OS : Kartavya Ya Pyar - LAST CHAPTER (PAGE 3) - Page 2

Exactly what is going on in the show...but do write the second part. Very nicely written

Absolutely amazing story!!!

Can’t wait to read part 2

Amazing write up👏🏻👏🏻

Beautifully detailed the inner turmoil of Raghav and Pallavi's ignorance to his sufferings.

Continue with next part..... would love to see that Don Raghav Rao who never hesitated to shown reality mirror to Pallavi n Deshmukh family.

RR kya don mode main aa gaya ki every OS is showing him in that light

do tag me when you post next part

So this is the end. . And I don't have any idea what I will pen down so let's see what I write I hope it will be worth your time

Next Morning

Raghav woke up with heavy head but something was heavier and that was his Heart. As soon as he woke up he turned to look at Pallavi and soon after realisation dawned upon him.. he woke up and ordered for Lime water and freshened up.

After One Hour he was outside the D house, he took a deep breath, he have had enough of everything thrown on him. He rang the bell, the door opened by VD

VD was seething in anger seeing Raghav

VD : Subha subha kya chaiye tumhe yaha, mere bete ki tabiyat kharab hai aur tum tamasha karne agye

Raghav : E sanki Buddha agar tamasha ko dur rakhna chahta tha toh mere ghar ke logo ko apne se dur rakh, biwi hai yaha meri toh mai jab chahunga jaise chahunga yaha aunga, agar tujhe ya tere pagal khandan me kisine roka bhi na Raghav Rao ko toh apne sath apne pagal bete ko leke jail ki hawa khana Ardhamayinda

VD : tum mujhe dhamkane ki koshish kar rahe ho?

Raghav : Koshish tujhe jaise log karte hai Raghav Rao tujhe Tera future dikha raha hai jo definitely hoga, ab side hat

And he shouts for Pallavi

Pallavi rushes out of Mandar's room with Mandar behind (She went in to give medicines to Mandar and at the same time Raghav entered the house) but Raghav got hurt knowing she was with Mandar but didn't even call him 'once' to know where was he whole night.

Pallavi ran towards Raghav

Pallavi : Arey Raghav tum yaha itni Subha ? Sab thik hai na? Aur tum kal kaha chale gaye the, mujhe abhi dhyan aya tum toh kal dikhe nahi mujhe bahar drop karne ke baad, ghar chale gye the kya ?

Raghav ignoring everything she said as if know if he starts replying he may lose his calm which he didn't want to..

Raghav : I need to talk Pallavi, akele me

Pallavi : par Raghav aise kaise yaha sab hai aur..

Raghav : It's urgent and am sure Mandar ke sath jab tum akele room me rehne se inko problem nahi hoti toh tum apne pati ke sath kuch der akele baat karlogi toh kya issue hoga. Kaafi open minded log lagte hai yelog hai na ?

Pallavi got the taunt from his words and somehow she didn't like his tone but she found something odd in his voice so she excused themself and took him to her room, as soon as they entered Pallavi was about to start her rant on what did Raghav do in front of all when Raghav said with stern voice also which lacked every emotion

'Cut the crap Pallavi, Mujhe bohot kaam hai late ho raha hai, tumse bas puchna tha ki tum wapis aagyi thi 'MERE' ghar toh wapis chalna chahogi ?

Pallavi : Raghav mai khushi khushi chalti par Mandar ki halat bigad jati hai mai aas pas nahi hoti hi toh

Raghav : Thik hai, As you wish chalo niche sabse kuch baat karni hai

They came downstairs and Raghav in front of everyone said to Pallavi

Raghav : I have a Freind 'Sudhir Avasthi' you can google about him. Mera freind hai toh Mandar ko special treatment bhi milega aur fees bhi zyada nahi lega. Top 5 me hai World ka wo yesab cases me. Toh agar tumlog chahe toh dekh sakta hai, mujhe btadena Pallavi.

