Gurpreet-Tejo OS: Shades of Life (Completed) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Bluekohl

👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

You have taken upon yourself to write characters who grow. That's all I'mma say for now, gotta read it again.

Edit: wow! You've outdone yourself. By far imo, this is the best fiction you've written. Characters are so real, that if the show was actually good, this could have easily been the storyline.

Love the mother daughter's bond.

And I love how you threw the tejrik theory in there.

Thank you sooooo much!!!

Even I felt that it was perhaps the most unique of my writings yet.

I cannot overlook TejRik!

Ab kya kare!!!!

- Niki

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

This was one of the most beautiful stories I've read in a while :')

Loved the bond between Gurpreet and Tejo... I wish we could see something like this on TV as well. I'm glad Tejo could move on, cannot imagine the heartbreak the miscarriage must have caused her :'/

And WHAT A TWISTTTT... With Amrik!!! Omg xD I never imagined that aspecttt

Love your storiesss!!

Waiting to read more 💜

Thank you so much!
Even I wish we get such a bond in the show. But now I highly doubt it.

Now that the show has actually shown physical intimacy, I am even more scared of pregnancy and miscarriage theory.

Hehe...Amrik! I seem to bring him everywhere.

- Niki

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

Amazing yaar 👍👍

Such a beautiful piece of writing. If we get even 10% of tejo-gurpreet bonding in actual show, I'll be the happiest.

Tejo deserves this love.

Must say u r such a wonderful writer...love it :)

Thank you so much!

And no, we won't get even 0.1% of this bonding. That I am sure of!

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

- Niki

Originally posted by: hapc

Jasmeannn😡🤢

If she pulls a stunt like that on the show, and Fateh agrees to marrying her I'm going to leave the show. Fateh's a dumbass, couldn't he have told people what happened? Because of him everyone suffered, including him. Hints of TejRik here too.😆 If this happens to Tejo na, I'll write a story where I end up murdering some characters.

Coming to the positives, Gurpreet. This is the Gurpreet the show needs, not Nimmo's sister. So glad Tejo got one non-toxic relative here if not in the show(Where are you Abhiraj?) I liked how most people got what they deserved but would have loved a paragraph on Jasmean rotting alone in some corner of the planet while Sandhus cry and my heart still breaks from Tejo because there are some things that you can't permanently recover from. Another unnecessary tragedy, but I guess that is what most tragedies are anyways.

At least she's happy in her new marriage and has Mahi with her too.

Beautifully written, and bittersweet like life is.❤️

PS(because I'm a demanding bi***): Waiting to read broken.. but like take your time.

Hola buddy! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

@Bold: The first part has already happened hasn't it? With her finger cutting scene; and Fateh losing his mind.

When I wrote this, this kinda track was imagination. Till then Fatejo were not intimate in the show and nor did Jasso pull such stunt. Watching the show now makes me blame myself sometimes because I end up feeling like I kinda manifested the track! I am absolutely scared of the show following the first part of this story, excluding the Gurpreet part. And that makes me antsy!

I am just happy, my Tejo is happy here. And Mahi deserved to be with Tejo......

- Niki

Originally posted by: Swetha-Sai

What a beautiful OS on Gurpreet - Tejo by you, Niki! ❤️❤️

I must say.. you're an excellent writer, Niki! ⭐️

I pray that one day, you'd become a full-fledged professional writer and may all your novels get published!

Thank you so much!

This is something that I definitely need. I am in the path of trying for it. Hopefully I succeed one day.

- Niki

Originally posted by: mrsrakhra

I seriously have no words, for the beautiful piece that i just read, 👏👏👏👏👏

I really feel this story can actually be a very nice script, that you can easily stretch along 35-40 episodes, unlike ITV drama. And the way you have portrayed Tejo and Gurpreet's bond, it was so so sooooo beautiful. Wish we could see something similar on TV as well someday

Thanks a lot!

I am glad you liked it.

Unfortunately, ITV cannot digest such scripts. They would simply go mad over something like this. So better for them to stick to bakwas ideas....

I am overwhelmed at the appreciation this bond got. I was unsure when I first began writing.

Thanks again.

Originally posted by: Ashi_Naksh

I had tears in my eyes till I reached the end of the OS. This is written with such a finesse...👏 Wished the writers of ITV shows showed such a beautiful graph of characters rather than making them behave abruptly so out of character.

You have woven a beautiful story around 2 characters who are so different but still have many similarities....❤️

Thank you so much for your response!

I doubt ITV will ever show such scripts even 10 years to the future.

I saw the potential and could not help writing it down. I am glad everyone has accepted this fic so well.

Thanks again!

- niki

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hola buddy! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

@Bold: The first part has already happened hasn't it? With her finger cutting scene; and Fateh losing his mind.

When I wrote this, this kinda track was imagination. Till then Fatejo were not intimate in the show and nor did Jasso pull such stunt. Watching the show now makes me blame myself sometimes because I end up feeling like I kinda manifested the track! I am absolutely scared of the show following the first part of this story, excluding the Gurpreet part. And that makes me antsy!

I am just happy, my Tejo is happy here. And Mahi deserved to be with Tejo......

- Niki

I read this comment and laughed. Back then I took the show seriously and I obviously love all your stories so I was mad at Jasmine. But now when I’m watching this scene I’m just like 🤣🤣 what a clown Jasso🤡 and what a loser Fateh🤡

Tejo is also being wayyy too dumb.

Kya hi chal raha hai? Sasta entertainment ig. 😆

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Beautiful dea ..💯❤️

The title of this OS is so apt❤️

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: TheFluffyCactus

You really outdid yourself here Niki! I am at loss of words. I honestly feel bad for Gurpreet for having to deal with a husband like Khushbeer. He's like those men who are okay with their daughters working as per their minds but their wives should remain within the 4 walls they built for them. And like I had previously pointed out, Gurpreet and Tejo even as individuals, married or not have a lot in common and I hope to see them share it in the serial as well. I loved how the bond that Gurpreet lacked was recovered in form of Tejo and ultimately the same bond gave her something she resented Tejo for (Khushbeer's respect for his wife). All in all it came full circle in a beautiful manner. Keep writing such works in the future too. We need such stories with unusually realistic depth to characters that help us understand them more than the actual series does. Thanks for tagging me or I would have missed out. been busy these days due to work.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Khushveer despite the forum preferring him is not an easy character either. If we look from Gurpreet's perspective, It is not a happy marriage at all. In fact, it is suffocating because Khushveer is perfect, isn't he? He can do no wrong, in everyone's eyes.

@Bold: That was my goal. I love circles that end up where it started.

Thanks again for your appreciation.

- niki