Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 3

Originally posted by: deepsea_27

This is absolutely brilliant.Thank you for chosing this topic.The internal conflict of Shagun is so on point.

Considering Alka mam's acting prowess i expected this scene to be a turning point in the show and they make Shagun a positive character.Girls are not another girl's enemy and I always wanted this to be the topic shown on TV.

This is what we all expected in the show.Please continue this os and make it into a four shot.I strongly feel Shagun and Anokhi must have a conversation and Anojhi explains what is love to her.I want Shaurya to hear the convo and confront Badi maa.Shagun in the initial episodes was a strong character and Shaurya needs to address that.

Thank you so much! I am glad that a non-ShaKhi concept is getting a great response here... But it means a lot!! Thank you 😊

I like to think that Shagun was grey in the show. I still remember when Anokhi was about to fall off the ladder after Holi, Shagun was actually concerned for her. Those were small indications that she is bad, not evil. She had her own selfish reasons for wanting to get married to Shaurya even when he loved someone else, but she never crossed her line...

Which is why I could never hate Shagun... Even though coming in between Shaurya and Anokhi was her own conscious choice. Irrespective of Devi Sabherwal's manipulation...

Sorry for the rant 😆

Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Res..

Kiska Hai Ye Tumko Intezar Main Hoon Na

Dekh Lo Idhar To Ek Baar Main Hoon Na

Khaamosh Kyun Ho Jo Bhi Kahna Hai Kaho

😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: lavs_157

Shagun 1.0 was a very interesting character.

Shagun 2.0 was reduced to a caricature of her. She was more of a comic relief.

Was very interesting to read from her perspective. N How her and Devi’s dynamics changed, now that she had no use to her.

Loving this series already Akshu! ❤️

Thank you so much Lavs! Watch the space for the next update! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Jiggy7

So it starts after the revelation..

This is good.. Shagun as a scheming and jealous ex is out in the open with her POV.. Wahan sirf wo do line bolke nikal gayi..

Devgun confrontation was on point..

It's wonderful Akshu and I could imagine that famous work-out of Shagun.. 😂😂

Idhar babu..

IF never lets me edit Res posts.. 🙃

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Thank you so much! I am glad that a non-ShaKhi concept is getting a great response here... But it means a lot!! Thank you 😊

I like to think that Shagun was grey in the show. I still remember when Anokhi was about to fall off the ladder after Holi, Shagun was actually concerned for her. Those were small indications that she is bad, not evil. She had her own selfish reasons for wanting to get married to Shaurya even when he loved someone else, but she never crossed her line...

Which is why I could never hate Shagun... Even though coming in between Shaurya and Anokhi was her own conscious choice. Irrespective of Devi Sabherwal's manipulation...

Sorry for the rant 😆

Exactly i too felt the same.Hopeful in love is not wrong but when the person has moved on, all it takes is acceptance of same by her.Devi manipulated and Shagun's hopes raised only to fall back.Now that was a blow she could not take and frustration or desperation mixed with insecurity made her a negetive character.

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Madam, aapne abhi tak apna subh naam nahi bataya!! Nahi batana toh bol do... Hum hi apko koi nickname de denge... After all, I cant call you GHKPM, right? 😆

🤣🤣🤣

Hi dear, my name is Vaani😊 but now i am so curious to know what nickname you would have given me😅...

I actually try my best to stick to OG character sketch and story to write my OSs... Coz I know if I start writing as per my own ideas, I might end up writing an OTT, dramatic and constipating story 🤣 But I will see what I can do to finish off Shagun's chapter!

Yup , i really miss Shakhi & the potential that was promised to us...loving your ideas ... OTT or not , i am game😉😊

Thank you so much for your honest review! I will look forward to more as I update ahead... ❤️

Welcome dear, thank YOU for these wonderful ideas & stories💖🌹

PS: Originally I had used a different ID to discuss in this forum but lost the password so just made a new one in the spur of the moment...all the saakk ones were mostly taken😅

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Really loved it , gods know why they had bought shagun again in the show , they never explored her character correctly, so looking forward to ur series , amazing update

Thank you!