Mandar : mujhe nahi chaiye tumhara ehsan

Raghav : He walked slowly towards him looked into his eyes and chukled and said slowly but clearly for everyone to hear - "Ehsan pe hi Jee raha hai tum mere, Meri biwi tumhari care taker bani hui hai Yeh Ehsaan hai mera tumpe, Agar ehsaan ka mood chale jaye na toh abhi ke abhi ise yaha se le ja sakta hai mai"

Mandar was about to say something when VD said : Ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum

Raghav : E sanki buddha bete ko thik dekhna hai ya Pallavi ko is ghar me rakhne ka bahana chaiye sirf, Agar bete ko thik rakhna hai toh acha doctor dikhao.

Ye kya behuda baat hai ki kisi ek ke paas hone se koi thik hojayega agar patients aise hi thik hone laga toh doctors log ko apni degree jala deni chaiye.

H turned towards Pallavi and said

Raghav : Mujhe hairani hoti hai ki tumne jisne Kirti aur Sunny ka sach khud akele bahar leke agyi apna dimag chalake tum aisi baaton pe trust karke yaha itne din ruk gaya, tumhara plan kya hai Pallavi, Agar har waqt tumhare dur Jane se Mandar khud ko kuch karte rahega toh tum usko acha psychiatrist dikhane ke jagah uski nursing karte firogi aur kabtak ? Agar ye bina ilaaj ke zindagibhar aisa behave karega toh tumhara plan zindagibhar yahi basne ka hai kya ? Tumne iska ye pagalpan dekhke bhi kisi dusre doctor se consult nahi kya ? Kya tum pehchanti ho Dr. Ramya ko? Toh tum kaisa sure hai ki wo achi doctor hai

Pallavi : Raghav usne Mandar ko do saal tak sambhala hai

Raghav : Exactly!! Do saaal Pallavi jo insan 2 saal tak zinda tha bina tumhare sirf dawai pe use achanak 2 din me aisa kya hogya ki wo tumhare bina 2minute reh le toh pagal hojata hai ? Socho kahi tumhara uske sath rehne ka decision hi toh galat nahi tha ? Agar tum sabne kabhi uske demands me give in kiya hi nahi hota toh uske demands badhte hi nahi. Aur Dr. Ramya se agar treatment nahi hota toh kahi aur dikhao, ye kaunsa doctor ka medicine hota hai ki pass raho toh dimag thik hojata hai. Kaunse theory me padha hai tumne aisa, kaunse rarest of rarest cases me ye hua hai btana zara kya iske baad bhi ekbar bhi tumlog ko doubt nahi hua ki sayad Dr. Ramya itne dur se treatment karte karte irritate hogaya hoga ab unko nahi chaiye hoga ye headache itna dur ane jane ka isliy sab tumpe chod raha hai, kabhi socha hai tum ki tum nahi experienced doctor hai na kuch naahi Mandar ke sath tumhara koi pati patni ka rishta bana nahi phir bhi kaise tum thik karsakta hai.Khair, Sayad tumhara dimag kirti ke waqt chala tha kyuki wo 'meri' behen thi aur emotions mere jude the us waqt aaj ye baat 'tumhare apno' ki hai toh mai samajh sakta hai. But phir bhi mai details forward kardeta hai tumlog ko jo thik lage karlena. Agar tumlog chahega toh is Mandar ka Asli Treatment toh mai Kal se shuru karega

Pallavi felt a pinch on her heart because she wasn't feeling any warmth from his talk to her. Neither she felt any anger or hurt it was as if he was talking sense in some business meeting, Straight Forward talks and Valid points with no nonsense attitude. Pallavi thought what all Raghav said and got some sense inside her head. He is saying absolutely right. And even if Mandar's case was one rarest case where he needs Pallavi beside him then also there's no harm taking a second opinion and that also of one of the Most successful doctor in the World. When she regained her senses she saw Raghav was no where. He went without even saying her a bye, what happened suddenly to Raghav, he was all okay tomorrow so what changed over night, why is he behaving so strange she was unable to comprehend anything.

Everything was taking a toll on her. Not being able to think of taking a second option and pushing herself through this torture, and now Raghav being so strange she couldn't take it all and excused herself for some rest.

It was evening, no call or message from Raghav. She thought to call him and dialed his number, only to be picked up by a sweet and chirpy voice

Girl : Hello, please leave a message with me For Mr. Raghav, I will let him know once he is free (she said it because Pallavi's no. Is saved as Saree ka dukan, she thought they wanted to talk business)

Pallavi : Hello. Raghav kaha hai ?

