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Posted: 4 years ago
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The uncovered distance


The whole scenario was unbelievably ugly.... Two lovers roped in one life .... Can they ever be separated... No not at all... Not until one of them wants.... Yeah no one can separate them except themselves.... He knew it will not be a happy ending but he never wanted a sad ending....


They were on the same bridge.... But the thing that matters is will they reunite....


The darkness wasn't giving anyone a clear view.... And the moon hadn't showed up till then... Nobody knew what the dark fate will bring to their life


She shouted at him " what happened today till yesterday everything was fine then why now why ??" She started sobbing..


His eyes wet but throat completely clear he spoke "because this is the tragedy of our story"


"Story?? Which story ?? It's reality Sakha Babu.... And reality never ends"she said with a broken voice..


"But this reality has to end .... You've to forget me.. At any cost" he said stammering a bit...


" The reality is the proof that Bondita Das can never forget Anirudh Roy Chaudhary" she said with a bleeding heart...


" Bondita Das control your feelings... You don't know the consequences will be severe..."


"I'll bear the consequences Anirudh Roy Chaudhary"


The night sky wasn't in a mood to see happiness... It had decided something dark and unexpected...


" Sakha Babu I love you like the earth loves the sky ... I'm incomplete without you... "


"Sakhi the sky also loves the earth and always looks at the earth but they also have a distance that is uncovered... which will remain uncovered... I love you too ... But... "


One loud bang but two lives...


What a moment the moon got to show up and they got the view... The most unexpected and saddest view...


"Somnath" said Anirudh horrified by the view...


"Chandrachur jomai babu" said Bondita horrified by the view...


Somnath had his gun triggered on Bondita's head while Anirudh's head had a triggered gun which belonged to Chandrachur... Both the triggers were already pressed...


The tragedy of the lovers...


The distance could never be covered... It always remained as the uncovered distance....


I don't pretend... I love you .... And I'll love you until I die... And if there's a life after that... Then I'll love you even more than now....

Bonjour readers 🤗

This is a sad one shot I've tried 😭

I hope you liked it 🤔

Do comment about your views 👍🏼

Till then

Happy reading ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Some more tags 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aise mt rulao😭

Nicely written:)

Def write more ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: shirin04

Aise mt rulao😭

Nicely written:)

Def write more ❤️

starting se hi happy happy wale os likh rahi thi toh socha thoda dukhbhari bhi likh dun

Thank you dear for your appreciation🤗

Yeah I'll continue to write more😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was very beautifully written. My heart breaks for the two lovers whose story ended in such tragedy. Please write more. I would love read more of your works. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smiley.6

It was very beautifully written. My heart breaks for the two lovers whose story ended in such tragedy. Please write more. I would love read more of your works. ❤️

thank you dear 🤗

Means a lot 👍🏼

Yup I'll also love to write more for you and others ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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SNAN!!!!!! EK HI DIL HAI, KITNI BAAR JEETOGI!!

this is a masterpiece❤️😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nish27

SNAN!!!!!! EK HI DIL HAI, KITNI BAAR JEETOGI!!

this is a masterpiece❤️😭

🤣🤣

Jitni baar dil karega utni baar jitungi aur jitti rahungi meri jaan ❤️❤️

Thank you for those lovely words 🤗

Means a lot Nish🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is so tragic but so well written. I have always been uneasy with Som's agression in the show after the leap. I hope they give him a redemption track

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Originally posted by: Guneet80

This is so tragic but so well written. I have always been uneasy with Som's agression in the show after the leap. I hope they give him a redemption track

thank you for the words Guneet🤗

Means a lot ❤️

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