ShAkhi FF | Deserve to be loved? | Chapter 13 - pg 44|*Updated* - Page 22

Originally posted by: Dumpling

Thanks for the tag I read on wattapad first.left feedback there but missed few more so here I Am

Shaurya n Anokhi both are such relatable characters you have sketched .

Shaurya meeting karan who has a well planned journey ahead starts doubting himself.

Oh i so can relate to this 90%of us are same in college dont know where we are heading but when we see someone is well planned for their future its bang on we start to figure out our journey inthat way.

Anokhi pep talked by SS finds her foot.When you dont get deserved love n respect from your parents you start doubting oneself thinking i am not worthy of the love may be something is wrong with me.But SS makes her realise we need to go for the opportunity that comes our way w/o worrying about the outcome.

Loving all Reema Kabir Anokhi Shaurya Ahir friendship.

Kabir n Ahir falling for shagun 🤣🤣👍

@bold- you're welcome. You are on Wattpad? What's your ID?

@red- ah! You have no idea how much I'm relieved after reading this.😌

@green- Soooo true! You got the gist of this scene. It was meant to touch this idea. College life is fun, no doubt about it. But when you start socialising outside your circle and meet new people. Their plans and focus of career are meant to stress you out if you have no clue where you are heading in your life. 😅😅

@blue- You are incredible I tell you. This is the first comment that i'm reading where the reader has really got the idea behind the scenes. Of course, what you said is true. And I'm going to bring this up more often in the upcoming chapters but you have caught this thing right here. We will discuss this in more depth in the next few updates for sure. Right now you have said it all. I have nothing more to say. 🙌

Thank you so much for this lovely feedback. Totally loved reading your thoughts. ❤❤

Take care.

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Wonderful update👌👌

Loving the slow bonding between Shakhi

From not wanting to see each other’s face to helping each other and working together 👏👏

Shaurya moving out of Shagun's way was really funny😆😆

Don't take too long for the next update please.

Love Preet ♥️

@green- ahh! So well summarised. ❤ Lots of fun moments are in store. Hope you like them as well.😉

@red- 😂😂😂 Shagun ko bas isi kaam ke liye laya gya hai iss story mei 😂😂

I will update soon. Pakka! ❤

Take care. 😇

Thanks to you for writing on Shakhi when we are so saakk n shakhi deprived.🙄

I m on wattapad soumya9999 .

Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: lavs_157

Hi

I don’t know if I have commented on your stories before. I am very sorry if I haven’t, coz your ffs are one of my favorites.
I eagerly wait for updates from you.
Both Deserve to be Loved and The night we met are such special stories.

You have an exceptional skill for story telling. I get immersed in the story.
I don’t read a lot fan fictions, which have different stories or character graphs from the original show storyline. But yours is one of the few exceptions. I love your storyline and I can’t wait to get to know their stories more.
If it’s possible for you, please tag me or dm me when you update either of these stories.

Once again thank you for writing this beautiful story. 🤗

Heyy

@bold- Arre. Please don't apologise. I'm happy that you took the time and shared your feedback. That's what is important. ❤

I'm glad to know that you are enjoying both stories. Means a lot to me. And I'm sorry if I make you wait too long for the updates.😅

@green- thank you for these kind words. Keeping you hooked throughout the update is what I intend to do. ❤

@yellow- ahh! What do I say now! Can't express what I'm feeling after reading this. I achieved something here. Because I know readers have this kind of reservations when it comes to fanfictions of the ITV series. I was one of them a few years ago. But when I started writing one myself, I developed an interest in it. Seriously, thank you so much for reading this story. Hope you enjoy the upcoming updates too.😇

@blue- of course I will tag you.

And again thanks a lot for leaving this lovely feedback. It made my day ❤

Originally posted by: Dumpling

Thanks to you for writing on Shakhi when we are so saakk n shakhi deprived.🙄

I m on wattapad soumya9999 .

Waiting for next update.

@bold - I miss them too ❤

But we are not devir deprived i guess. 😉😂

@green- Arrrrrreeee. 😲😲

I mean, wow! Thanks yar, for taking time and commenting on both platforms.🥺❤

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

I hope you are not a shagun fan.😂😂 Because I'm not going to be easy on her.😂😂

Yes devir are omnipresent now 😅😊

Commented on both platform to keep up with the buzz for show to keep forum active .being selfish here✌.

Originally posted by: tanieg0911

I hope you are not a shagun fan.😂😂 Because I'm not going to be easy on her.😂😂

Ewwww no way. I always skip her scenes. U must have noticed in my videos😅😅

Amazing update Tanya! 🤗 I loved how far Shaurya and Anokhi have come together. From being at loggerheads to working together. Just so endearing!

I particularly loved the piece of advice that Shaurya gave Anokhi - that is it’s not this, it will be something else that will make her nervous. It’s better to start now to get over her fears! ❤️

Cannot wait to read more! Keep writing! Lots of love ❤️

Originally posted by: tanieg0911

Heyy

@bold- Arre. Please don't apologise. I'm happy that you took the time and shared your feedback. That's what is important. ❤

So sweet of you! Once again I love your work! 🤗

I'm glad to know that you are enjoying both stories. Means a lot to me. And I'm sorry if I make you wait too long for the updates.😅

Completely understandable. Life takes precedence

@green- thank you for these kind words. Keeping you hooked throughout the update is what I intend to do. ❤

@yellow- ahh! What do I say now! Can't express what I'm feeling after reading this. I achieved something here. Because I know readers have this kind of reservations when it comes to fanfictions of the ITV series. I was one of them a few years ago. But when I started writing one myself, I developed an interest in it. Seriously, thank you so much for reading this story. Hope you enjoy the upcoming updates too.😇

I don’t watch ITV at all. SAAKK was my first show in a decade. I lose interest in ITV shows within a month, so I usually read ffs to keep me hooked coz they make more sense than the actual shows. SAAKK is the only show I have watched start to end completely hooked. Coz I loved their story telling. So it’s kinda difficult for me to separate myself from the story. But your story, my god! Kept me hooked chapter after chapter. That shows how exceptionally skilled you are. I am sure I will enjoy whatever you write. ❤️

@blue- of course I will tag you.

And again thanks a lot for leaving this lovely feedback. It made my day ❤

It was my pleasure! ❤️🤗

Me in bold! 😊