Girl : Mr. Raghav is busy, kuch important kaam tha kya ?

Pallavi is confused and asked : Tum kaun ho ? Aur Raghav ka phone tumhare paas kyu hai ?

Girl : Ma'am mujhe Mr. Raghav ne hi kaha phone receive karne because he is busy in errr busy is in a meeting

Pallavi : Meeting ? Don't lie. Who r you ? Where is Raghav ? He is not in a meeting, I saw Farhad's status he has gone shopping with Amma. Why will he leave Raghav if He was in a meeting. Where was he ? Who is this girl ? (She was blabbering to herself when she heard Raghav )

Raghav : Pallavi mai busy hu tumse baad me baat karunga

Pallavi : Kaha busy ho tum ? Office me nahi ho na tum aur jhut mat bolo

Raghav : client ke ghar pe hu. Farhad ko amma ne bulaya isliy akele aya hu, problem kya hai ?

Pallavi : problem ye hai ki koi bhi tumhara phone utha lega kya wo bhi tumhari biwi ka call

Raghav : jab tumhare pati ka call bar bar koi aur utha sakta hai Pallavi toh mera call ek bar kisine utha liya toh issue kyu bana rahi ho. Atleast mai baat toh kar raha hu na tumse phone switch off toh nahi kardiya jo tumhara hojata tha humesha mandar ke phone receive karne ke baad

Pallavi : tum har baat me Mandar ko kyu late ho beech me

Raghav : beechme tum laya hai usko Pallavi maine nahi. Maine bas example diya ki agar tumhare pati ka phone uthake ka authority kisiko bhi hai toh mere patni ka phone uthake ka authority bhi kisi aur ko hai. Kamsekm jisne tumhara phone uthaya wo meri client hai koi ex biwi nahi. Ab please don't disturb me.

He cut the call, with such harsh words. This was not her Raghav, why is he hurting her ? And When did Mandar received his call, Mandar never said her anything like that then she remembers how her phone use to get suspiciously switched off. She thought did Mandar do it purposely ? But Raghav would never be angry on something Mandar did, was he angry because she never called him ? And realisation dawned on her how she never called Raghav after Mandar's entry. It seemed like ages since she last called him to talk as any husband and wife will do. She was always busy with Mandar. Raghav was hurt she knew. She decided to go to dinner today at her home.

She got ready in the evening, she had already informed Amma and said her to not inform Raghav as she will be giving him a surprise.

She was about to step out of the house informing Ayi about the same..

VD : Kaha ja rahi ho ?

Pallavi : Baba wo mere ghar ja rahi thi kuch kaam hai unhe meri zarurat hai (she lied because she was in no more mood to explain stuffs that were personal to her and Raghav)

VD : unhe tumse koi zarurat kyu hogi ? Itne naukar chakar hai gharme Wolog karlenge tum jao change karlo aur kitchen me jake Ayi ki help karo

Pallavi got irritated seeing how her baba was trying to control her and not even letting to go to her own house : Wo zaruri chiz ghar ki Bahu hi kar sakti hai baba. Waise toh ghar me log idhar bhi bohot hai par aap gaye the na mujhe lene

VD : Bahu tum pehle is ghar ki ho. Aur tumhe mai tumhare pati ke liy lene gaya tha

Pallavi's anger knew no bounds by then. She was cheated. Heck!! They didn't bring her back because Mandar needed her, they brought her back because a Wife needs to be beside her husband in his bad days. That's the reason she was bought and separated from her love and her own house. She thought how People who had all the authority to stop her, respected her decision though they were hurting and here people who have no authority on her are bossing her around. She wronged Raghav and Amma, though Raghav warned her about this trap, she happily step into him and forcefully dragged Raghav to the mud and letting him bear all the pain which he did without once questioning her. Her love for Raghav knew no bounds and she just wanted to hug him now and ask forgiveness for all he had to go through because she was stupid enough to fall prey. He kept quiet even after seeing through D members intention just because Pallavi wanted to heal Mandar (his wives ex husband) how much he have tolerated when she couldn't even tolerate hearing a woman recieving his call, he tolerated her wearing her ex'es gifted bangles, repeatedly watching them together and sleeping alone in his room with the thought of his wife being with her ex under one roof. She can't even imagine what would she do if she would have in his place. She could have never ever tolerated this. She until today thought she is the more patient one in this relationship but she was wrong, Raghav can be everything for her, he can be the most patient, he can bear insults, he can go silent he can do anything and everything just for her happiness even if she doesn't care for him, he will always look after her wellbeing. Even today he did so, though he was angry he made sure to knock some sense into her rather than just dumping her in this house to suffocate.

