MHRW drabble : Reset - Page 8

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Yeah, but usually I get the feelings when I read right or wrong and here what I got from Pallavi was, she forgot Raghav, and happily leading a life with Mandhaar, didn't even feel a bit that she remembers R. May be I can blame the Romantic P and M for this. If you had added a girl here in R's life I wouldn't have felt anything like this.

Absolutely, I'm a bit extra in everything.

Atleast both got closure... happy ending.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

naive for believing first two...

You really think I believe things coming out of you

Originally posted by: Prriyam

M brings out wonderful emotions in you. For someone who is dead, and not much known about!

Interesting!

Its not M.... but this frustration is for technical team. M arc is very important and should be there for closure. The way it being pushed nd merged shows y Sickand's shows don't last much long... he maybe good at many things but not in how to tell a story.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

You really think I believe things coming out of you

dn I m naive....

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

dn I m naive....

That I can agree.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

u really think I would waste a sec on M even for writing dialogue.

And it was even though for fun, I was trying new technique of writing. Just parallel progression more like monologues but in speech form. Wanted to use for a proper OS. Good for keeping writing bit new nd interesting. Here it didnt came out that good.

Now I want to read an OS of P and M from you, may be on their video call. 😆

Yeah, I noticed that. With frist dialogue it was normal but with Pallavi taking M's name it got abnormal. Then I got that they were at different places, not related. Nice technique.

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

That I can agree.

Now u cn see d reason right.... y i don't remember u...

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Now I want to read an OS of P and M from you, may be on their video call. 😆

Yeah, I noticed that. With frist dialogue it was normal but with Pallavi taking M's name it got abnormal. Then I got that they were at different places, not related. Nice technique.

Not possible.

Yes I m not sure where I read this technique but always wanted to write something using it. This seems very different.

This wasn't just a work. It was a masterpiece . So can't able to gather strength to tag u guys.

Was jst a fun thing. Will tag u fr sure if will write something serious.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Now u cn see d reason right.... y i don't remember u...

Did you just forget the fact that you are the one who tagged me here? You can't forget me, that's the truth.