Originally posted by: ThePirateKing
Well saw both the episodes back to back without fast forwarding anything. Just a few thoughts. There is no issue with the track per se, the creators can change the sequencing from the original based on the requirements of the audience. The main issue is with the execution and other technical aspects like screen-play, story flow, character development, continuity etc. The mango audience may not completely understand the film making nuances, but any breaks and jarring stuff is noticed very quickly and the interest dwindles.
The show is FamilyDrama/Romance so Anita and Janardhan will be making appearances for the drama part. In such drama the intentions of the negative characters(both marco and micro) need to be made very clear to the audience. The way Vivek (in one of the Tamil comedy tracks) was able to hear the mind voice of humans and animals, the same way the audience should be able to hear Anita's mind voice. This make the audience interested/expectant for the response from the positive characters. Till now nobody is sure why Anita emptied a bottle of Parachute Coconut oil in the pots.
Romance can then be handled separately in form of interaction between leads(main/parallel/supporting) or MUs or monologues. Coming to the episode felt bad for Rishita, she really is all alone now. Raavi and Shiva have very obvious(to the viewers) issues, Dev and Rishita have got a very simmering issue which might explode if Dev goes on his rant against his FIL. This also has good drama potential. Hopefully they get the execution right for both the younger couples.
Looks like it was too many thoughts!!