Kalma ff :- Mohabbat aasan Nahi...(collaborative ff) - Page 2

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Nice vanshu...... let's see where this story goes and how our love birds fall in love again

Yaa see where their journey takes them 😀😀

Originally posted by: Asha_Bisht

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Please continue 😁.

Originally posted by: Phlo

thank you priyu 😻😻

Ye idea family ko alga alag dikhane ka gayu ka tha

Chapter :- 1

A girl comes runningly in her home in Umar gao , ,Gujarat ..and hugs the elder person who is making something in kitchen

Girl:-" baba Kya bana rahe ho aap.."

Man:- "dekhle kya bana raha hoo.."

Girl :-" Meri favorite jalebi haina ..ye usiki khooshboo hai ..."

Man turns the knob of stove and hugs her daughter affectionately.

Man:- "meri dikri kalyani modi..ne poora Gujarat board top Kiya hai uskien liye Kam see Kam itna to Kar hi sakta hoo.."

Kalyani smiles at her father

Kalyani:- "to Atul modi..yani ki mere pyaare papa ne aaj apni pyaari si dikri ke liye ye jalebi banayi hai wahh bhai wahh.."

Her father laughed with her and taking the plate of jalebeis they comes out from the kitchen

They comfortably sit on sofa ...and kalyani enjoys her jalebi..

Kalyani:- "vese papa aapne aaj ye sab kyun Kiya ...aapne pichle hi hafte sab gaao valo ko bulakar itni badi party di thi .."

Atul:-" kyunki vo to mujhein sab gaao valo ke saath Meri dikri ki itni badi Khushi baatni thi ...par aaj mujhein Meri beti ke saath ye Khushi celebrate karni thi ...abb samajh aaya mahri pagal chokri.."

Kalyani:- "vo sab papa theekein hai...lekin Kal aap jante hai nayein ACP aarahe hai kuch nayein case le liye aap jabhi retirement apna unsien sign karwalenge main nahi chathi ki ab aapko aur kaam karn padein.."

Atul :- "kalyani beta dekh tu jaanti hai main Teri Khushi ke liye hi itni jaldi ye retirement lene ke liye Mana hoo par tu samajh na ki main abhi Thora aur waqt apne kaam ko Dena chatha hoo ..tu jaanti naye acp sahab bhi sirf ek naye mission ke liye AA rahe hai aur main unkein iss mission ka hissa baana chathaa hoon..."

Kalyani gets angry

Kalyani:: theekein kariye aapko Jo karna hai main hi paagal hoon Jo aapki chinta karti hoo isliye chathi hoo ki Kam se Kam abb aap aaram karein..she emotionally says

"Baba aaap humesha apne kaam main itne busy rahein ki aap aur main kabhi ek dusre ke liye samay nikal hi nahi paayein..Mera bachpan bhale hi Aapne kitna bhi pyaara banaya ho lekin aapkein uss waqt ki kami mujhein humesha khalti thi ..abb to aap Kam see Kam apni duty see free hokar mere saath thoda waqt bitayein ...isliye hi main chathi hoo ki aap aur main Pune chale jayein aur main apna doctor baane ka sapna bhi poora karoon..saath hi hum to baap beti ek dusre ke saath acha want bitayein..

Atul softly made her daughter understand

Atul:- kalyani dikra tu jaanti hai main Teri kitni parwaah karta hoo ..tujhein kitna pyaar karta hoo main bass ye mission poora karna chatha hoo uskien baad hum pakka Pune jaakr majje karnege..aur phir uskein baad Mera saara waqt tera hoga pakka promise ...

Kalyani after sometime of thinking agree for his father's happiness and hugs him

Kalyani::- "theekein lekin sirf iss baar hann ..uskien baad hum pakka chalenge Pune..mere college ka admission form bhi to aapko bharna hai mujhein scholarship mil gayi hai ..abb main aaram see padhai poori Kar paaongi.."

Atul:-" thank you mahri ladli...pakka iskein baad hamari sawari pune ke liye rawana hogi...aur main sabkein saamne Tere college main garv se kahoonga ki main kalyani modi ka pita hoo jiski dikri ne pora Gujarat top Kiya hai..."

They both laughed ...

Atul :- acha chal Kal naye acp aane wale hai...to main unkein swagat ki saari tayyari karta hoo ...Teri Usha kaaki aati hogi vo khaana banyegi to khaa Lena aur Meri maa Main bhi apna tiffin vaheen station main khaa loonga..

Kalyani:- "theek Chee...dhyaan rakh choo...aur samay par manne call karna..."

Atul left for the station and kalyani prayed to her thakurji...

Kalyani pov

Hey thakurji..mere papa aur iss mission ke saarien officers ki rakhsha karna ...aur Jo naye acp aane wale hai vo bass ache hoo..Jo iss mission ke baad mere papa ka resignation sign Kar dein..

On other side

Pune ; Maharashtra

Rane residence

A lady is making laadu for her son in a sad mood as tommorow he is going again on a dangerous mission and being a mother her child always aches thinking the upcoming worst results

Just then her younger son comes in kitchen to drink water and sees his mother in a sad mood ..he himself is feeling sad as his dada is leaving tomorrow again ..but to make his mother happy he cracks some jokes

Boy:- ohh ho aai...abb bass bhi Karo ye meenakumari baanna ... tumhare ladle bete bass thore din ke liye hi to jaa rahe Hain...aajeynge jaldi bass bhi karoon..

