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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

sweet yaar kallu

i just loved this it was cute and wow


Thank you Gayu ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

actually yaar sorry mei har update ke baad lambi taarif nahi likh pata hu

i loved this ff of yours

aise lagtha tha khatam hi na ho

i loved malhar rather than uske aryaan ka roop

seedhe sadhe time table pe jeene vale insaan

sahi he sometimes ladkiyon ko bhara ke khubsoorathi andar ke achayi se syada matter karthe he

par kallu ne uss pal ko overcome kiya sachayi jaan gayi apni dil ka and chosse the right version

i am sad that vo end ho gaya

sabse favorite scene was malhar ke boorayi aryaan se kiya

i felt bad for malhar poor thing

it was cute yaar

simple sweet and beautiful love

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by GAYATHRINAYAR - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

actually in one word ur ff was like a hawa ke jhoka refreshing and sweet

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

actually yaar sorry mei har update ke baad lambi taarif nahi likh pata hu

i loved this ff of yours

aise lagtha tha khatam hi na ho

i loved malhar rather than uske aryaan ka roop

seedhe sadhe time table pe jeene vale insaan

sahi he sometimes ladkiyon ko bhara ke khubsoorathi andar ke achayi se syada matter karthe he

par kallu ne uss pal ko overcome kiya sachayi jaan gayi apni dil ka and chosse the right version

i am sad that vo end ho gaya

sabse favorite scene was malhar ke boorayi aryaan se kiya

i felt bad for malhar poor thing

it was cute yaar

simple sweet and beautiful love

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Thank you so so much Gayu. Sach mein tumhara comment padhkar dil khush ho gaya ❣️❣️❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

So sorry for not been able to comment on each update, but I read all them and loved each part.

I truly loved kalyani's innocence in been able to understand malhar love for her. He showed it to her in her style.

I always loved innocent kallu and caring malharji,😍.

I really like your writing it takes to the age of story, the way you mention everything in detail, cam imagine it easily. I love your writing to say in short.

This ff is really a sweet one.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

So sorry for not been able to comment on each update, but I read all them and loved each part.

I truly loved kalyani's innocence in been able to understand malhar love for her. He showed it to her in her style.

I always loved innocent kallu and caring malharji,😍.

I really like your writing it takes to the age of story, the way you mention everything in detail, cam imagine it easily. I love your writing to say in short.

This ff is really a sweet one.


Thank you so much Swathi 💞💞

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Awesome pragya.....iske alava or kuch shabd hi nhi mil rhe hai.....

Vaise ye ff complete ho gyi???

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Awesome pragya.....iske alava or kuch shabd hi nhi mil rhe hai.....

Vaise ye ff complete ho gyi???


Thank you Prakriti 💖💖💖


Ye wali FF to complete ho gayi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

It’s awesome Pragya


Kallu ko Ferrero Rocher aur Santre aali toffee dono mil gaye

😆😆😆


I really liked this chocolate wala example..




Loved it…😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Finally, maine pad liya...

It was so very beautiful Pragya...

Itna sweet, simple, yet an emotional one..

Kalyani ko Malharji ka pyaar, unka care sab samaj me aa gaya..

And what an explanation in that letter the difference between a Ferro Rocher and a simple Santre wali toffee..yet she brought it out so sweetly that she only wants her santre wali toffee, her Malharji who is always there for her..

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Aur phir mask🎭 Hata and kallu got both sweets wrapped in one package..


In this FF I'm not going to say I liked this or that.. I loved the entire story.,


❤️❤️❤️


Thank you for writing such a beautiful FF. Something so different, charming, innocent and lovable.

Edited by rekha_crm - 4 years ago

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