ShiVi OS: Bole Choodiyaan - Page 4

This was amazing ❤️

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Aliya, this is so good. You brought in the shirt too and they had a childhood memory surrounding the bangles.. wow- Raavi refuses to part with her bangles and her resolve at the end

Thank you Chiki! ❤️

Aaliya...this is one the best stories I have read here❤️

I really wanted to see a bangle scene. I knew we would not be getting anything on the show. Thanks you so much for writing this. I loved reading this❤️

The pride with which Raavi shut Hansa ben's mouth. Her excitement and happiness when she found out Shiva got her chudiyaan. These moments were so beautiful. Shiva silenty admiring Raavi and being happy about her. Awww how cute was this❤️

My most favorite scenes were Raavi not wanting to share her gift with Dhara and Rishitha...I really wish we get to see such normal interactions amongst the SILs. The next one is Shiva wearing Raavi's gift....this was the perfect icing on the cake and he protected the shirt so sincerely❤️

The Shivi room scene was super cute and happy happy....Loved it so much❤️

Great...this version of shivi is so innocent and cute

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aaliya!!🤗🤗

Thank you so much for writing this! You are so quick with the writing prompt!

And now to the story, Kya bolu?! It definitely surpassed my expectations of potential bangle scene in the show. Her excitement at receiving, wearing, and not sharing chudiyan was ❤️❤️. And Shiva added Chaar Chand by wearing that black shirt. Aww their little bedroom scene took me back to the candle scene from Haveli. Lol at Raavi claiming to have scene him were the shirt before and Gaumbi revealing how careful Shiva was with the gift.

And then you beautifully weaved it with a flashback. The way chotu Shiva saves her then and carries her in his back because she's sleepy makes my heart flutter. Seems like he always had a crush on her and he was also somewhat aware of it. Loved his dialogue about choosing the perfect gift and taking care of things received as she vows to make their marriage successful!

Beautiful this was ❤️❤️

Thank you so much ML for your lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked it❤️

This was the fastest I ever wrote something 😆 I had some time during the weekend so I could!

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This is soo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Raavi giving it back to the aunty😎

Shiva gifting her bangles😍

The childhood connection ❤️

Plzz write more, I loved loved it.😍

Why can't the CVs explorer the depth of their story? I hope something like this happens in the show.🥺

Thank you so much Pixie! ❤️

At this point my only hope from the show is for them to stop this character butchering 🤪

Originally posted by: Transference

Aliyaaaa 🤗🤗

I can't explain how mushy and terrific is this! ❤️

Thank you so much Piu! 🤗

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Aalu... This was sooo good ❤️ Everything tied in together so beautifully- The gifts, the care and happiness for the gifts, and the flashback scene making the gift that much more special. Fantastic job ❤️

And they managed to confuse Dhara- she will eat Gaumbi's head all noghth trying to fogure out when she got that shirt 🤣

Sriii 🤗

thank you so much! ❤️

Yet another failed SR for poor Gaumbi 🤣

Originally posted by: Annabethchase

Your writing is absolutely amazing!!! Beautiful story!!!!

Thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

So beautifully you have penned down their acceptance for each other through gifts, care and the need of their own secrets 🥺

Love it❤️
Love Krish for asking the perfect question 🤣

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!❤️