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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

I am too lazy to write a wholeass drabble so here's my inspo from KD's recent pic smiley36


Yet again, Shiva had asked her to leave him and to give up on the facade of a relationship they were in. Naturally, her heart wanted no part in his quest for a separation but her mind knew that there was no point in running around in circles around a man who would never make her the center of his universe. As soon as the yatra had ended, Shiva had left in the middle of a heated conversation between the two, as usual. But he had made it quite clear that he wanted nothing to with her, and so with a heavy heart she packed up all her things and quietly slipped out of the house.

Meanwhile, Shiva had visited his tree in an attempt to make sense of the triad of emotions he had been feeling. He kept volleying between pain and anger, not much sense seeping through his thoughts. He desperately wanted to let her go - to let her live the life that she had always dreamt of. But every time the thought crossed his mind, a dull ache would settle in his heart and then soon be replaced by rage. And it was that anger that he would project onto her - the assumption that she would leave him one day or another. He knew he was being incredibly selfish with her but he couldn't help himself. He needed her in front of his eyes but he needed her away from him a well. After a while, he figured that there was no point in reflecting on the mess of emotions he was carrying and he left to go back home.

Raavi had tearfully been walking down the streets of Somnath towards her MaasiMa's house, rolling the suitcase behind her sluggishly. She hadn't expected to meet anyone on the way but knowing her luck, she met just the person she was dreading.

Shiva stopped at the sight of the chipkali carrying her luggage down the street and felt air being knocked out of him mercilessly. So, she had finally decided to give up and leave him for good. She had finally give into the devilish thinking of her MaasiMa and was leaving the junglee gawaar. As always, he channeled the pain that he was feeling into anger and stormed towards her - the fury evident in his eyes.

Raavi faltered backwards, her heart not being able to withstand another heated confrontation. She hoped that he would just let her be but he had never done that before, why start now?

"Kya karahi hai?" Shiva asked, trying to keep his anger under control.

"Tune kaha na jaa, toh jaa rahi hoon MaasiMa ke ghar Shiva," Raavi replied while talking a few steps to the side of him and forwards. He sidestepped her and blocked her pathway.

"Tu kahin nahi jayegi, samjhi tu? Chal ghar vapas," he gritted out, forming fists with his hands to avoid gripping onto her wrists.

"Bas bahoth hogaya Shiva, main aur nahi karsakti ye tere saath. Main jaa rahi hoon toh bas jaa rahi hoon," Raavi replied, tears streaming down her cheeks from her cold-hearted admission.

Instead of replying, he walked backwards until there was some distance in between them and pulled out a matchbox from his pocket. Raavi watched him in confusion as he struck the match and let it fall on the ground. The fire instantly caught on from a few drops of oil that had spilled from passing by vehicles. Her confusion turned into horror and she screamed, "Shiva tu ye kya karaha hai? Pagal hogaya hai,"

"Haan hogaya hoon pagal lekin tu Maami ke ghar nahi jayegi samjhi, tu vapas chal rahi hai. Aur agar tune phir se jaane ki baat ki, toh ye toh sirf trailer tha - pure somanth mein aag laga dunga aur ye shiva pandya ka vada hai," he shouted while walking around the fire and grabbing onto her hand. She wasn't going anywhere but back home with him.

Beautiful🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mahajanaish

I was watching old episodes and saw the kidnapping MU Episode . How Raavi faints in Shiva's arms 😢😢😢. Even taht MU was better than this one ...

Let's hope it ends one way or another by Saturday.


ShiVi needed a separation- like yesterday.


Whether Raavi evaluates her decision or not, atleast I want Shiva to calm down enough to reflect that he has lost all his senses and he should be a better person 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

While I love your drabbles and OSes, they never reach the resolution part 🤣 It always stops at Shiva aggressively taking Raavi with him.


Mujhe bohot michmichi hoti hai 🤣


when the show gives us resolution I will give you loads of resolution 🤣🤣


jokes apart 😆 the reason I don't ever write the resolution part is because I am genuinely waiting to see how the show is going to do it - I want to go in with no expectations and see how they handle it - otherwise, if I write it - I will expect something similar and then be upset when it doesn't happen 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nafees5

Beautiful🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍😍


thank you jaaneman 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

I miss old PS . The Subtle acting less drama . Alice's acting in the scene where she says "Naam Shiva rakhne se koi Shankar Nahi ban jaata" . 😢😢😢 .


