Fatejo Short story on upcoming- WHAT'S GOING ON

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I work from home so took a little time for this during lunch break



WHAT'S GOING ON!


Beep!

His ear drums responding

Beep!

The sound was getting clearer and frequent .His head felt heavy like a rock resting on it. Struggling to open that sore eyes. Stinging sensation all over his body.

Tightness in joints and muscles.

He could see machineries all around him

What's going on!


Minutes later few faniliar faces turned up whom he recongnised immediately

His family!:

He was relief . He received warm gestures from all except for one that he could not recognise at all

Fateh!!

She cried holding his hand

Tum kaun ho!

He blurted nervously! Trying to remove his hands

She was shocked and so were the rest


Minutes later doctors revealed

Partial memory loss!

He cant recall recent happenings!

She ran as fast as she could towards the main entrance of the hospital with her sister in law rushing after her to console her

Fateh has forgotten me!

She had fallen for him

She was devastated

What's going on!


Flashback of three days

Fateh was driving speedily not being able to bear the pain of jasmin getting married to gippy. Their closeness affected him. He was pretending in front of his wife that he's moved on. He tried hard but could not. Jasmin was in him badly

With that reckless driving

Crash!

A major accident that almost took his life but he survived


Sandhus were shocked and upset

What will happen to tejo now!

Will he leave her!

Will he demand for jasmin!

What about gippy!

Thousands of questions


Sweetie tujhey peta hain fateh tejo ko bhul geya!

Jasmin excitedly rang her close friend

Her path was clear

He will come for her!

Yes!

I am so happy


The sandhus visited fateh at the hospital but jasmin was not permitted to which she was not affected thinking he will come looking for her eventually

Gippy was annoyed as he had stated falling for jasmin

What if fateh interferes!

Now that he cant recall his wedding with tejo


Two days later

He was glad to be home walking with the support from his family into his personal space once again and rested his head on that soft white pillow confused with recent details of memory erased

That woman !

Who.was she!

What's going on


She was back home with her family sobbing to her sorrows that her beloved husband could not even recall her

A huge sacrifice she made for family

Twice!

The first left her and ran away!

The second now has forgotten her!

What's going on!

The virks decided it would be better if tejo is away from him a while at least as doctors advised to refrain fateh from mental stress.

Sandhus were devastated. There were no end to her tears. Rupi was torn into pieces

Her destiny!


He looked around his room

Something was amiss!

He was restless!

Bhabhi key barey mey soch rehey ho !

Mahi walked into the room with a glass of juice

He was taken aback

Kya!

Mahi quickly closed the door of his room and sat next to him on the bed. She decided to take the opportunity to spill the half truth of his marriage desperately looking for an ways to unite the couple.

Apki shadi hogeyi hai!

She showed their marriage photos

He snatched the album from her hand immediately

That woman was his wife!

What's going on!


Then she explained how it was an arranged marriage as he was interested in her and sent a proposal to her family . Now she left as he's forgotten her

Mahi decided to take an advantage of his weak memory

He was confused

She did some crying drama to make him feel guilty

Emotional blackmail

It worked

He started crying as well

I proposed her and now i forgotten her!

Mahi was happy now

What are u waiting for!

Bring her back!

U can regain ur memory with her being around!


Four hours later

Sandhus were shocked to see him at their

Doorstep!

Buzo drove him as the location of their residence was erased from his memory

Tejo kahan hai!:


Virks were upset with mahi for her lies but on a second thought

Why not!

An opportunity to get them closer


He was sitting in the living room . Mahi rang her minutes ago and explained her plan. Requesting her to co operate

She was nervous and so were others

Jasmin!

Does he remember her!

Seconds later jasmin came down the staircase right after her watching him closely

Fateh!:

She blurted excitedly running towards him for a hug

A shameless creature!

Sandhus sighed

Who are u !

He asked moving away from the coach as she approached him

Shocked!

Tejo and her family

Fateh main jasmin!

She was devastated

Oh no! He forgotten me!

He moved away brushing her aside

Sandhus were relieved

He forgotten both!

Viraj rushed forward and took the screming jasmin away

Fateh moved forward as well taking tejo's hand enquiring

May i take my wife home with me!

Rupi deligjted

Yes take her now!

Will send her things later!


Amrik was warned not to mention anything about jasmn, to fateh

Virks played along well

Feeling relieved!


She was arranging the pillows on the bed which puzzled him to which she lied that he was not well and distance was required

He hesitated a while and then enquired

Suhaagraat ho geyi!

She was shocked

Nehin hui!

Shadi key do din baad apka accident ho geya!

He was puzzled and thought to himself

I was interested in her

Married her!

But never touched her!

Well i had two days before accident!

What was wrong me then!

Started questioning his being male capabilities finally surrendering to his sleep


She was restless. Sleeping next to a man who's memory been erased


As the hours past he was getting more and more attracted to her sweetness and charm

He decided to take her out

For a romantic date!


Ps

The best solution to end jasmin's obsession





















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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing hope it happens in show


I will be doing bhangra on this 🕺💃


Can you please continue this story 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gosh ur amazing how do you come up with ideas so quickly. It's amazing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Super duper man... amazing 😆

Jasmine se acha Fateh ki yaadash chali jaaye

I so wish we could see this, and Fatejo get a fresh chance to date each other and fall for each other.


Your writings are quite impromptu and provide the reader with what's actually missing in the show. Keep writing 👍🏼


Thank you for the tag 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mahi the saviour I think her and Buzzo have an important part to play in the fatejo union. In the show I would love them to team up for fatejo but want abhiraaj to get protective and give fateh a hard time koi toh hona chahiya to make sure he actually really loves her. He can't get her that easily like the first time.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Can you please please post a continuation of this please

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Posted: 4 years ago
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😂😂👌👌kaash aisa ho jaye

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gosh, if this happened then it would’ve been like a slap on chameli’s face! 🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear

There is no continuation

Well he will fall for her and by the time he remembers jasmin he wont be affected any longer

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear

Only one shot

No continuatiion

He will fall for her without disturbance of hers sisters delusions

Clear road

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