ShiVi Drabble- Lost

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Posted: 3 years ago
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ShiVi Drabble- Lost




Raavi quickly ran away to their room as soon as they entered the house from the mandir. She was tired. She felt humiliated. He had misbehaved with her in front of her friends. Shiva had never been this person she knew it. He was always there for her. Their fights always stayed between them. Suddenly it was all so public that she could not handle any more humiliation. She quickly changed her clothes and lied on the bed facing the other side. She saw Shiva enter and closed her eyes as she saw him.


Shiva knew this time he had crossed the limit. He had no right to be disrespectful to her. He had made things absolutely about himself forgetting that she was also in this relationship with him actually trying to make things better. His insecurities took over again, he ignored Raavi and made his way outside to change. He entered back to see her eyes wet as if she was controlling her tears from falling off. Guilt came back to him but he ignored and slept on the other side not facing her.


Since few days they had always slept towards each other. This was new and he did not like it. He suddenly missed the attention she gave him everyday. He missed her efforts to be with him and that’s when he realised she was trying really hard as if she was the only one in this relationship. His last bit of control was lost as he heard her soft sobs.


“Raavi.” He called out getting up


As she heard his voice her sobs grew louder and she could not control anymore.


“Raavi I’m sorry mera tuje dhaka dene ka koi iraada nai tha. I’m sorry please tu aise ro mat.” He tried some damage control


“Kaun hai tu? Aur mera Shiva kahaan hai? Tu vo Shiva hai hi nai jise mai bachpan se janti hoon.” She cried harder getting up


“Raavi” he reached her cheeks


“Dur reh mujse.” She pushed his hands away putting her head in her hands


“Raavi I’m sorry.”


“Apni bhabhi ki itni izzat. Aur biwi? Kuch deserve nai karti mai? Mai bhi ek aurat hoon Shiva.” She hit his chest


“Raavi dekh aise ro mat.”


“Tujse kuch nai hona. Mai bahar soungi. Bahut bezati mehsus ho rai hai yahaan.” She wiped her tears and stormed out.


That night Raavi cried herself to sleep while Shiva understood he had ruined his world with his own hands. He surely had to do something. Finally, they were two people in a relationship.


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I really felt like writing something but did not have time to write up an update so this Drabble!😆


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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

this was so heartbreaking but so needed 😭 I really hope raavi gives it back to him and makes him understand the error in his ways

amazing drabble jaan 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was amazing 👏👏

Glad Raavi pointed out the difference on how he treats Dhara and her

Loved it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is sad, but if he actually pushes her today , I kind of want to see this. He needs to repent.


Are there any chances of continuation?!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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enough of suffering already.....give back to him .....I love shiva too much but when he is wrong and being thick headed punishment milna he chahiye


publicly kya tamasha karna....sit in room and sort out but no....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it❤️

My poor raavi😒

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was sad, but a good one.

You should continue this one

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Posted: 3 years ago
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In his insecurities,shiva is ignoring all the efforts Ravi is doing to make their relation work n the pain n humiliation he making her go through.once she will reach her point,there will be no going back except regret n guilt in Shiva's heart .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so heartbreaking yet I loved it. ❤️😭

You've written it amazingly....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi bro🤗

Finally you wrote one piece🤭


Bahut chota tha yeh😬😬 par i liked it❤️❤️

Marham lgne hi lga tha ki khtm ho gya tha drabble tumhara😆

Lekin i am glad you managed to write.


Or likho😬 vaise bhi kal se weekend hai.

Although mera aaj se hai😍

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