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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ok so this is just a random thought about the possible story ahead that came to my mind after today's last scene and precap. I'm not a proper writer so don't know if I'd be able to pull of a full fledged OS by myself.. so let's all of us together write something on this background. Hope you all like it!

Shiva convinces raavi that krish has identity crises

Raavi feels sympathetic towards him and let's him be to give krish the space and help shiva in making krish come back to normal

In the process she allows krish to use her jewellery and stuff

So at night when krish wearing raavi jewelry goes to scare rishita and drops one earring there

Rishita finds it in the morning and knows that it's raavi's

She insults raavi in front of the whole family that she's the one scaring her to take revenge

Raavi thinks that it was krish in his identity crisis doing all that

Shiva takes stand for raavi

But raavi in order to protect krish takes the blame on herself

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Let's get started!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

"Ye kya haai, yeh Raavi ki jhumke hai. Yaha kya kar rahi hai ?"

Rishita thought back to last night when she got scared out of her wits but nobody believed her.


Aisa to nahi, ki yeh sab Raavi ne kia hai ! Taki woh mujhse badla le sake ! Abhi dekhte hu, mein kya karne wali hu uske saath !

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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

Krish was searching for some makeup products and jewellery on Raavi's dressing table. He had asked Shiva to keep an eye on the door but he got a call and went away to answer it. Just then Raavi came inside the room and caught krish red handed.

Raavi asked him, "Krish tu yahan kya kar raha hai?"

"Ku-ku kuch nahi bhabhi" krish answered nervously. Hiding the makeup and other things in his hand behind himself.

"Kuch dhoondh raha tha kya? Kuch chahiye toh mujhe bata mai deti hoon"

"Nahi bhabhi mai toh bas shiva se baat karne aya tha par woh hai nahi yahan, mai bahar dekhta hoon" krish said making his way out the room and trying his best that raavi doesn't see the things he's trying to hide, but to no avail!

Just when he was leaving raavi caught his hand and asked "yeh piche kya chhupaya hai? Dikha mujhe!"

Krish tried to avoid the topic but raavi was stern. He had to show it to her otherwise she may tell someone. So he put his hand out and showed her the stuff.

Raavi was stunned for a second and couldn't say anything. Krish was also confused and terrified and couldn't think of what to do next now that he's almost caught. So before raavi could start shooting her questions at him he just ran away. Raavi ran behind him.

In the passage, Shiva was coming back to the room when he saw krish running and raavi chasing him..

She was screaming,, "krish rukk ja, krish rukk ja"

Shiva caught hold of krish for a second and raavi also came and told him "Shiva dekh, ye krish mera makeup aur gehne lekar ja raha hai"

Shiva sensed that this bewakoof krish had almost got caught.. so a plan for damage control creeped his mind.. he left krish and signalled him to run away.

Edited by Sakmen - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

My stomach is hurting🤣🤣

So damn funny... I wish this story never ends...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

This has to be the best horror/comedy story that I have read..

Poor Shiva. One side Krish other side Raavi.. poor guy has to carry both...

Shiva is really something else he thought the lady is Dhara Bhabi..

Everyone saw Kesar...

I loveeeeeddd the last part...

Shiva and Rishita starts everywhere to fight. The dont look where they are...

Cant wait for the next chapter..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Kesar ne bhi ghutne tek diye shivi ke aage


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Fantastic update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Sakmen

Krish was searching for some makeup products and jewellery on Raavi's dressing table. He had asked Shiva to keep an eye on the door but he got a call and went away to answer it. Just then Raavi came inside the room and caught krish red handed.

Raavi asked him, "Krish tu yahan kya kar raha hai?"

"Ku-ku kuch nahi bhabhi" krish answered nervously. Hiding the makeup and other things in his hand behind himself.

"Kuch dhoondh raha tha kya? Kuch chahiye toh mujhe bata mai deti hoon"

"Nahi bhabhi mai toh bas shiva se baat karne aya tha par woh hai nahi yahan, mai bahar dekhta hoon" krish said making his way out the room and trying his best that raavi doesn't see the things he's trying to hide, but to no avail!

Just when he was leaving raavi caught his hand and asked "yeh piche kya chhupaya hai? Dikha mujhe!"

