Proposal Night | A FaTejo OS

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I tried doing justice with my writing. I haven’t written before, my third time and the feedback that I’m getting is overwhelming. Thank you all so much. Hope this makes you smile, cause the current track of the show has probably sent most of our BP high. Have a lovely read and a wonderful day ahead.❤️


•𝕻𝖗𝖔𝖕𝖔𝖘𝖆𝖑 𝕹𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖙•


It was a year into their marriage. Jasmine was married to Gippy and she shifted to Canada. Fateh has moved on although he was heartbroken at the fact that Jasmine was now married and she wasn’t his wife. His wife—Tejo. His Tejo. The name alone would leave a bright smile plastered on his face.


A ray of sunshine, a ball of hope. That’s what she was in his life.


There she was standing next to Dadi in a red coloured saree, giggling away. Today was their first marriage anniversary. And to say he was nervous was understated. He wanted to make it special for her but he didn’t know how she felt. Would she reject or accept him— that was his biggest problem at hand. The second was how to muster the courage to get her to the terrace.


“Taking the risk with her is worth it,” he thought. He went to the terrace and shot a text to Dadi informing her that the plan is set to be in action.


Alright Tejo, I’m heading to bed now. I’m tired,” Dadi said. Tejo hummed in response and off went Dadi.


Hasn’t been a minute since everyone went off to bed when she heard a scream. Worried, she dashed outside. Again the scream came, this time from the terrace. Being a detective, she headed up the stairs and what she found there nearly rendered her unconscious.


Soft music started to play as she set foot onto the terrace. Looking around she found him standing in front of the arch that had portraits of them together and individually. A lone tear escaped her eye.


You came into my life uprooting everything in its place. You challenged my every being and made me into a better man. A man worthy of love. A man worthy to live. You have given me hope for a brighter tomorrow. You have brighten up my dull, boring life with your presence. Words fall short to describe your significance in my life. I’ve been dumb before, but hey, you’re a professor you’ve taught me many things.” He said holding her hands gently and looking into her eyes.


He continued,’without you, I don’t know the meaning of life. You have completed me truly. I may not be the man of your dreams but I’m willing to be him. For you, for us. What I’m about to say, you might not react the way I want you to but the decision is all yours. Only yours to take. Tejo, I- I…


What is it, Fateh?” she said even though she was fully aware of his intentions.


I- I…I need some water,” he said nervously and she giggled. Leaving her hands, he went towards the small table that was there.


He came back towards but the words were at the tip of his tongue and they just won’t come out. What happened next skyrocketed his senses and he, this time was the one who was surprised.


I love you, Fateh,” she said shyly whilst being bold at the same time. His eyes nearly popped out of their sockets. He hugged her so tight as though she was an illusion and if he only loosen his hold, she would disappear.


And I love you too, Tejo,” he replied as he breathe into her neck.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful fam! 🥺I'm so happy to see the babies happy together as they should be. It's relieving to know that Jasmine left their lives and Fateh finally moved on! I'm so glad to see these two kids in love, and that they're building a brighter future for themselves. I hope we get to see something like this on the show too. Thank you for writing this sis! It made me super happy 💜💖

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aww this is so cute... I hope it happens in the show as well!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

This is beautiful fam! 🥺I'm so happy to see the babies happy together as they should be. It's relieving to know that Jasmine left their lives and Fateh finally moved on! I'm so glad to see these two kids in love, and that they're building a brighter future for themselves. I hope we get to see something like this on the show too. Thank you for writing this sis! It made me super happy 💜💖

Thank you so much♥️Truly means a lot coming from you. Appreciate your feedback. Hopefully we get to see something cute then too once all of the Jasmine’s drama is over.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovereading14

Aww this is so cute... I hope it happens in the show as well!

Thank you so much. Means a lot💓

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's amazing very beautifuly written but I guess it's just me acting weird . I don't know why but since the last two days have stopped liking fatejo. I never liked fateh but now i despise him and I never want my Tejo sunshine to end up with a second douchebag like him. She should get someone who loves her for what and who she is and not for what she has to offer him. With fateh after yesterday and today episode fiasco I can never view them in a positive light. In my eyes Tejo for fateh will always remain a rebound and an rejected option. I want her to diss his existence which any way is a shame to mankind and move on but guessing that it's itv hence it's not happening. I only held on to the fatejo ship bcaz of Tejo but now I'm setting her up with Mr gulati.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

It's amazing very beautifuly written but I guess it's just me acting weird . I don't know why but since the last two days have stopped liking fatejo. I never liked fateh but now i despise him and I never want my Tejo sunshine to end up with a second douchebag like him. She should get someone who loves her for what and who she is and not for what she has to offer him. With fateh after yesterday and today episode fiasco I can never view them in a positive light. In my eyes Tejo for fateh will always remain a rebound and an rejected option. I want her to diss his existence which any way is a shame to mankind and move on but guessing that it's itv hence it's not happening. I only held on to the fatejo ship bcaz of Tejo but now I'm setting her up with Mr gulati.


You’re speaking on behalf of the entire FaTejo FD lol. So true though, Fateh doesn’t deserve Tejo. Their friendship phase was beautifully written and they had cute moments until they got married. That is when Fateh finally became the douche that he is. Totally useless! I have actually began writing another where she leaves his pathetic self though and prioritize herself and well being. In most ITV shows, the woman always has to adjust and compromise and I definitely don’t want that for Tejo. Also thank you so much💓means so much😇

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ur welcome and keep going ur doing great. Plus read my os and ff as well. I've posted them on the forum. I hope u enjoy them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mandy_21

Thank you so much♥️Truly means a lot coming from you. Appreciate your feedback. Hopefully we get to see something cute then too once all of the Jasmine’s drama is over.


Awww fam 🥺 you’re welcome! 🤗


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