentioned it in this chapter

Her emotions were so well written

Krish aur Rishita bond

Gautam aur Raavi ka emotional scenes it's something we might never get in the show par you fulfilled that wish of many of us so Thank you for that

Shivi bond toh jitni dekhe utni pyari lagti h

But aren't you gonna add Devta scene much becoz I felt ki kafi kaam h becoz I really. Want this version of Devta a bit more but if you want to slowly process their tale then thats also okay

Will be waiting for more

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Rishitas curiosity is ❤️

Do add more mature scenes of shiva 😌

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