Krish tried to avoid the topic but raavi was stern. He had to show it to her otherwise she may tell someone. So he put his hand out and showed her the stuff.

Raavi was stunned for a second and couldn't say anything. Krish was also confused and terrified and couldn't think of what to do next now that he's almost caught. So before raavi could start shooting her questions at him he just ran away. Raavi ran behind him.

In the passage, Shiva was coming back to the room when he saw krish running and raavi chasing him..

She was screaming,, "krish rukk ja, krish rukk ja"

Shiva caught hold of krish for a second and raavi also came and told him "Shiva dekh, ye krish mera makeup aur gehne lekar ja raha hai"

Shiva sensed that this bewakoof krish had almost got caught.. so a plan for damage control creeped his mind.. he left krish and signalled him to run away.

"Krish ruk", Raavi said but Shiva grabbed her hand.

"Shiva tu samaj nahi raha .Maine Krish ko kal bindi aur kajal pehne dekha tha. Aaj woh make up saaman le raha tha. Mujhe uses baat karni hai."

Shiva made her sit down and told her, "Mai jaanta hun pagli . Woh Krish ko na identity crisis hua hai. I Usse ladkiyon wale kapde pehen ko mann kar raha hai."

Raavi looked at him wide-eyed. "Koi nahi, family iss liye toh hoti hai. Usse kuch bi chahiye ho ta baat karni ho woh mujhse keh sakta hai. Usse akela bilkul feel nahi hone de sakte."

And Shiva felt a twinge in his chest at her innocence and whole hearted acceptance for his family.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Even bhoot bhi pandya family ko nhi jhel paayi😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakmen

Krish was searching for some makeup products and jewellery on Raavi's dressing table. He had asked Shiva to keep an eye on the door but he got a call and went away to answer it. Just then Raavi came inside the room and caught krish red handed.

Raavi asked him, "Krish tu yahan kya kar raha hai?"

"Ku-ku kuch nahi bhabhi" krish answered nervously. Hiding the makeup and other things in his hand behind himself.

"Kuch dhoondh raha tha kya? Kuch chahiye toh mujhe bata mai deti hoon"

"Nahi bhabhi mai toh bas shiva se baat karne aya tha par woh hai nahi yahan, mai bahar dekhta hoon" krish said making his way out the room and trying his best that raavi doesn't see the things he's trying to hide, but to no avail!

Just when he was leaving raavi caught his hand and asked "yeh piche kya chhupaya hai? Dikha mujhe!"

Krish tried to avoid the topic but raavi was stern. He had to show it to her otherwise she may tell someone. So he put his hand out and showed her the stuff.

Raavi was stunned for a second and couldn't say anything. Krish was also confused and terrified and couldn't think of what to do next now that he's almost caught. So before raavi could start shooting her questions at him he just ran away. Raavi ran behind him.

In the passage, Shiva was coming back to the room when he saw krish running and raavi chasing him..

She was screaming,, "krish rukk ja, krish rukk ja"

Shiva caught hold of krish for a second and raavi also came and told him "Shiva dekh, ye krish mera makeup aur gehne lekar ja raha hai"

Shiva sensed that this bewakoof krish had almost got caught.. so a plan for damage control creeped his mind.. he left krish and signalled him to run away.

Krish ran away immediately

"Shiva rok isse, yeh ladkiyon ki cheezein kyu chura raha hai, maine kal raat ko bhi iske paas aisi cheezein dekhi thi aur isne kal maathe par bindi bhi lagayi thi, yeh kya kar raha hai yeh sab?"

Shiva was perplexed as to what to answer,he thought for a second and then snapped at her " Aye maami ki behen ki beti, maami ke ghar se peti bhar ke makeup ka saaman laayi hai, thoda sa krish ne le liya toh kya aafat aa gayi.. aur maine hi usse kaha tha humare kamre se saaman lene ke liye"

"Tune? Tune kyu kaha hai aisa? Pehle wahan terrace pe tu usse woh ajeeb sa dance karwa raha tha aur ab yeh makeup.. kya chal kya raha hai tumhara.. Shiva tere dimaag mein zaroor koi khurafat chal rahi hai.. kya hai bata mujhe?"

"Ae chipkali ye zada na biwi biwi mat khel mere saath aur hum dono bhai kuch bhi kare tujhe usse kya?!"

