RaghVi OS: Pallavi's Surprise (ft.Pole Dance) - Page 4

This was amazing Reem. ❤️❤️ Do write more😘😘

Thank you so much for the PM!

This was such a unique and yet highly overdue piece! I doubt and also really hope the show would attempt something like this (no, not the kiss, woh toh definitely nahi hoga show mein, but I'm referring to the pole dancing). Shivangi is insanely skilled and on a side note, the comments on her videos are so disturbing. Why are people so bothered that she pole dances?! Dekhne toh saare chale aate hain lekin saath saath usko gaaliyan bhi dete hain. Ab saree mein toh pole dancing karne se rahi woh bechari!

Anyway, I love that Pallavi wasn't shy once she got caught. She gave in to Raghav's advances and took as well as she got, if not more! This was so sensually written - the way you described her movements, her hair flips, I could visualize all of it. When I saw at the end that you shared a video link, I was floored by how descriptive and accurate your writing was!

The last line had me re-reading the piece all over again, and I'm glad a few other readers commented the same! Raghav's cheeky grin and winks melt my heart every single time and the way he reaches out to his wife with a mix of authority and playfulness is SO sweet!

I also loved that Raghav didn't cancel his business meeting. I'm frankly fed up of ITV male leads postponing work commitments to give time to their wives. A healthy marriage is where both parties manage all their commitments effectively to the best of their respective abilities. Kaam postpone karke ghar walon ko time dena bohat asaan hai, but that's not sustainable nor respectable. I loved the way Raghav firmly said that he needs to go for now, but he'll be back and they'll pick up where they left off - so bloody authentic! ❤️

Love your writing, looking forward to read more!

OH MY GOSH!!! SUPERHAWWWT ALERRTTT!!!☺️☺️

Reeem, you just gave us our fantasy & how! Damn! The way you were able to describe each of Pallavi's movements, I could very well imagine the dance moves she was putting on

The songs used have actually been a favourite of mine for some time now. And the fact that Raghav makes his entry when Pallavi's dancing on 'Aa Zara' is a good flow to the scene👏

Pallavi in shorts & Raghav in a suit in that position - Woah!! That's some imagination☺️

Awww this is so hot and sexy and mesmerising at the same time

Kya kiya tum ne, Reem re

Gosh! Awesome

Loved it

Originally posted by: Ruhi.007

Beautiful OS 👍. Kya ho sakta tha aur kya ho raha hai show mein 😂😂

https://www.instagram.com/p/CC3H3QPjWTG/?utm_medium=copy_link

In case anybody has not seen above clip, here is something you may enjoy. Although reem has already painted a beautiful picture 😍

Thank you so much Ruhi

and thanks for the pole dance video

Originally posted by: sunshine_94

Lovely writing..enjoyed reading

Thanky you so much❤️

Originally posted by: Medha0609

OMG 😳

This was soooooo hot 😱👏🏻

Fire 🔥🔥

Thank you so much

glad you liked it❤️

Thanks for the message. Enjoyed this romantic OS. I like how Pallavi had taken the reins of the house and taking care of her self care.👏

This was hot

Do continue it...I want to see the full performance😆

Ufffff! Raghav-Pallavi and pole dance!

This was beautiful Reem 👍🏼