Lady:- bass atharav...iss baat pe koi majak nahi Mera beta ek to itne dangerous mission par jaa raha hai ...aur tujhein majak sujh Raha hai ...ek to Tere baba ko Kahan tha jaldi aajyein...par ye Hain ki abb Tak nahi aayein..

Atharv:- kyun apne pati ki jyaada yaad AA rahi a

Hai...he dramatically puts his hand on his forehead and says uff ye pyaar uff ye tadpan anupriya Rane ko sarthak Rane ki yaad satati hai..

Anupriya laughs on her son drama and taking the rolling pin in her hand he hit him lighlty with it

Anupriya:-" chup Kar badmash ..acha sun apne baba ko phone laga aur unhein keh jaldi aajayenge ...malhar raat ko hi nikal jayega jissien subah Tak pooch jayein ussein Kam see Kam vahin drop Kar denge airport Tak vaise to kisiki bhi maddat nahi lega..par phir bhi apne baba ki baat ko aasani see nahi taalta ..to Kya PTA maan jayein.."

Atharv:- theekien itne app jao apne bete ke pass vaise to vo ready ho hi gayein honge..par phir bhi unehin kisi help ki jarrorat hoo to Dekh loo app..

Anupriya:- jalkukda

Mother son duo have a cute fight and anupriya move towards her son room

In room

A man in his 20s is talking on a phone

Man :- "yes sir main aaj hi nikal raha hooo Umar gao ke liye aap chinta mat kijiye ..mujhein jiss kaam ke liye appoint Kiya hai vo main poora karke hi rahoonga ...you don't have to worry.."

Anupriya knocks on his door lightly and after cutting the phone he opens the door

Man :- kitni baar khaa hai aapsein..ki aap Bina knock kiyein aaa sakti hai andar ...

Anupriya:- are mujhein laga tumehin gussa aajyega..ki main tumhare kamre main aise Bina knock kiye aagayi Kal tumne atharav ko bhi kitna daanta tha..

Man :- "aai vo atharv mujhein irritate karta hai aakien disturb karta hai isliye Maine ussien bola tha ki vo knock karke aayein mere room main..."

Anupriya:: "acha Baba theekein hai tum dono Bhai Bhai ki baat main mein nahi boolongi...tum mujhein ye batao malhar ki tumhari saari tayyari ho gai jaane ke liye ...ya main kuch madaat karoon.."

Malhar:: "aai Saab ho Gaya hai ...bass main thodi der main nikalta hoo abhi bhi commsionner sahab ka phone tha ye poochne ke liye ki main nikala ya nahi..."

Anupriya::" vo sab theekin hai...tu do min ruk Tere baba aane wale hai kam see Kam unehin tujhein airport Tak hi drop karne dein ...pls main jaanti hoo tujehin nahi pasand kisiki madat Lena par pls iss baar Kam se kam apne baba ko saath leja pls.."

Malhar could deny her mother pleadings ,so he got agree to it and takes his bag with him they both descend the stairs where sarthak has already come and taking his car keys again from the pouch...

Malhar:: "baba aap abhi abhi aayein hai aur mujhein chodne jaa rahe hai main chla jaunga aap kyun pareshan ho rahe hai ..."

Sarthak:: ismein pareshani vali Kya baat Main apne bete ko drop Tak nahi Kar sakta Kya abb...

Malhar tried to deny him but his parents made him shut and anupriya brings the plate of aarti to do tilak of malhar ..

Anupriya:: sambhal ke jaana aur dhyaan rakhna pls...appna she gets emotional

Atharv also hugs his brother

Atharv:: "dada jaldi aana phir aapkein kamare main aakar hone wali vahini ki baat bhi to karni hai mujhein jaldi aana ..."

All laughed on him and malhar hugs his brother affectionately..

Malhar left with sarthak as he also gets emotional seeing all of them like this but controlling on himself he behave like normal

Sarthak dropped him to the airport and they comes out of the car

Sarthak:: jaldi aana mere sher tera intezaar karoonga...I know my son can do it ...by patting his back

Malhar nodded his head and left for the airport

Malhar pov

Jaanta hoo aap Sab kaisa feel Kar rahein hai par main kamzor nahi pad sakta ...malhar be ready for it ...

chapter ends!!

How was the first chapter??

Nice start Vanshi

Atul-Kallu ka part was so beautiful..

Initial episodes k atharv ki yaad dila do tune…

Rane family 👍🏼

Malharji is going on mission

Dekhte hai kaise mission complete hota…

Nice start banshu.....totally loved it

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Nice start Vanshi

Atul-Kallu ka part was so beautiful..

Initial episodes k atharv ki yaad dila do tune…

Rane family 👍🏼

Malharji is going on mission

Dekhte hai kaise mission complete hota…

Ye mission hi hamre kalma ki shaadi karwayega 😺😺

Originally posted by: Phlo004

thank you priyu 😘😘

Ye mission hi hamre kalma ki shaadi karwayega 😺😺

Kalma ki shadi

Very nice start Vanshu..

Kalyani aur uske Baba.. ❤️❤️

Rane family bhi awesome and well knit Hai..

Lovely update.

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Very nice start Vanshu..

Kalyani aur uske Baba.. ❤️❤️

Rane family bhi awesome and well knit Hai..

Lovely update.

I think sabko Malhar ki family simple and sweet chahiye thi...

Abb kon likhega next chapter maine apni update de di