"Acha theek hai mai abhi jaake dhara di ko sab batati hu, fir tu unhe hi dena saare jawaab"

Shiva got scared, he couldn't let her tell this to his bhabhi, else his plan would fail. He held her by her hand and pulled her closer to himself.

"Acha rukk, mai sab bata dunga, lekin pehle tu promise kar ki kisi aur ko nahi batayegi"

"Aise kaise promise karu, yeh toh teri baat pe depend karta hai na ki kisi ko batani hai ya nahi, pehle tu puri baat bata"

Shiva making a very serious face makes her sit on the nearest sofa and sits beside her.

"Dekh yeh krish ki zindagi ka sawaal hai isliye mai nahi chahta ki yeh kisi ko pata chale. Gaumbi aur bhabhi ko toh bilkul nahi, kyuki woh dono tension mein aa jayenge aur mai unhe bilkul tension mein nahi dekh sakta"

Raavi gets tensed and then asks him " Zindagi ka sawaal, aisa kya ho gaya?"

"Woh kya haina krish ko identity crises ho gaya hai, usse lagne laga hai woh ladka nahi ladki hai, usse ladko ki tarah rehna, kapde pehenne bilkul pasand nahi ab usse ladkiyo ki tarah rehna pasand hai, isliye woh idhar udhar se makeup chura ke apne kamre me ladki banne ki acting karne laga hai"

Raavi was shocked and at the same time worried about krish, "Hey Somnath, yeh sab kaise hua aur kab se? Pehle toh krish bilkul theek tha fir achanak? Aur hum usse theek kaise karenge?"

Shiva was happy that his plan was working but at the same time he was impressed to see how his chipkali worried about his brother.

"Theek kaise karenge yeh toh pata nahi, par abhi ke liye krish ko wo sab karne dete hain jo uska mann karta hai, agar zor zabardasti karenge toh uske dimaag pe iska galat asar padh sakta hai"

Raavi nodded, " haan tu theek keh raha hai, mai isme teri puri madad karungi krish ko theek karne mein"

Shiva's heart skipped a beat to see how innocent his maami ki behen ki beti was and it was so easy to convince her.. he couldn't take his eyes off her for few seconds.. and then breaking the trance told her, "kisi ko batana mat abhi, theek hai?"

Raavi nodded in yes and said " tu chinta mat kar yeh secret hum dono ke beech hi rahega"

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakmen

Krish ran away immediately

"Shiva rok isse, yeh ladkiyon ki cheezein kyu chura raha hai, maine kal raat ko bhi iske paas aisi cheezein dekhi thi aur isne kal maathe par bindi bhi lagayi thi, yeh kya kar raha hai yeh sab?"

Shiva was perplexed as to what to answer,he thought for a second and then snapped at her " Aye maami ki behen ki beti, maami ke ghar se peti bhar ke makeup ka saaman laayi hai, thoda sa krish ne le liya toh kya aafat aa gayi.. aur maine hi usse kaha tha humare kamre se saaman lene ke liye"

"Tune? Tune kyu kaha hai aisa? Pehle wahan terrace pe tu usse woh ajeeb sa dance karwa raha tha aur ab yeh makeup.. kya chal kya raha hai tumhara.. Shiva tere dimaag mein zaroor koi khurafat chal rahi hai.. kya hai bata mujhe?"

"Ae chipkali ye zada na biwi biwi mat khel mere saath aur hum dono bhai kuch bhi kare tujhe usse kya?!"

"Acha theek hai mai abhi jaake dhara di ko sab batati hu, fir tu unhe hi dena saare jawaab"

Shiva got scared, he couldn't let her tell this to his bhabhi, else his plan would fail. He held her by her hand and pulled her closer to himself.

"Acha rukk, mai sab bata dunga, lekin pehle tu promise kar ki kisi aur ko nahi batayegi"

"Aise kaise promise karu, yeh toh teri baat pe depend karta hai na ki kisi ko batani hai ya nahi, pehle tu puri baat bata"

Shiva making a very serious face makes her sit on the nearest sofa and sits beside her.

"Dekh yeh krish ki zindagi ka sawaal hai isliye mai nahi chahta ki yeh kisi ko pata chale. Gaumbi aur bhabhi ko toh bilkul nahi, kyuki woh dono tension mein aa jayenge aur mai unhe bilkul tension mein nahi dekh sakta"

Raavi gets tensed and then asks him " Zindagi ka sawaal, aisa kya ho gaya?"

