Saakk serial ff chapter-4 page 3 15august

hey guys this is my first attempt in writing hope you all like it...I am big fan of shaan so in this story he will be given more space so bear with that please..

chapter-1

*the story takes place after the marriage of shaurya and anokhi...devi and tej doesn't accept the marriage of shaurya and anokhi so shaurya and anokhi comes to live with aastha in shaan's flat*

now let's start the story:

shaan, aastha and anokhi are drinking tea while talking meanwhile shaurya comes

shaan : shaurya mai college ja raha hoon..tum chl rhe ho na saath

shaurya : nahi dad aap jaiye mujhe abhi patiala nikalna hai

aastha : achanak patiala kyun shaurya???aisa kya kaam aa gya

shaurya : pta nhi mom..bade papa ne kha h ki waha ki branch mei kuch problem aa gyi h to mujhe personally jake check Krna padega

aastha : accha to ek kaam karo tum thodi derr ruko mai tumhare liye raaste ke liye kuch pack kr deti hoon

shaurya : are nhi mom iski koi jaroorat nahi h mai koi baccha thodi na hoon mai manage kr lunga

aastha : are aise kaise manage kr loge maine kaha na mai bana rhi hoon kuch tum bas thodi derr ruko and it's an order

meanwhile shaan and anokhi are controlling having smiles on their face listening to theri convo.

shaan: are shaurya maan jao tumhari maa aise nhi jane degi tumhe and laughs

after sometime shaurya leaves for patiala

shaan : accha Noor mai bhi nikalta hoon meri ek bahut important meeting hai

aastha : theek h shaan

anokhi: bye papa...chaliye hum bhi chalte hai apke saath bahar tak mujhe aur maa ko bhi bahar jana hai shopping pe gayatri Chachi aur kanchan ma'am wahi milengi humein

shaan : to ek kaam karo mere saath hi chalo mai chod dunga tumhe wahan

aastha : nhi shaan tum jao mai aur anokhi meri car mei chale jayenge tumhe late ho jayega

shaan : theek hai par dhyaan se jaana dono

anokhi : papa hum bacche thodi na h aap bhi na and laughs

trio comes out of the house..shaan sits in his car and try to start his car but car start nhi hoti..shaan car se bahar nikalta h

aastha: kya hua shaan??

shaan : pta nhi Noor car start nhi ho rhi abhi thodi derr pehle tak to theek thi...ise bhi abhi kharab hona tha ab mai kaise jaunga aur agar meeting mei late hua to tej bhaisahab to pta nhi kya krenge vaise hi unhe pta h mai yahan hoon

aastha : shaan ek kaam karo tum meri car le jao mai aur anokhi auto se chale jayenge

shaan : are nhi Noor iski koi jaroorat nhi h mai kuch krta hoon

aastha : are koi ni shaan hamein koi dikkat nhi hogi hum log chale jayenge auto mei filhaal tumhara meeting mei jana jaroori hai

shaan abhi bhi soch rha hota h ki vo kya kre

aastha: accha ek kaam karo tum aate hue hamein pick kr lena aate hue hum auto mei nhi aayenge okk

after lots of persuasion shaan gets ready to take aastha's car

shaan sits in the car and drive away while aastha and anokhi takes the auto and goes to meet kanchan and gayatri..

meanwhile in Sabharwal house

tej , devi and alok are talking.

devi : tej mujhe lag rha h shaurya humse durr hota ja raha hai...usne yahan se jane ke baad mujhe ek baar bhi call nhi kia aur aaj vo patiala gya h aur usne ye baat ek baar batana bhi jaroori nahi samjha... ye aastha aur uski uss student ne milkar shaurya ko humse dur kr hi dia

tej: devi tu pareshan mt ho mere pass ek plan hai uske baad shaurya khud hamare pass wapis aa jayega.

precap : shaan meet with an accident

please share in the reviews how is it...

Awesome start...please continue soon

That's a nice start...looking forward to this ff...i personally also believe that they left to live with shaan & aastha (& the whole pulkha scene at SH never happened!!!😅) so this would be a perfect continuation...😊💖🌹

Would love a tag when you continue, thnx🌹...

Part 1 is good

Loved that shakhi are staying away from sabherwal house.

Originally posted by: Reader.silent

Awesome start...please continue soon

Thank you so much😊😊

Originally posted by: GHKPM

That's a nice start...looking forward to this ff...i personally also believe that they left to live with shaan & aastha (& the whole pulkha scene at SH never happened!!!😅) so this would be a perfect continuation...😊💖🌹

Would love a tag when you continue, thnx🌹...

Thank you so much...will surely update soon..

now that is a new beginning

Aastha and Shaan’s story with Anokhi and Shaurya with them

Wow a spring of hope

New take, want to read more

Pls continue soon

Love

Jen

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

now that is a new beginning

Aastha and Shaan’s story with Anokhi and Shaurya with them

Wow a spring of hope

New take, want to read more

Pls continue soon

Love

Jen

Thank you so much...will surely update soon

Good start. Looking forward to the next part 😀

Update soon.

Love Preet ♥️

Chapter-2

Aastha and anokhi reach the market..kanchan and gayatri are already there. Gayatri hugs aastha

gayatri : kaisi hai aap bhabhi

aastha : mai acchi hoon gayatri tum kaisi ho???

gayatri : bhabhi aapko aaj aise khush dekhke bahut accha lag raha hai finally shaurya aur apke beech ka saara man mutav dur ho gya

aastha : Haan bhai vo to hona hi tha aakhir meri Bahu ne jo koshish ki thi

kanchan : Haan taiji ab anokhi hai hi anokhi..laakhon mei ek

anokhi feels shy and aastha and gayatri smiles

gayatri : bas bhabhi ab apke aur shaan bhaisahab ke beech bhi sab jaldi theek ho jaye

aastha baat badal deti hai

aastha : are kya hum bhi ye baatein leke baith gye andar chalein shopping nahi krni

kanchan : Haan haan chaliye chaliye mujhe to bahut saari shopping krni hai afterall aaj itne dino baad warden madam se chutke bahar aaye hain and laughs

aastha, gayatri and anokhi also laughs at her antics

aastha : kya kanchan tum bhi na

they all go for shopping...after around 1 hour aastha's phone rings..aastha picks the call but after listening to the call the phone slips from her hand

anokhi : maa kya hua apko..aap theek to hai na???

aastha kuch nhi kehti..anokhi aastha ka phone uthake baat krti hai

gayatri : kya hua anokhi..kya baat hai...aastha bhabhi itni shocked kyu ho gyi??

anokhi : Chachi vo papa...

gayatri : papa kya kya hua shaan bhaisahab ko

anokhi : Chachi vo

gayatri: anokhi please bolo kya hua??

anokhi : Chachi vo jiska call tha usne bataya ki SIAC ke raaste mei papa ka accident ho gya aur unhe city hospital leke gye hain and starts crying

gayatri : kya??

gayatri aastha ko dekhti hai jo abhi bhi shocked hai..gayatri use sambhalti hai aur kanchan ko kehti hai

gayatri : kanchan beta hamein abhi hospital jana hoga tum ek kaam karo ghar mei call karke sabko ye baat bat do

kanchan : theek hai mummy ji

anokhi : mai bhi PS ko call kr deti hoon

gayatri : aastha bhabhi chaliye hum hospital chalte hai aap tension mat lijiye shaan bhaisahab ko kuch nhi hoga..

and they all leave for hospital..

TO BE CONTINUED.....