Problems I have with Shivi these days


1. Just running in circles . It's the same Friends taunting . Shiva MU scenario . Shiva is not even giving her enough space to clear it .


2. Zero conversation . It's irritating to another level .


3. Shiva doing Bhabhi Jaap all the time . I mean common grow up please . Even pre haveli Shiva thought of Dhara as a mother but was never like this


4. Raavi's idiotic friends . Can they please STFU . Even I don't like many of my friends' spouses but I still don't behave this way. Atleast wait for them to leave


For all I know now , Shivi separation will happen soon . I would have loved it had they given them some good conversation . Not like this burning bikes and manhandling . It's lame to the next level . No wonder I have stopped feeling for PS now . PS makers are Stupidly under the impression that it's their own show which is garnering the trp . I have reasons to believe it's that 7 pm show .


PS men are toxic af . Rishita fell on the ground and no one went to pick her up what the hell . He loves her but doesn't respect her . Yahin bhabhi giri hoti to ye log paagal ho jaate

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Posted: 3 years ago

Khayali Pulao of the day:


ShiVi have a major confrontation and Raavi comes back to Maami’s house.


A few days later…

DevTa fight over their own issues and Dev walks away, making Rishita feel heartbroken and unwanted. She decided to go for a walk and gets caught in the middle of a street fight which leaves her horribly injured.


Raavi receives a call from Krish letting her know and she rushes to be with her family. The entire family is heartbroken while Rishita fights for her life.

Shiva looks at Rishita lying on the hospital bed and realizes life is too short and if it had been Raavi instead of Rishita, he would never have forgiven himself.


So he takes Raavi to his tree. He tells her that whenever he is sad or needs to think something through he comes to this tree. She tells him that she knows and has known for years.


He helps her climb up and asks if there is any way she would be willing to hear his side of things. Raavi replies that she has been trying to have a conversation for so long. The two bicker and then stop… they take a deep breath and decide to start afresh. Shiva and Raavi end up having a heart to heart. They decide to give their relationship time and respect. Balance things in a way where their past is acknowledged but it’s the present and future that is more important. They talk about expectations and boundaries. Shiva doesn’t share the fact that he likes her but they agree to take it slow.

Shiva requests Raavi to move back into Pandya Niwas. She agrees.


On the other hand, Dev realizes what a douchebag he has been and decides to be a better husband. He promises Rishita that he will listen and try to understand her. The thought of losing her grips him and we see him begging her to open her eyes.

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Posted: 3 years ago

So this week we will have these rain-aag-rain-aag repeat & looks like separation is certain (starplus has but one get 2 free deal? Check IF buzz: top3 chaska shows are all heading to MU. How original)


My biggest annoyance with separation is:

1. It is coming before any conversation. One from daarunight is still not cleared.

2.separation Means Maami & oily hogging screen space with Raavi.

3. Separation will bring along mahaan Bhabhima in the equation again. Not that it will not help, but for a change: hope makers give Gaumbi-Shiva scenes. Bhabhi can be background support. Though red-green chashmas suggest bhabhi will be the superhero again:/


Need to keep reminding self: zero expectation watching helps.

Edited by spdp - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

Caption this 😆

It's very innocent 😎

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Mannat poori kar rahe hain, abb nahi😆


Edited by mpks1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Uhmm guy's isn't Rahul 2.0 == Rahul clean shaven?


Looks like the same guy to me


This rahul guy is really disturbing you isn't he.. you have been analysing his name and face for what, hours? 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.


when the show gives us resolution I will give you loads of resolution 🤣🤣


jokes apart 😆 the reason I don't ever write the resolution part is because I am genuinely waiting to see how the show is going to do it - I want to go in with no expectations and see how they handle it - otherwise, if I write it - I will expect something similar and then be upset when it doesn't happen 😆

Ok makes sense.

But otherwise your writing is beautiful ❤️ You write angst very well 👍🏼 Somehow your characters seem true to their descriptions/motivations. Not sure if I amde sense

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