Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 47

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Sure then, I will be Kaka. 🤗 Ok Rie, thanks for telling me your name 💜.

Vera

Done deal then 🤗🤝🤝

Tagging Pallavi and audience to let them know about the new cast 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Let's go to the celebration thread and fill it up!!! Wahan bhi kuch karenge!! Lagta hai some serious discussion is going on there 😄

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Posted: 4 years ago

So, you came." He had missed her voice too.

"I was obviously going to come. It was just a question of when."

just so beautiful lines

i loved themmmmm

he is staying thereeeee

you wrote really wellllll

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Posted: 4 years ago

Posted the next drabble.

Drop in your views 😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Samaaa...you are going next

After Gamblers, I am excited how you will turn the tables 😆

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Do let me know what you think 😗😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

you described their want and that peace of just being around each other so well

that wamth

that solace

the photo part - cute 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

you fulfilled my dream of pallavis parents being addressed

thats one of the reasons which i believe pallavi finds her protection in her raghav

she never had it as a child

beautiful 🥳❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey MsPrez,

Wow my lady, you are awesome 😎. This ws exactly the way I wanted to continue the story!!!! Awesome, your expressions (Infamous don attitude, Mandaar's true colours) wow, just wow!! I think we are telepathic 😁. But you have written exponential nicer than me 😂. I loved the way you took my line and made it more intense by making it the last line. 🤗

Awesome 👍🥳

I forgot to mention, Iearned how to distinguish dialogues from rest of the story!!

Vera 💜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Biwi hai, aur aakri saans tak tumhi rahogi. Jab tak zinda hoon, mein sirf tumhara husband hai, Ardhamayindha.

thisssss you killed it with this

i loved the way you dropped hint with this one

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Yours is the last one I can read for now - some distractions are here 😊

But what a wonderful work you all have done!

For the longest time, I am interested to know more about Pallavi - her background story.. Not Pallavi Deshmukh.. I didnt even know her maiden name is Sawant (or perhaps you made that up?)

Anyways, thanks for giving this opening to find more about Pallavi and her life in Kolhapur. I am curious what will follow next.


I really loved these lines:


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"So, you came." He had missed her voice too.

"I was obviously going to come. It was just a question of when."


"Nice to meet you," Raghav replied with a smile which wasn't reciprocated.


Pallavi was apologetic,"Dada's a bit wary of you, considering the circumstances of our marriage."


"I understand. I have a sister too."


".. I'll get to know your brother and sister-in-law and of course Pallavi Savant."


They mentioned that she was Savant on the show. Pallavi in Kolhapur is quite a mystery. Glad you liked it. Thank you!

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