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HEY GUYS! I'VE BEEN A FAN OF PARVISHT MISHRA AND THIS SERIES SINCE DAY 1

THOUGH AS FROM ONE ANGLE ITS UNFAIR TO LET THIS SHOW RUN SO LONG AS WHEN A GIRL CHILD IS A VICTIM OF CHILD MARRIAGE AND OTHER SOCIAL ISSUES THE SHOW IS ALLOWED TO TELECAST WHILE IF ITS A GUY ITS BANNED EG: PEHEREDAR PIYA KI

BUT THE CAST, THE WOMEN EMPOWERED STORYLINE IS QUITE EFFERVESCENT

ANYWAYS ALWAYS A SILENT READER IS WHAT I'VE BEEN BUT I LOVE THIS POST LEAP CASTING SO MUCH THAT I COULDN'T HELP BUT PEN DOWN MY TAKE ON IT


CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS FOREVER WELCOME

DO LET ME KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS

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8 years.......

that's the amount of time anirudh had spent in a bubble of emotions and longing without his bondita and in that period of time he felt many emotions, anger being the most prominent one. gone was the anirudh who was known to be cheerful and carried an aura of positivity now all that was seen was his earning heart waiting to be happy, cheerful and the old version of himself again but there's just one problem the key to his old self was his bondita and now she had no place in his life, family or tulsipur itself !

and when he had insulted, violated, physically & emotionally hurt her by refusing to even see her face let alone conversing he thought she had given up and gone for good

but what he didn't realise is that time changes but not the personality built on morals and values

what he forgot was that girl was his mirror image, his replica, his shadow and that he was her god indeed!

Mischief was bondita's middle name

now that he ran endlessly having no idea as to which direction to search for her, he's feeling the weight of the six letter word called REGRET.

agreed what happened to him and his family in these eight years wasn't fair but shutting off his heart totally by ignoring the warnings it gave that Vaijanti may be actually innocent was the gravest mistake he had made.

he finally figured it out...............................

the madrasi girl in disguise the so called baijanti........ okay sorry vaijanti was indeed his bondita. his mishti who had finally fulfilled his dream and her promise .........

she had vowed to him that though due to circumstances they had to elope but the first thing barrister babu bondita would do is to right royally set her foot back inside her home, the RC mansion

what she had to forego in that young adolescent age she would rightfully conquer them all once again.


and all this time she was right under his sight , irritating him, testing him and bringing back all those memories of her which he had bottled up.

no wonder why every action of vaijanti reminded bondita's antics to him, why vaijanti's touch, her behaviour, her aura all felt as though its bondita's doings


no one other than his stubborn bondita could have brought him to celebrate shashwati's birthday, party with the kids, play the piano, take his scoldings and yet annoy the hell out of him or eat ek badam walle rosagulle .........................

only she could !

her actions depicted her love and respect and only the observant ones could see it !


as as he sat under a big oak tree supporting his head on its trunk his mind reflected to all these thoughts and what had commenced over the week , and the blunder he committed that very evening....

they say never pass judgements based on half truth and being a barrister he himself committed this very mistake!

without giving vaijanti a chance to even explain herself he locked her up in a room based on the conversation he heard between her and chandrachud's helper of her being a spy for krishnanagar.


as the evening passed having no other option she had broken the ventilation window , jumped out and ran via the back entrance into the woods so that she could reach home at the earliest possible cause she knew her absence will lead to another set of wars between the two enraged families and villages.

but what she didn't know was that the danger of a psychotic lover right from London was looming over her.


already as he { anirudh } narrated the story the RC household was shocked to its core no one suspected her infact sampoorna and trilochan were on plans of making her anirudh's bride!

as soon as they heard this commotion everyone alerted.

somnath, batuk, bihari kaka, anirudh and some of their trusted men started to inspect the place when anirudh's eye caught the envelope he received that very morning from his friend Harish who was also a barrister and currently residing in London with is family. A few days before Harish had called to inform Anirudh that one of his very close friend whom he considered as his sister for all the out of the way help she did due to her helping and friendly nature had returned back to Kolkata after completing her studies unaware that Hericus- a fellow classmate who was smitten and obsessed by her has also reached there in search of her with a plan to forcefully abduct her.

during their college days many a times he had professed his undying love for her throughout the campus but every time she politely refused saying she belonged to some other man and that her love, life and world revolved only around him!

and he wasn't the only one who had fallen for her as they say beauty alone is dangerous, intelligence is vicious and both combined is lethal hence, there were quite a few but none this persistent and obsessed.

Anirudh was the only person Harish trusted to safeguard her as he was a capable and powerful man afterall the most sought after barrister throughout the country had some monopoly he could Ancash on!

therefore Anirudh had vowed to safeguard that girl and the envelope consisted of her photograph, name and other basic information. As soon as Anirudh opened the envelope his world stilled, his heartbeats froze and his breadth got caught as his eyes took in the photo of the beauty he held in hand ......it was ...it was their very own vaijanti.......


everyone stilled looking at the photo when trilochan kaka bent down and picked up the piece of paper and started reading its contents .......shocked was an understatement as the only word he could let out was bondita.........


as soon as anirudh heard her name he came out of his frozen state and hastily snatched the paper all his fears had come true that very moment....... vaijanti was indeed his bondita.....

and HIS BONDITA WAS IN DANGER..........GRAVE DANGER


as soon as it registered his mind that her security was at risk he took of at such a speed that could put athletic sprinters to shame!

afterall that girl was his most prized possession, she held his heart in captive since atleast 9 damn years.....


everything he did was for her, she had been his priority since the day he married her. protecting and empowering her was his main ambition in life long before he even realised he was madly, deeply and irrecoverably in love with her...........how could he let any harm near her now that she's this close to him?


as he reminisced all her memories he suddenly remembered something and ran off in the direction of the old post office near the church where he had found her when she was abducted as a child.


as soon as he neared the big bell house he saw a silhouette of a women with a branch or rod in hand moving watchfully and with much hopes and prayers he neared and tapped her shoulders with a small scream she turned around ready to attack only to find a tear stricken Anirudh in front of her who without wasting a moment embraced her tightly as though his life depended on it


she let go of her weapon that fell with a small thud sound on the hunch of mud as she hugged him even more tightly. they stood there in each others embrace finding the lost pieces of their soul for god knows how long that suddenly even rain rejoiced this silent reunion .....................................


that night both hearts in that tight embrace conveyed what words couldn't and thus durga ma had actually granted bondita her wish of making her sakha babu confessing his love for her ...........................


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hey guys thankyou for giving my story a try

kindly ignore the errors and enjoy reading!


this is just a short story i felt like sharing initially as a one shot but now that i write more ideas crop up.......

please do let me know your opinions as to if i should continue or not

xoxoxo




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