Seeing her not saying anything since long, baba thought she has agreed to his demands like she always does without realising she was back to being Mrs. RAGHAV RAO mood.

Pallavi : Mai sirf aur sirf Raghav Rao ki biwi hu aur humesha rahungi. Koi kanun koi bhagwan aur koi insan ye baat ko jhutla nahi sakta. Aur agar sabne jhutla bhi diya agar koi ye kehta hai ki mai Raghav Rao ki patni nahi hu toh unke liy mai ye kehna chahti hu Ki fark nahi padta mai unki biwi hu ya nahi, fark nahi padta rishte ke naam se par Pallavi sirf aur sirf Raghav ki hi hai. Shadi ke rishte ko aap jhutla sakte ho par dil ke rishte ka kya. Is dil me Raghav ki jagah wo hai jo kabhi na Mandar ka tha aur nahi kabhi hoga, Mandar toh kya koi bhi yeh jgah nahi le sakta. Agar aaj mai Mandar ki biwi bhi rahi hoti aur wo hadsa na bhi hota tab bhi mai Raghav ke liye jo Mehsus karti hu wo Mandar ke liye kabhi nahi karti.

VD : tumhari itni himmat ki tum mere bete ko us gunde se compare kar rahi ho

Pallavi : Sorry Baba. Mujhe compare nahi karna chaiye tha kyuki Raghav ke sath comparison ke layak koi aur insan hai hi nahi. Jo insan apne upar uthe ungli ke liy logo ke hath tod de usne aap sab ke uspe uthe sawalo ko saha hai, uske biwi aur uske rishte pe uthe taano ko saha hai sirf isliy kyuki mai is ghar ko apna mayka samajhti hu. Aur baba wo gunda nahi hai, wo jaise to taisa deta hai. Isi wajah se use kabhi aap, kaku, ya Mandar pasand hi nahi aye par dekhiye aap Aai, Kaka, Amruta se puch lijiye kya unhe Raghav bure lagte hai? Nahi. Kyuki Raghav, Pallavi nahi hai. Wo bardasht nahi karta hai par usne fir bhi kiya sirf mere liy. Par ab nahi ab mai bardasht nahi karungi. Aap ko mujhe jo kehna hai kahiye apki beti hone ke naate mai sab sahungi par Raghav ke liye ek shabd bhi nahi. Mai yaha se ja rahi hu, Mai aur mere pati apke bete ke ilaaj k liy jitna humare hath me hoga sab karenge par usse zyada humse kuch umeed mat rakhiyega aur rokne ki koshish toh bilkul mar kijiyega mujhe. Ardham Ayinda.

With that she ran away, tears were running in her eyes but she didn't want to cry. Not before reaching Raghav. She wants him now not anything else.

She reached home to see Ayi in kitchen, she freshened up and joined Ayi in kitchen and told her everything. Ayi responded saying they all knew about it, Baba's intention were clear but Pallavi overlooked because of her love for them. Ayi said Raghav will be happy knowing you r back to him. Pallavi assured she will be with them forever and will not let anyone exploit her emotionally to the extent that Raghav gets hurt. They were talking when Raghav came inside (I am not draggigg jealousy thing, ek Mandar ko hatane ke chakkar me dusri Mandari nahi chaiye mujhe)

Raghav saw Pallavi running towards him, he thought maybe she came because she was happy for Mandar that he will get best treatment, and he was in no mood to listen to her Mandar jaap. So he just said 'Arey tum yaha acha hai dinner karlete hai sath' very normally as anyone would do with any guest and didn't wait for her reply and went upstairs. Amma noticed it all but thought they must solve everything together. Pallavi and Raghav needs to get out with this hole themselves only.