I agree, there was more shade to the character and they were supposed to explore it, we all know how badly it was cut short...

Watch the space, next updat coming in 2morrow! 😃

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

Akshu 🤗

This was amazing ❤️

I loved how u showed Shagun inner turmoil, her frustration on seeing Anokhi get what she wanted from Shaurya without much efforts. I really liked how u showed Devi's true colors and her selfishness. Tbh I wanted to see Shagun's jealousy, her desperate attempt to have Shaurya all for herself during ShaKhi Marriage.

I also wanted to know why she came back from Cambridge. Where were her parents? If a daughter comes for holidays from abroad, parents don't just leave them and roam around. If she was so obsessed with Shaurya, she would've left her dreams back then not breaking the engagement. Seeing ShaKhi proximity, she was ready to back off like a sensible lady during Holi. Then what had happened suddenly? Did she even love him? Since she is a Kapoor, she can't be marrying Shaurya for money or status. Then why it was so important for her to become a Sabherwal bahu? She even threatened badima for the fake engagement. She did not look hurt or broken seeing Shaurya's love or support for Anokhi. She was acting as if her ego was bruised, as if one of her possession was snatched from her. Was she thrown out of Cambridge because of her imbalanced, violent behavior due to her depression, her obsession. Why didn’t she use Ahir-Anokhi's photo to tag Anokhi as a characterless girl in front of the college, to create misunderstandings between ShaKhi? She could've threatened Anokhi to frame Shaurya in a harassment case or anything extreme. But she was shown stupidly plotting with Alok...such a waste of her potential. How did she forget about her curse?

If you want to continue on Shagun, I would love to have these answers. If not, pls write the next shot Tej or Devi.

I want to know how Devi was manipulated by Tej in every step of her life...from marrying her out of consent (might threaten to tarnish her image/hamper her father's respect) to changing her original name, how he made her cut ties with her own family, how he despite being an infertile himself made her question herself of being an incomplete woman, how he degraded her initially because of her family and little education and how he started valuing her, giving her power when she completely succumbed to his wishes.

Love,

Pratz

Woah! The size of your review excites me more than anything else! Har chapter mei aisa hi review chahiye mujhe!

I always wondered how Shugun must have felt watching Shaurya fight tooth and nail to be with Anokhi, the girl who is everything but what he initially wanted in his wife. Mostly because the way Shagun 1.0 was portrayed, she was bound to be hurt and jealous of the fact that Shaurya moved on so quickly and changed himself to the core to be Anokhi!

The domineering, arrogant, self-centered man started to behave like a teen!

I think it is clear that she came back to India because something didn't work out at Cambridge. The way she was suddenly back and then approached by Devi. Her sudden decision to get Shaurya back, only moments after she told Devi to get him married to the woman he loves... It indicates an ulterior motive. Remember I always said, why did she make a u-turn after seconds after she was so thoughtful and mature. She knew Shaurya loved another, but she still gate crashed his holi?

She didn't use Aahir-Anokhi photographs because Devi rightly pointed it to her that Shaurya won't believe them even for a moment. And she was absolutely right.

I am not looking forward to making this series very OTT dramatic, but I will try to put my perspective through... I am a person who believes that nobody can make you do anything you don't really want to. TejVi will be an interesting chapter for sure... I am not gonna rush to her chapter because it needs a lot of thought and time.

I don't want to disappoint you guys with an average story for her...

Originally posted by: avanisharma12

lol even i wanted her to be jealous, she was somewhat in the initial episodes and then after goa track where everything went downhill she was reduced to a bystander

I am glad she wasn't a typical ITV's vamp 🤭

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Very well written dear will wait to read more stuff from you

Thank you for commenting!

I will update soon... You won't have to wait for long....