Shiva Raavi - Alternate Universe DT#17 - Page 63

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

October can't come fast enough!!

Noo not too fast, I will turn 29 then. I found a couple

Of grey hairs already 😭😭

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Lolol... my problem is that I come up with ideas but I have trouble connecting the scenes... which is why I am able to write all these shorts... but I can't write the full length story 😢

And no Dev is Prince Charming, Shiva is Snow White and the mirror... Rishita is the stepmother and Raavi is a witch... the basic synopsis of this story (since I don't know when I would post 🤣 is as follows:

Shiva eats a poisoned kachori that he grabbed from Maami and goes into a coma. Raavi sees all of this and works hard to wake him up, but what she doesn't know is that his soul is somehow stuck in a mirror. Rishita, a rich heiress, is gifted a mirror which has Shiva's soul. She befriends Shiva who becomes annoyed at answering the "Mirror, mirror, who's the fairest of them all?" question, but he becomes especially annoyed when he realizes Rishita likes his Prince Charming of a brother Dev... once Rishita tells him that Dev was close to Raavi, Shiva does a complete 180 and tries to help her out because in his mind Raavi doesn't deserve Dev (she deserves Shiva instead 😉) Eventually, Rishita finds out that Raavi is trying to wake Shiva and she hands Raavi the mirror. Shiva and Raavi become close as they resolve their misunderstandings, and eventually, when none of Raavi's potions work, she kisses Shiva (on Rishita's instance) and Shiva wakes up.

A twisted fairytale 🤣

Warrior Raavi sounds like a dream 😍... I was toying around with an idea of making her the Moon Goddess the other day 🤣

Ooo I like this idea of a twisted fairy tale. Wait there was no Cinderella AU? Did I mix them up?🤣

Oh yeah no problem I am in love with these shots too( told you right? Pankha number 1🤣) you are quite busy too generally. Anyway if you ever need a sounding board or a proofreader I will do that religiously

I got the idea of warrior Raavi since we kept on seeing her as dobi. That she fought well and the best in battlefield yet worse in strategy because she naively never thought of being double crossed or back stabbed.

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Noo not too fast, I will turn 29 then. I found a couple

Of grey hairs already 😭😭

Sandy 😆

I have grey hair too, my aunt used to say that only the most creative and intelligent people have grey hair 😆

Originally posted by: Madheart

Sandy 😆

I have grey hair too, my aunt used to say that only the most creative and intelligent people have grey hair 😆

Tejuuu, love your auntie her explanation 💜

We are intelligent and creative 👊🏽

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Soo Pixie what is the conclusion?? They are not dating otherwise he would have shout it from the rooftop 😂😂

I don't know 🤣🤣🤣

As for now, it seems like they have exchanged personalities🤕

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I don't have any gif ideas for you 😢 But I'm in a writing mood... because you like romance, I thought of dedicating this to you 🤣

Raavi's fingers stilled as she felt butterflies forming in her stomach. She turned away from the clothes line and noticed Shiva's watchful gaze. Turning away from him, her fingers trembled as she reached for the next saree to dry on the clothing line.

Soft steps echoed as she felt a familiar warmth standing next to her. She glanced up and noticed his dark eyes... she glanced away immediately and pressed her cool palm against her cheek. Just as she was about to take a step away from him, she felt his arm brush against hers as he leaned down to reach for a saree.

"Raavi," his deep voice sounded like music to her... it didn't matter what came between them since she always found a reason to return to him like a moth attracted to the light.

She gulped and looked up at him. This was the first time they were alone after her drunk confession. She wished she never mistook the drink to be some sort of juice... she wished she didn't remember everything she'd done the night before.

Images of her clinging onto him were so embarrassing to relive... not to mention the one memory she had where she distinctly mentioned, "Shiva" "love" "I" "you" and a few other words...

"Me too," Shiva's lips curled slowly upwards as Raavi's heart skipped a beat.

Just a few years ago, she didn't find him the least bit attractive. His messy, unruly hair...his sweaty skin...the smells of oils and masalas... but now... those same traits attracted her. Every time she saw his unruly hair, she was tempted to run her fingers through it to mess it up more... every time she saw sweat roll down his skin, she was tempted to wipe it away with her dupatta... and those masalas? She wanted to run up to him and take a deep breath...

"W-what?" Raavi took a step back as her eyes widened. These were the first words he'd spoken to her all morning... and knowing the few words she'd blabbered last night... did he... no was he... confessing to her?

"I," he took a step closer to her, "love," her back hit against the wall, "yo—," her hand slapped over his mouth as she felt her heart pounding in her chest.

No, no, no.... this isn't how she was supposed to receive a love confession... he was supposed to tell her over a candle light dinner... he was supposed to give her a bouquet of roses and the room was supposed to be filled with balloons! She couldn't be sweaty from doing morning chores... not to mention, she wasn't even properly dolled up.

"You can't kiss me like this," she looked up at him with hurt. The more she thought about it, the more she realized what a disservice it would be to experience all of that like this... they fought for their whole lives and for this to be the special moment... it was ridiculously sad...

"Kiss?" Shiva's eyes slightly widened as he glanced down at her lips.