Dinner was very silent. With Pallavi trying to talk but only Amma responding. Finally Pallavi kept quiet and thought of talking with him in their bedroom.

After dinner Raghav straight away went to him room.

After 20 minutes Pallavi went to the room after chit chatting with Amma a bit.

Raghav : Tum yaha ? 'apne' ghar nahi jaogi ? Bohot raat hogyi hai aur mai tumhe drop nahi karsakta humesha, Mandar ko bulalo

Pallavi : wo kyu ayega, pati toh tum ho

Raghav : pehle humesha jab lene ata tha tab bhi toh jati thi, pati ka wait thori na karti thi

Pallavi : Raghav tum

Raghav : Pallavi seriously not in a mood. Mujhe pata hai tum yaha mujhe thanks karne ko aya ki maine Mandar ke liye doctor arrange kardiya par iska zarurat nahi hai. Tum yaha itne dino me pehli bar aya isise pata chal gaya mereko tum kitna khush hai

Pallavi : Galat samajh rahe ho Raghav tum

Raghav : Galat tha, ab sab sahi hai

Pallavi : itne rude kyu ho rahe ho

Raghav : Mai rude nahi hai, mai thak gaya beech me latak ke. Abhi tum yaha aya hai phir abhi tumko call Ayega ki Mandar ko cheek (sneeze) aya hai toh tum sab bhul ke humara baat adhura chodke hi bhag jayega ye tak nahi dekhega ki tumhara pati ko tumhare piche piche gadha jaisa aya wo gaya kaha.

Pallavi realised how she didn't search for Raghav, well she was occupied with all the tensed the environment and when she got time for her Mandar's over the top demands of always having Pallavi in front of him made it impossible for her to think about Raghav that moment. She was just irritated to get out of the situation herself. But she realised he has gone too much for her and now she didn't want to hear any more about how dump she was to ruin the most beautiful relationship of her life. She hurt someone who fought whole world just to protect her. With that she silently moved out of the house. While Raghav thought she was back to D house. Tears brimmed his eyes. He was hurt very hurt but hurting Pallavi hurt him more.

After 30 minutes

Raghav calls Deshmukh house to know if she reached, he didn't want to talk to Pallavi and show that he still cares but Ayi recieved the call and let him know everything that happened in D house.

Ayi : Hello kaun? Oh Raghav, mai tumhe hi call lagane wali thi beta Pallavi ka phone off aa raha hai. Wo thik toh hai na ?

Raghav : par wo toh ghar chali gyi hai ayi

Ayi : wo ghar kyu ayegi beta ? Usne tumhe bataya nahi kuch

Raghav not understanding anything asks Ayi the matter when she says everything that happened in D house. Raghav says he will call her later and Pallavi is alright. He rushed out of the house. It was raining heavily. Raghav thought Pallavi left for D house with the driver but he was wrong. She didn't say him that she fought for him. She has no place to go now. He was cursing him for being so impatient with her. He knew how she was, she was very emotional. Yes, she takes him for granted and that's because she has never been so sure about any relationship she had like she is with Raghav. She knows he will stand by her side even if she hurts him the most, just as she stood by him always. He finally saw her sitting under a tree all wet. He went near her and called her but she never replied.

He picked her up and brought to the House in their room made her stand and asked her to change. She didn't budge. Raghav took her inside the bathroom and opened the safety pin of her pallu thinking she will push him or get shy or shout at him anything, but she was silent. Finally, he sighed heavily and taking a deep breath he said

Raghav : Galti kiska tha Pallavi ? Warn kiya tha na maine tum gayi waha, avoid kiya mujhe, aur mai 24 ghanta bhi nahi hua ki tumse naraz hu aur tum ulta mujhe silent treatment de raha

Pallavi still didn't budge, he cupped her face and saw tears in her eyes, he hugged her not caring about being wet. As soon as he hugged her Pallavi pushed him.

