Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 27

Such an amazing beginning--I was totally not expecting it go this way because the previous drabble activity started with fun and ended with fun--the way it is going down the arch explaining the emotions of characters is just unexpected and so beautiful.

and just reading it I am quite sure I can't match the level you guys have set

the beginning was awesome--I loved how you gave an insight into Pallavi's thoughts regarding the whole situation and how she wanted to do something special for Raghav.

It was an interesting twist in the tale with Raghav turning up drunk to the house--although without Pallavi what he mostly does is drink.

Pallavi's excitement regarding the special night and her dhamki to shop owner regarding zip--looks like black dress is really unlucky for them

the poem in the beginning was beautiful.. Did you write it by yourself?

the way you have words literally had me imagining the whole scenario. You have justified Raghav's feeling towards the whole situation really well. Indeed proves the line A drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts

the letter Kiara..was heart-touching..so beautiful..i am speechless...and the way Raghav searchs for Pallavi as soon as he wakes up and shows his frustuation around until he finds the letter and finally believes Pallavi in his drunken mind was not a figment was written well but your letter stole the limelight.

I am waiting for your take on the story Adu..I hope I got your name correct

Tum log kya twist pe twist daal rahe ho

Meri turn aane tak koi twist hi nahi bachega😭

Thank youuu 🤗❤️

I'm glad you liked the letter because I was having several second thoughts of it being part of the story, especially the contents (some of that embarrasses me 😆)

Originally posted by: ReemShah

the letter Kiara..was heart-touching..so beautiful..i am speechless...and the way Raghav searchs for Pallavi as soon as he wakes up and shows his frustuation around until he finds the letter and finally believes Pallavi in his drunken mind was not a figment was written well but your letter stole the limelight.

I'm so sure there will be so many twists and turns. The previous series too had so many twists 😆

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Tum log kya twist pe twist daal rahe ho

Meri turn aane tak koi twist hi nahi bachega😭

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Tum log kya twist pe twist daal rahe ho

Meri turn aane tak koi twist hi nahi bachega😭

🤣

Ab kya kare iss baar ka theme hi kuchh aisa hai, Twisty stories 🤣

But tum toh apna unique twist lekar aana