Raavi's cheeks immediately flushed as she looked down, "Yes... I... I'm ready... but at the same time I'm not ready," she puffed her cheeks and looked up at him angrily.

He blinked at her before laughing, looking away. Running his fingers through that messy hair of his, he leaned down, "Raavi... I was going to tell you that I loved your gobi paratha."

Her brows knit together... "G-gobi paratha?" she gazed up at him incredulously. He kept trying to meet her eye this morning... and she kept looking away because she thought she said something that she would come to regret... blinking, she asked, "W-what did I tell you yesterday?"

Shiva hummed, "What did you tell me?" he slowly nodded his head, "Oh yes," he smirked in her direction, "You told me your love for gobi paratha. It was 'Shiva, I love gobi paratha, do you love it?' all night... not to mention all the times you ate the paratha at hotels."

She blinked. Gobi paratha? Since when did she—,

Her thoughts came to a full stop when she felt his warm fingers underneath her chin. As he lifted her head, she found that she couldn't escape his gaze. His dark eyes suffocated her like usual... but unlike other times, she appreciated how they kept her trapped.

"It's fine if you're not ready to kiss," his thumb brushed her lower lip as his eyes darkened, "but I'm not a gentleman in the slightest."

He slowly placed the sheer saree over her. It was refreshingly cool as it was recently washed. Tugging on the saree, she fell flush against him as her heart pounded against her chest.

"I'm not even going to ask you to forgive me," he muttered as he brought the saree up to her lips. He leaned down and pressed his lips against hers with the thin saree separating them.

Even though there was a cloth separating them, she could clearly feel the planes of his lips... not to mention the intoxicatingly soft pressure he applied. She swallowed as she moved closer to him to grab onto whatever heat he had.

But that was a bad move... her knees buckled as she felt towards him.

His strong arm wrapped around her waist as he moved away from her. She pouted when she couldn't feel him anymore. Glancing up at him, her heart trembled when he pressed his finger on her lower lip, "That was just a preview," his deep voice trembled faintly as her lips curled upwards... she did that! He was as intoxicated to her as she was to him.

"And I'll keep giving you previews," he whispered against her ear, "until you finally give in to me." He released his grip on her and winked.

This is beautiful ❤️❤️

I can totally imagine raavi being concerned about the way she looks during her first kiss🤣🤣

The way shiva kissed her through the saree🤭

That's unique 😍

You must post this in the main forum so that it does not get lost 👍

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Lolol... my problem is that I come up with ideas but I have trouble connecting the scenes... which is why I am able to write all these shorts... but I can't write the full length story 😢

And no Dev is Prince Charming, Shiva is Snow White and the mirror... Rishita is the stepmother and Raavi is a witch... the basic synopsis of this story (since I don't know when I would post 🤣 is as follows:

Shiva eats a poisoned kachori that he grabbed from Maami and goes into a coma. Raavi sees all of this and works hard to wake him up, but what she doesn't know is that his soul is somehow stuck in a mirror. Rishita, a rich heiress, is gifted a mirror which has Shiva's soul. She befriends Shiva who becomes annoyed at answering the "Mirror, mirror, who's the fairest of them all?" question, but he becomes especially annoyed when he realizes Rishita likes his Prince Charming of a brother Dev... once Rishita tells him that Dev was close to Raavi, Shiva does a complete 180 and tries to help her out because in his mind Raavi doesn't deserve Dev (she deserves Shiva instead 😉) Eventually, Rishita finds out that Raavi is trying to wake Shiva and she hands Raavi the mirror. Shiva and Raavi become close as they resolve their misunderstandings, and eventually, when none of Raavi's potions work, she kisses Shiva (on Rishita's instance) and Shiva wakes up.

A twisted fairytale 🤣

Warrior Raavi sounds like a dream 😍... I was toying around with an idea of making her the Moon Goddess the other day 🤣

Sounds interesting ❤️

I personally don't connect much with AU stories, but would love to read yours, I have loved some of the scenarios you come up with.

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

I don't know 🤣🤣🤣

As for now, it seems like they have exchanged personalities🤕

Hahah just like that movie “its a boy girl thing” instead of a body switch they switch their personalitys 😂😂

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Hahah just like that movie “its a boy girl thing” instead of a body switch they switch their personalitys 😂😂

I think I spent the past hour laughing over this comment trying to imagine a personality switch between both KDice and ShiVi.... and I realized a ShiVi switch would be infinitely funnier with what we know about them 🤣

We'd see Raavi (or would it be Shiva) dressed in sweat pants for the first time 🤣 and Shiva (Raavi) dressed in the neat black shirt with neatly combed hair... everyone in the house would be shocked

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I think I spent the past hour laughing over this comment trying to imagine a personality switch between both KDice and ShiVi.... and I realized a ShiVi switch would be infinitely funnier with what we know about them 🤣

We'd see Raavi (or would it be Shiva) dressed in sweat pants for the first time 🤣 and Shiva (Raavi) dressed in the neat black shirt with neatly combed hair... everyone in the house would be shocked

@bold hahahahh this would be so funny!!! Now I Imagine this, Raavi (shiva) working at the store and lifting the heavy bags 😂 and Shiva (raavi) looking at Raavi and the he/she says “ put the bags down, I don’t want too get a muscular body”. 😂😂