RaghVi SS - Part 5 page 8 - broken angel :( - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

When will you update again 🙂 ?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please update this SS

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Medha0609

When will you update again 🙂 ?


This Sunday I will update 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReemShah

Please update this SS


I will update on this Sunday 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: JayashreeR

Super update👏 but short one 😳


Sunny was sunny and bed being the one to make him understand 😆🤣

Loved the convo of Raghav with his boys him supporting pallavi.. And believing her without any proofs


Raghav offering to help Pallavi with a place to live

Update soon I want to know how will amma will react when Ragahv brings her home



Hope this last scene of mandar😈

Don't want to read abt him anymore🤣


Thanks twinnie 😊

Ab to Mandar ke bare me likhne ka bhi man nahi karta mujhe 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


Thanks twinnie 😊

Ab to Mandar ke bare me likhne ka bhi man nahi karta mujhe 🤣

math karo remove that character forever from this Story😈 and continue it different way 😉
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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: JayashreeR

math karo remove that character forever from this Story😈 and continue it different way 😉


He will be there as per story but i will tone down

Can't tolerate him anywhere 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 4


Raghavi and gang are outside Rao house. Harish already left by giving excuse. Farhad and Ved also trying to run away from this situation but Raghav didn’t allow them. He won’t face his amma alone and they have to be with him in this. They are not rich but living in small house in society. Raghav is worried about his amma’s reaction. He is hoping his mom is not at home so first he will make pallavi comfortable because it is visible she is not comfortable here. Unluckily his mom is at home and it is her who opens the door. When she opens the door she looks at them shockingly. This is first time he brings girl at home and she is more shocked when she saw suitcase. She got it idea and started to scold raghav and his friends


Amma : tu bhaga ke laya na isko? Yehich shikhaya hain maine tujhe? Itni kya jaldi thi. Pehle mujh se to baat kar lete aur tum log yeh to hain gadha tum log ne kyu nahi samjhaya isko.


Pallavi was getting more nervous and thought better to go away but someone called her name


Keerti : Pallavi Oh my god tum aur yaha. I can’t believe it. Amma yeh wohi hain jiske bare me maine aapko bataya tha. Anna ko takkar dene wali. Arre pallavi tum waha kya kar rahi ho darwaze pe chalo andar chalo.


Pallavi was hesitant to go with her and look at ragahv he just nodded. She drags pallavi with her and raghav can never be more than thankful to her.


Raghav : kya amma kitni baar bola itna TV show mat dekho. Woh dekh dekhkar hi aise khayal aate hain aapko. main usko bhaga ke nahi laya hain.


He looks at keerti’s room where she is talking with pallavi. When he knows pallavi is busy with keerti so he narrates whole story to her. Amma feel guilty and embarrass with her behaviour and apologize to him. She feels bad for pallavi and guilty for her behaviour.


Keerti and Pallavi come out from room.


Pallavi : I am sorry aunty aise aapke ghar aane ke liye. Main aap log ko aur takleef nahi dena chahti main ja rahi hu yaha se. Thanks Raghav and you all. Bye


Keerti is upset and Raghav try to stop her but it is amma who stop her


Amma : Pallavi beta mujhe maaf kar do


Pallavi : arre aunty aap sorry mat boliye. Main samaj sakti hu actually mujhe hi nahi aana chahiye tha aise


Amma : mujhe waise behave nahi karna chahiye tha lekin sari galti iss nalayak ki hain jisne mujhe kuch bataya nahi pehle.


Raghav : amma maine kya kiya. Aap hi drama queen bankar mere pe chadh gayi


Amma : tu chup kar waise to bada bolta hain lekin jab muh kholna hain tab kuch nahi bolte aur yeh tere dost woh bhi to bol sakte the


Farhad : amma humne kya kiya


Ved : haan hum to aap ko batane hi wale the


Amma : chup karo tum log. Yeh sab tumhara hi galti hain aur tum log abhi bhi yaha hi khada hain. Jao yaha se mujhe pallavi se baat karni hain


All left from there. Pallavi is looking at them amusing way. She can’t believe they are same people who show their power in college and here totally behaving like scary cat. This made her smile. Amma made pallavi sit.


Amma : mujhe raghav ne sab bata diya hain


Pallavi was feeling awkward and look at other side and Amma notice that and she smiles.


Amma : pallavi beta aise feel karne ka jarurat nahi hain. Jo tumhare saath hua hain woh galat hua hain. Tumko aise haar nahi man ni chahiye. Life me aisa hota hi hain jo humein todta hain lekin fir humare upar hain ke usse hum kaise lade. Uske against kaise fight kare. Maine bahut suna hain tumhare bare me keerti se aur tum to fighter hain. Main samaj sakti hoon ke kabhi kabhi aise hota hain ke fighter bhi toot jata hain lekin woh hota to fighter hi hain na. Tum fighter ho aur tum yeh sabke against pakka fight kar paogi. Bas tumhe apne aapko sambhalne ka jarurat hain. Thoda time lagega lekin tum pakka iss sab se bahar aa jaogi.