Pallavi : maine jo galti kiya uska hisab badme hoga par tumne ye kaise boldiya ki ye mera ghar nahi. Tumhe pata hai mai kyu unhe koi baat ke liye mana nahi kar pati, kyuki mai unke ehsaano tale dabi hu Raghav. Ek vidwa ko unhone do saal tak apne ghar me rakha mai manti hu uske badle maine bhi kiya bohot kuch par phir bhi Raghav unhone mujhe rehne ko chat, khane ko roti di thi. Is ghar me ane ke baad mujhe sahi mayne me ghar mila, tumhe apnane se pehle bhi maine is ghar ko apna maan liya tha aur is ghar ne bhi. Humare beech pyar nahi tha par tab bhi kabhi tumne paraya feel nahi karaya. Nahi kabhi haq jataya ki ye ghar sirf tumhara hai par tumne aaj keh hi diya na ki ye ghar sirf tumhara hai Raghav. Mujhe nahi rukna yaha. Maine jo kiya uski tum jo saza doge wo mere liy kam hoga maine bohot galat kiya hai. Par itna bhi nahi ki tum mujhe aise zindagi se nikal bahar feko.

Raghav : Maine kahi nahi feka tumhe Pallavi. Mai hurt tha. Aur ye ghar tumhara nahi hai isliye maine bola kyuki mujhe laga tum mujhe aur is ghar ko Tumhare ayi baba k ghar ke agey kuch samjhti hi nahi ho. Humara koi value nahi hai. Mai hurt tha. Maine us way me ye baat nahi bola jis way me tum le rahi ho. Yaha dekho (he cupped her face and made her look up) kya tumhe lagta hai ki agar itna sab behas ke baad tum ake is room me ruk jati toh mai nikal deta tumko? Mai frustration ya gussa dikhane ke liy sayad study me chala jata par tumhe mai kabhi nahi nikalta. Aur kabhi agr mai aisa bolta bhi hu toh tum pagal ki tarah sun logi bat mera? Tum aur Amma dono mujhe is ghar se nikal sakte ho par Raghav Rao ki itni himmat nahi hai ki wo apni shernio ko unke hi ghar se nikal de. Ye ek makaan tha Pallavi isko tumne ghar banaya toh Ayinda ye kabhi mat sochna ki ye tumhara ghar nahi hai aur agar tab bhi tumko doubt hai toh mai kal lawyers bulake ye ghar tumhare naam pe kardunga ya phir better hai ki mai ek ghar tumhare liy alag se lelu, mujhe ek property pasand bhi ayi thi mai wo tumhare naam pe hi lunga taki tum mujhe saza dene ke liy waha jake reh sako sukoon se aur tumhe pura haq hoga ki tum mujhe waha se nikal do legally. Ab khush ?

Pallavi : mujhe yesb nahi chaiye

Raghav : Par milega. Ab no more arguments on that. Aur rahi baat baki chizo ka toh Pallavi Honestly mujhe nahi pasand tum Mandar ke aas pas raho humesha. Trust ki baat nahi hai par Mandar se mujhe negative vibes milti hai. Usne mujhe challenge kiya tha tumhe le jane ki jiske bad usne call bhi kiya ki wo jeet gya, phir usne wo festival k raat ko itna sab kiya tumhe godh me sulaya mujhe dikhane k liye, tumhe apna biwi bolta hai. Mai kabtak bardasht karta Pallavi ? Mujhse nahi hota. Tumhare jitna bada dil nahi hai mere pas.

Pallavi : par insaniyat ke naate mai uski madad kar rahi thi. Mujhe samajh nahi aya kab wolog mujhpe itna haavi hogye ki mai tumhare sath galat kar baithi. I am so sorry. Meri hi galti hai saari. Mujhe Mandar ko wo haq dena hi nahi chaiye tha. Meri achai ko meri kamzori samajh baithe aur maine samajhne diya. Tumhare warnings ko andekha karti gayi bohot hurt kardiya tumhe. Tumhare jagah koi aur hota toh mujhe chod diya hota meri halat pe aaj tum nahi hote toh mai padi rehti sadak pe aur Wolog puchte tak nahi. Wolog mere apne nahi hai Raghav sirf tum ye parivar hai mere. Bas mai Ayi Kaka ke liy sare rishte waha se tod nahi pati par agar tum chahoge toh

Raghav cuts her off : kisise koi rishta nahi todna hai. Bas tumhe strong hona hai. Do saal tak tum akeli thi isliy tumhe unka har baat sunna pada kyuki wo tumpe ehsaan karte the jatate the wo ehsan. Par ab nahi. Ab tum zindagi apne hisab se jiogi, Deshmuk parivar toh kya tum Mere liye ya mere kehne pe bhi aisa Kuch nahi karogi jo tumhe nahi pasand ho. Ardham Ayinda. Aur hum Mandar ki help karenge par sath rehke, sirf Ayi ke liy.