"Woh kya haina krish ko identity crises ho gaya hai, usse lagne laga hai woh ladka nahi ladki hai, usse ladko ki tarah rehna, kapde pehenne bilkul pasand nahi ab usse ladkiyo ki tarah rehna pasand hai, isliye woh idhar udhar se makeup chura ke apne kamre me ladki banne ki acting karne laga hai"

Raavi was shocked and at the same time worried about krish, "Hey Somnath, yeh sab kaise hua aur kab se? Pehle toh krish bilkul theek tha fir achanak? Aur hum usse theek kaise karenge?"

Shiva was happy that his plan was working but at the same time he was impressed to see how his chipkali worried about his brother.

"Theek kaise karenge yeh toh pata nahi, par abhi ke liye krish ko wo sab karne dete hain jo uska mann karta hai, agar zor zabardasti karenge toh uske dimaag pe iska galat asar padh sakta hai"

Raavi nodded, " haan tu theek keh raha hai, mai isme teri puri madad karungi krish ko theek karne mein"

Shiva's heart skipped a beat to see how innocent his maami ki behen ki beti was and it was so easy to convince her.. he couldn't take his eyes off her for few seconds.. and then breaking the trance told her, "kisi ko batana mat abhi, theek hai?"

Raavi nodded in yes and said " tu chinta mat kar yeh secret hum dono ke beech hi rahega"

Hello folks, despite having been on indiaforums for almost a year, this is my first work, partial work, here. I don't normally write despite being obsessed with the written word so I'm not sure how this will be. Also hindi is not my first language, so please correct me if I make any mistakes.

The night of Kesar's trick

Raavi couldn't sleep. Something was wrong and she hadn't been able to figure out what it was. Well, really, a lot was wrong.

Krish was having an identity crisis. Her nanha munha sa devar was having an identity crisis, and the person he'd gone to was Shiva, of all people. The bhoothnath loved his family, no doubt about that, but he wasn't really the easiest to open up to for anyone, least of all for Krish, who Shiva had always made sure to be strict with when it came to serious matters. Come to think of it Dhara di would have been a much better option.

She shifted around once more then decided to get up, atleast she could go see what had happened to that bhoothnath. He had run away the moment she'd agreed to go to sleep. His teda dhimaag was surely up to something.

As she walked around wondering where he might have gone, she decided to check the kitchen, because of course, jungli ko bookh lagi hogi, to socha hoga ki raat ko bacha hua khaana ko waste kyun karun, pet to bhar leti hoon.

She was almost at the kitchen when she heard the sound of payals and froze. Jo saaya Rishita ko dhikaayi, kahin vo sach mein vo das saal puraani Kesar to nahin!!

She decided to not risk it and run to the kitchen for Shiva when she heard a scream, Arrey, par vo to Rishita ki aawaaz thi, kahin usne phir se kuch dekhe ghabraa to nahin gayi.

She had taken off at a run towards where she heard Rishita's voice, only to find nearly the whole family there already.

"Raavi, yahan aa, jaldi aa" Dhara di called her. "Ye phir se kuch dekhe ghabraa gayi hai. Dev, kahan the tum, tune kyun use aise raat mein akele ghoomne di? Aur Shiva, Gaumbi, aap donon ne achi tarah se check ki na? Koi bhi nahin hai, hain naa. "

"Insaan nahi tha, Raavi, insaan nahi tha. Vo Kesar tha Raavi, samjao sabko, please" Rishita said as Raavi laid her head on her lap.

Scared she looked towards Shiva only to see him look away as if he had been caught red-handed doing something wrong. She looked away, wondering what on earth was going on in that bhoothnath's head when she realised who wasn't there.

Krish!! Her nanha sa devar was having an identity crisis, wasn't present at the site of crime giving a live commentary like always, and Shiva looked worried.

She looked at him again and catching his eye, mouthed "Shiva, Krissh". His eyes widened as he realised the same thing I had, Krish wasn't here. Hey bholenath, yeh kaunsa naya khaand ho gaya. Ab agar kisi ko uspe shak hua, to poora ka poora sach kholna padega!!

The end

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