ShaKhi Drabble: The One who Belongs - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: infinitie

unres!!

Akshu!!!! I'm finally getting a chance to sit down and react to this properly because it was absolutely beautiful. I've read it a few times and it makes me so emotional about Shaurya!! I adore the way he went through describing his feelings for her. Especially these lines:

"In a very peculiar way, he was tied to her, yet he felt positively liberated.Shaurya Sabherwal is finally the one who belongs."

He finally found home with her, a person who will unconditionally love him without making him feel suffocated or beholden to her. Despite growing up in a house full of people, he only found belonging with her 🥺🥺🥺

Sru... I love the way you give highlights... It always tells me where I go right. TBH, watching Rimi's VM had made me so emotional that I could not stop. Also, I remember how beautiful Shaurya's love realization was!

I am still high on it!

Sorry for missing out on your comment but I honestly forgot to reply to these threads during my exams and assignments 😆

Thank you! ❤️ This means a lot!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Vistaa

Simply beautiful!! Gladdened my heart❤️❤️

Thank you so much 🤗

I should be thanking you for reading and commenting here... 🤗

Apologies for extremely late reply!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ZaaraBB

Ha ha. you got it so right!!! Written beautifully as per usual. Imagine me,my sister hatesss Shaurya and im always talking about him. i can feel your pain

Thank you so much!

Sometimes I wonder if I will ever be able to forget Shaurya... 😆 He has left a mark on me and I am very glad that I watched this show!! BTW, why does your sis hate Shaurya?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Nope not tired at all , do continue with your Shaurya jaap😅...short & sweet...Shaurya belongs💖👍

Thank you Vaani!

I think we will never get tired of Shaurya... What do you think?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: AK_2010

I think we will never get tired of Shaurya... What do you think?


Absolutely

He was on a level of his own...and the fact that it ended too soon doesnt help either...havent got my fill of him yet🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SparklenShine

Keep writing more and aise chote chote shaurya dose dete rho.😳

Even I'm obsessed with him😁

Toh uski baare mai aap jitna bhi likhegi woh kam hi hoga for me☺️❤️

Long time no see Ny!

Lekin I cant complain as well... Look at me, reply after months of posting this 😆

But I hope you are gonna read my Sabherwal series... 😃 Usmei Shaurya dose hai... Thoda nahi, bada wala dose hai 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

This is after Banjara VM 😲

Wow ❤️✨

Sukoon bhara laga


Tired of Shaurya jaap

Girl! Most of us do that ☺️😆

Ab toh Acp k bhi jaap karne lagi hoon main 🤪🤣

Shaurya is adorable 🥰

Haq se jaap karo 😎 (also because I want more such amazing drabbles and One shots 🙊🤣)

Maam, aap kaha ho aaj kal... Baat hi nahi karte!

Bhul gaye ho kya? OS toh likh rahi hu par aapka review nahi ata 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

This was such a crisp, adorable piece! Loved the wrap up lines.


In a very peculiar way, he was tied to her, yet he felt positively liberated.


Shaurya Sabherwal is finally the one who belongs.

Thank you so much!!

I hope you are still around on the forum... Warna I would be aasman se tapke, khajoor mei atke 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Oh God! It's too good. ❤️

Your version of Majnu Shaurya stole my heart. I'm travelling to home right now and if not for the mask I'm wearing, the stupid smile on my face might have invited perplexed gazes from the fellow passengers. 😆

Thought to read through the pending ffs, drabbles and os and now I can't stop smiling after reading this lovely work. Loved it.

I hope we'll get to see such a glimpse of Shaurya in the show.


And yeah, do write more like this. Would love to read them. Loving your Shaurya-ism . 😳

Hi Meera! Thank you so much! 🤗

I am glad you liked him... And I am glad that you smiled on the day you read this... And guess, we did get this version and much more of Shaurya Majnu Sabherwal in the show... What do you think?

I hope you are still reading my stories as you said up here! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Shegalradhika

Why did you stop couldn't you make it little longer

Then I wouldn't have been a drabble 😆 And if I wuld name it OS, people would hit me with chappals for such short update 😃

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