Amma’s words made her cry and amma hug her. Yes she needs this hug. So many things happen with her in last few weeks. She was totally lonely and fighting alone and her words are giving her strength. In her life she was always strong. She doesn’t remember when last time she cried. She made herself so strong there was no place of crying. She is fighter but last few days made her weakest person. She never thought she will ever try to kill herself like that. She is the person who stop others to take that drastic steps but yes this is life and we can’t imagine how it will take a turn. In such incidence we need our parents and friends who stand with us.


Pallavi : thanks aunty.


Amma : tum idhar rahega na?


Pallavi : lekin main yaha kaise?


Amma : dekho agar tum yaha nahi raha na to main samjega ke tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya


Pallavi : aisa nahi hain aunty. Theek hain main ruk jati hu. Jyada din nahi rahugi. Jaise mera kahi aur jagah ka intezam ho jayega to main chali jaugi


Amma : tumhe jitna din rehna hain utne din raho. Apna hi ghar samjana


Pallavi : thank you aunty


Amma : agar tum log ka hamara baat sunkar ho gaya ho to andar aa jao


All came inside.


Amma : Raghav aaj tum khana banayega


Raghav : lekin aaj mera nahi keerti ka turn hain


Amma : dekho raghav pallavi pehli baar aaya hain hamare ghar to usko accha khana khilane ka hain isi liye tum banayega keert nahi


Keerti was happy first later she understood her meaning.


Keerti : kya amma aap bhi na


Amma : kya main bhi. Woh sab chhodo tum pallavi ka help karo uska saman rakhne ke liye aur raghav tum jakar aaj ka dinner banao. Pallavi tum ko kya pasand hain khane me


Before Pallavi could answer raghav replied


Raghav : amma usko daal khichadi aur bhindi ki sabji jyada pasand aur bine tadke wali daal


Pallavi and others shocked to listen that. Raghav realised later that what blunder he made


Amma : tumko kaise pata

Raghav : woh bas aise hi guess kiya. Tum log yaha time pass kya kar rahe ho. Bahut der ho chuki hain. Keerti tumjao pallavi ki help karo aur ved farhad tum log chalo mere saath


Before anyone can ask him anything he left with his boys. Pallavi was still shocked and looking at raghav. How does raghav knows about her choice?


Farhad and ved was helping Raghav in kitchen and looking at him.


Raghav : tum log mujhe dekhna bandh kar ke kaam pe dhyan do aur fatafat khana banana hain.


No one ask him anything because they know he won’t tell them


In Keerti room


Keerti is really excited and making place for pallavi. She is saying how she is her fan and love the way she fight with other specially her brother and she wants to be like her only. Keerti is shy type and doesn’t open up to anyone and pallavi comes to know she is in her class only. She is feeling embarrassed that how she is praising her but she is really nice so her mom. No doubt principle was very confident to send her here. Raghav is still mystery. He is totally different here. Pallavi is smiling at her. She is cute. Only she knows her in different situation.


Keerti amma and Pallavi in room and Raghav Farhad and ved in kitchen.


Raghav : ladies agar aap log ka kitty party ho gaya ho to dinner ready hain jaldi aa jao


Raghav is busy in setting table. Pallavi is looking at him. 3 ladies sit down and all 3 were serving him. Keerti and raghav were having banter. When keerti eat hot food by mistake he was concern and gives her water. Amma asked all three to sit and eat. Vedant and Farhad refused because they will eat at home but Amma sternly ask them to sit. Pallavi is looking at them specially Raghav. She can’t believe they are same gang with whom she used to fight. They are totally different. They are like this or faking it in front of aunty. It likes she is in another world and they are aliens. She is not eating anything which is notice by amma.

Amma : kya hua pallavi? Pasand nahi aaya kya khana?


Pallavi : nahi actually main kuch soch rahi thi


Amma : sochna baad me pehle khana khalo


Pallavi : haan theek hain


When she looks at her plate she was shocked to see food. It is her favourite daal khichadi


Amma : khao beta. Jyada socho mat. Itna bura nahi banata hain khana raghav


Raghav : amma


Pallavi has first byte and Raghav is looking at her hopefully. With first byte pallavi looks at raghav who is already looking at her. She knows this taste but can’t remember. Not same taste but something is familiar. Pallavi gives raghav smile and it satisfied him and he smiles at her. She likes it. Good.


They all had fun while dinner.

Precap :-

Raghav’s meeting with principle and trustees and request to let pallavi complete her studies and he will prove her innocence. Vijay Deshmukh one of the trustee put condition if he won’t be able to prove pallavi’s innocence not only pallavi but he will also leave college.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Will read it before going to bed

will comment later 😉


Happy friendship day twinne thank you for updating this as my friendship day gift 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Superb update

Loved it

Hope Raghav will prove Pallavi's innocent

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