Adilie AU: One Last Time | Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is a soulful piece and the yearning is so beautiful shown. The angst makes one root of them to unite once more.


One can feel the regret and with the the loss of what could have been. It also makes one wonder why the promise was so far more valuable then then the one she loved. A sacrifice that in the end brought her no relief and no reward except for tears.

The dews were proof of the truth about the loss suffered but also a reality that he meant far more then he had believed he did if only they both looked back and realised that it could actually be. A leap of faith they could take if only realised that love can come in all shapes and sizes.

It showed that she left love for a promise for a sister or father but in the end it was not worth it for she and he last and the others gained from there pain.

A life can be done but a love can never be forgotten for the day becomes shorter but the night is never ending.

It was so nicely done that one just wanted to hug them and tell them it would be okay.

Amazing 😊


Thanks for the tag as always ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

Heyy,

This is such a beautifully written piece. Loved the star-crossed lovers angle here. This one shot gives the feel of wanting for more.

Thank you for writing such pieces.❤️


Thank you ☺️. Glad u loved it. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

This is a soulful piece and the yearning is so beautiful shown. The angst makes one root of them to unite once more.


One can feel the regret and with the the loss of what could have been. It also makes one wonder why the promise was so far more valuable then then the one she loved. A sacrifice that in the end brought her no relief and no reward except for tears.

The dews were proof of the truth about the loss suffered but also a reality that he meant far more then he had believed he did if only they both looked back and realised that it could actually be. A leap of faith they could take if only realised that love can come in all shapes and sizes.

It showed that she left love for a promise for a sister or father but in the end it was not worth it for she and he last and the others gained from there pain.

A life can be done but a love can never be forgotten for the day becomes shorter but the night is never ending.

It was so nicely done that one just wanted to hug them and tell them it would be okay.

Amazing 😊


Thanks for the tag as always ❤️


Thank you so much ❤️

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