RaghVi OS: Pallavi's Surprise (ft.Pole Dance) - Page 6

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

This was amazing Reem. ❤️❤️ Do write more😘😘

thank you so much

Originally posted by: nooriex

Now I'm trying to imagine yoga in those sarees she wears and I can't 🤣 glad they chose the more realistic option for that scene!

I agree---the only time I saw FL doing yoga--and she was wearing suit and churidaar---so leggings and top was definitely a realisitc option here

Originally posted by: masin

Thank you so much for the PM!

This was such a unique and yet highly overdue piece! I doubt and also really hope the show would attempt something like this (no, not the kiss, woh toh definitely nahi hoga show mein, but I'm referring to the pole dancing). Shivangi is insanely skilled and on a side note, the comments on her videos are so disturbing. Why are people so bothered that she pole dances?! Dekhne toh saare chale aate hain lekin saath saath usko gaaliyan bhi dete hain. Ab saree mein toh pole dancing karne se rahi woh bechari!

Anyway, I love that Pallavi wasn't shy once she got caught. She gave in to Raghav's advances and took as well as she got, if not more! This was so sensually written - the way you described her movements, her hair flips, I could visualize all of it. When I saw at the end that you shared a video link, I was floored by how descriptive and accurate your writing was!

The last line had me re-reading the piece all over again, and I'm glad a few other readers commented the same! Raghav's cheeky grin and winks melt my heart every single time and the way he reaches out to his wife with a mix of authority and playfulness is SO sweet!

I also loved that Raghav didn't cancel his business meeting. I'm frankly fed up of ITV male leads postponing work commitments to give time to their wives. A healthy marriage is where both parties manage all their commitments effectively to the best of their respective abilities. Kaam postpone karke ghar walon ko time dena bohat asaan hai, but that's not sustainable nor respectable. I loved the way Raghav firmly said that he needs to go for now, but he'll be back and they'll pick up where they left off - so bloody authentic! ❤️

Love your writing, looking forward to read more!

Thank you so much Masin for such a detailed analysis (since I don't know your name hence calling you by your UN)

Pole dancing is something which definitely should not be criticized as it both a form of dancing and fitness and about her clothes--if she wears saree while doing it--she might slip and get injured--skin makes a better grip and contact with the pole. I have said earlier too---it was really surprising for me to see a married FL wearing leggings and tanks and doing yoga--something I havent yet seen in the shows.

I am glad you were able to visualise--I tried my best to put the movements in limited words because few terms used during pole dancing might sound offensive to some people.

Raghav is that sweet guy with the shell of hardness--and the fact that line has made you go over and read the thing all over again made me happy--although I put that line not with the intent that it would make readers read the whole thing.

there were 2 reasons I wrote Farhad's interruption--first to avoid it for becoming censored content and secondly as you said not ignoring the work---work is also important.

I am glad you loved it

Originally posted by: SONIA441

OH MY GOSH!!! SUPERHAWWWT ALERRTTT!!!☺️☺️

Reeem, you just gave us our fantasy & how! Damn! The way you were able to describe each of Pallavi's movements, I could very well imagine the dance moves she was putting on

The songs used have actually been a favourite of mine for some time now. And the fact that Raghav makes his entry when Pallavi's dancing on 'Aa Zara' is a good flow to the scene👏

Pallavi in shorts & Raghav in a suit in that position - Woah!! That's some imagination☺️

Thank you so much Sonia❤️

I am glad you were able to visualise---I did a little research on the songs and the song Aa zara was suggested by Shri to give me the inspiration..

you can extend the imagination of yours if you would like

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Awww this is so hot and sexy and mesmerising at the same time

Kya kiya tum ne, Reem re

Gosh! Awesome

Loved it

Thank you so much Jen

Glad you loved it❤️

Originally posted by: chat_3

Thanks for the message. Enjoyed this romantic OS. I like how Pallavi had taken the reins of the house and taking care of her self care.👏

Thank you so much❤️

Thanks for the pm.❤️

Her pole dance was very hot, very detailed. Exceptionally brilliant.

Their making out scene was short but

Farhad should disturb them...😡🤣

Is there a sequel...😳

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

This was hot

Do continue it...I want to see the full performance😆

thank you so much

I dont think I will continue it anytime soon--but if I do I will definitely tag you there

Originally posted by: JarOfCookies

Ufffff! Raghav-Pallavi and pole dance!

This was beautiful Reem 👍🏼

Thank you so much❤️

Wow this was soo amazing 😍😍 and so different amd beautiful. Loved it so much ❤❤❤