Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 46

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kiara, Kiara.. only today I find out your name.. (at least, I know I will remember it now..)


What a beautiful letter Pallavi wrote.. You have written a similar sort of track/ thought that some of us had and wished for when Pallavi was about to leave the first time or even before the wedding track.


Beautiful!!


Some highlights for me:


- Quoting -

I have renounced my responsibilities with the Deshmukh's because whatever pains you will never find its way into our lives again.

Till then, I wait to love....and be loved.

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Posted: 4 years ago


You all make me excited to participate as well actually.

Will you take another turn or there is a closed set to finish up?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Prez you have written it wonderfully

the last line--bang on use of it from the previous drabble--you maintained a really good continuity

finally Mandaar's real face came out

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sama awaiting your twisty take on the drabble

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Prez you have written it wonderfully

the last line--bang on use of it from the previous drabble--you maintained a really good continuity

finally Mandaar's real face came out

I forgot to tag

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yours is the last one I can read for now - some distractions are here 😊

But what a wonderful work you all have done!

For the longest time, I am interested to know more about Pallavi - her background story.. Not Pallavi Deshmukh.. I didnt even know her maiden name is Sawant (or perhaps you made that up?)

Anyways, thanks for giving this opening to find more about Pallavi and her life in Kolhapur. I am curious what will follow next.


I really loved these lines:


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"So, you came." He had missed her voice too.

"I was obviously going to come. It was just a question of when."


"Nice to meet you," Raghav replied with a smile which wasn't reciprocated.


Pallavi was apologetic,"Dada's a bit wary of you, considering the circumstances of our marriage."


"I understand. I have a sister too."


".. I'll get to know your brother and sister-in-law and of course Pallavi Savant."


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Finally read your update!!

It was so good!! I loved that you brought in her parents in the story🤗 It was very heartwarming to see him glad about getting to know his SKD and Pallavi hugging him after seeing that picture😌

@miss Fiesty - your update was so exciting! Raghav has finally seen her choosing him and hopefully he’ll rest assured of her love for him now ☺️ The twist in the end was perfect! What is The Raghav Rao up to now 🤔🧐🤩

Thanks for the comments!!! It means a lot of me ❤️. This is the first time I am writing so thanks for this!!!

Vera 💜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Hi miss Fiesty!

Does that mean you’re choosing to be Kaka? 🧐

Agar aap Aai banna chahte hai, then I can be Kaka. If you want to be Kaka, then I can be Aai 😁

It all depends on your choice MissWiseUnicorn. Do let me know you name,!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Agar aap Aai banna chahte hai, then I can be Kaka. If you want to be Kaka, then I can be Aai 😁

It all depends on your choice MissWiseUnicorn. Do let me know you name,!!!

I can’t imagine myself as Kaka so I’ll take Aai then if you don’t mind 🤗

I’m still deciding my pen name to be used on the forum but you can call me Rie (read as Ree) in the meantime 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

I can’t imagine myself as Kaka so I’ll take Aai then if you don’t mind 🤗

I’m still deciding my pen name to be used on the forum but you can call me Rie (read as Ree) in the meantime 😊

Sure then, I will be Kaka. 🤗 Ok Ree, thanks for telling me your name 💜.

Vera

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