Pallavi smiles and sneezes together so Raghav asks her to change and goes in the room and changes too.

Later, RaghVi were laying down with Pallavi having her head on Raghav's chest and they were talking about random things when she gets a call from Mandar. Raghav was unsure of what she will do so he just laid down and closed his eyes when Pallavi picked up the phone.

Mandar : Pallavi tum kaha ho ? Tumhe baba ne thora daat kya diya tum ghar kaise chod skti ho tumne baba se promise kiya tha mera khayal rakhna tha tumhe

Pallavi very calmly : Mandar raat ke 12 baj rahe hai, mai apne pati ke sath hu, tumhe kuch toh sochna chaiye tha call karne se pehle. Acha lagta hai kya aise call karlete ho kabhi bhi? aur Mai tumhara khayal rakhne ki zimmedari de chuki ko ek aunty ko. Wo kal se ayegi pura din tumhara khayal rakhegi. Aur please Ayinda aise raat ko call mat karna mujhe aur doctor ke barema kuch bhi bat karni ho toh please Raghav se karlena use yesab zyada malum hai.

Mandar : thik hai Pallavi par mujhe itna uneasy kyu feel ho raha hai sayad chakkar aa raha hai kuch ho raha hai mujhe

Pallavi : tum awaz lagao ayi ajayegi ab mai itna dur se toh pohoch bhi nahi paungi. Ya tum kaho toh mai Amma ko khud call kardu ? Baba ajynge tumhare pas sone.

Mandar : Pallavi kya tum nahi aa sakti?

Pallavi : Nahi Mandar mai aisa koi kaam nahi karti jisse mere pati nakhush ho. Mere liye koi bhi insan, wadaa aur challenge mere pati ki khushi se zyada important nahi hai. Aur ab mujhe jo bhi majbur karne ki koshish karega mai usse apne sare rishte tod lungi. Meri Achai meri kamzori nahi hai. Aur Ayinda waqt dekhke call lagaya karna aur jab marzi mere ghar mat ana. Koi bhi kaam ho mere pati se hi baat karna wo tmhari har help karenge. With that she cuts the call while Mandar breaks the phone and thinks to take revenge on RaghVi.

Raghav had a smile seeing his wife on a version of her own self, not harsh, not rude but keeping forth her point ever so calmly. Pallavi sees him kissed his cheek mouthed a sorry and with that Raghav snuggles more into her and they both sleep peacefully.

P.S : I didn't want Mandar's real face to come in front of Pallavi, I wanted her to believe Raghav without any evidence and that's Y, I didn't made Mandar having there on VD- Pallavi clash. Also, Mandar will now turn to attack RaghVi when his first plan of separating them flopped. This way it can turn interesting rather than dragging same illogical thing is my view.

Please Let me know how was it, I m sorry there was jealousy track in my mind until yesterday but today didn't feel to write the same thing. It's MHRW and it should have unique tadka not random love story tadak so came up with this. Waiting for all the reviews. Do comment and like.

I loved it..the whole take on the situation--and Pallavi believing Raghav without asking for proof.

this was really well written and how you bought out few instances to base their conversation on

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I loved it..the whole take on the situation--and Pallavi believing Raghav without asking for proof.

this was really well written and how you bought out few instances to base their conversation on

Thank you so much. When I started writing the story, I had different feelings😆 but Sickoo ended my angst by changing the track so came up with this😆

Thank you for the sweet words, means a lot❤️

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

Amezing.

Thank you so much🤗

Loved it and this is how I wish RR would react.

Also liked how you have put in the story arc where inspite of getting a separate doctor, Pallavi's behaviour pattern does not change.

Reminds me of the line from the movie The devil wears Prada,

Nate: [as Andy takes a call from Miranda] “You know, in case you were wondering – the person whose calls you always take? That’s the relationship you’re in.”

Beautiful. Our Raghvi in show should be like this.